So What's The Excuse This Time? · 1:18am Oct 25th, 2012
What's going on with chapter 3? Long and short of it is that I would up really dispising the way it ended. I focused too much on the story and let the characterizations go by the wayside.
When an OC get more speaking lines than most of the Main Six, you know something is wrong. Hell, Bon Bon herself had little more than twice the lines Fluttershy had! Rewriting is the best, but I don't want to give the people who are actually liking this story nothing but a "Sorry, my bad", so Chap 3.1 is going up for now. Somethings I had only planned for Hal's letter to Celestia are actually going to be in the main narrative, while others (Pinkie Pie's Party) are replacing them.
It's not what I promised I know, but I wanted to give the (as of now) 94 people who've faved this story something. I really do appreciate people who've decided to read this, regardless on whether or not they liked it.
I'm gonna stop making promises that I'm not sure I'll be able to keep, but I will aim for the rest of the chapter going up sometime this weekend or Monday.
Apologizes in advance.
