Night Reigns Updated

I've finished my first pass through the entire story and uploaded the improved text -- the changes cover hundreds of little points in every chapter. Some punctuation, some grammar, deleted some minor unnecessary text and slipped a little more explanation of later events into the earlier chapters. It flows a little better.

At this point I'm considering what would be called in my world "Release Candidate 1". I don't intend to make any more major changes - which means the shifts that the story takes remain (but are hopefully better telegraphed, at least). I've got another print copy on its way to me so I can read through it again - it should be faster this time without needing to make so many markups. If there's nothing major in there, then I'll call it done.

On that note - I sort of relied on the FimFiction editor importing from Google Docs (hey! It worked this time!), so I didn't proofread the upload too closely. If you notice anything obviously messed up, please let me know?

Any more coming? I don't know. I set up the story to allow for sequels as a joke, but I'm pretty tempted. Still, I have a lot of projects I need to get done, and I'm happy to have finished one story, at least. :)