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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Thursday
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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    7 comments · 160 views
  • 2 weeks
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 3 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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    4 comments · 130 views
  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Jan
15th
2018

Announcing Change of Ownership for Turnabout Storm... · 8:54pm Jan 15th, 2018

To all Turnabout Storm readers:

As of today, the Turnabout Storm novelization belongs to me! RavenRegios has very graciously agreed to pass me ownership as she sadly no longer has time to attend to her stories or fimfiction account. :ajsleepy:

For those who are unaware, Raven first began the herculean task of writing the novelization in 2012, and I came on as editor in late 2013, fixing up earlier chapters and then taking over the writing duties from her starting with part 44. The first 43 chapters were written by Raven and then heavily edited/modified by me; afterwards it was almost entirely me with an occasional contribution from co-writer Leo Archon, who has assisted me on other works, and even The Voice™ of Phoenix Wright himself, aka TheGoldCrow, offered feedback and contributed a couple sections here and there.

It was a mark of Raven’s trust and friendship that she allowed me to take over the story and expand on it as I did, turning it from a simple retelling of the videos into the much more expanded version you see now. I’m very proud of this story; one I personally spent over two years on and Raven even longer. It was a labor of love for all of us; I daresay it consumed me for long stretches of time. And one that I am forever grateful Raven allowed me to indulge in. I enjoyed it greatly; possibly more than any piece of writing I’ve ever done.

That said, let it be known here and now that I am the one to credit or blame for all the added content; for all the various new scenes and subplots, including the Phoenix/Twilight ship. For those who are unaware, I already addressed the various controversies in the following blog posts:

  1. https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/475549/the-great-ship-sets-sail:
  2. https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/478470/an-apology-to-neoartimus
  3. https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/479968/the-turnabout-storm-novelization-revisited

All that, however, is in the past at this point. So what are my plans going forward? Well, first and foremost, Turnabout Storm is getting a fresh coat of paint in the form of a full editing pass and overhaul in places. Site updates several months ago broke the formatting schemes the story was using, resulting in a lot of color bleed, and Raven simply didn’t have time to go through and fix everything. So that’s up first. I am also going to go through chapter by chapter and make some content updates: find typos, fix any broken links, and make changes to a few things that are bugging me. Some of you will be happy to know that I plan to tone down the Frozen references and use a lighter touch on the shipping early. There is even a chance for some new content; an additional bonus chapter MAY be released on the occasion of the three-year anniversary of the main story’s completion in April. Leo and I are currently batting around ideas for that.

I have more to say, but this will do for now. Just wanted to let everyone know about the change in ownership, and that the story is going to undergo some updates soon. On behalf of Raven and myself, and indeed, on behalf of everyone who contributed to this story as prereader or writer including TheGoldCrow, Leo Archon and AJ_Aficionado, thanks for following, and thanks for all the comments that were left on the story. The most fun I had during this entire story was reading them and seeing all the enjoyment and discussion it provoked. I will let folks know as chapters update and in general terms the changes made.

An additional blog will be posted tomorrow detailing the status of the various side stories and still-planned sequel. Until then, take care, and thanks again, Raven!

Comments ( 7 )

Yikes, hunting through 400k+ words for broken formatting is a real task.

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Agreed, I would likely throw something at some point.

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Thats why he has a team helping him

Good luck I hope that reformating goes well for you and the team! :pinkiehappy:

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As Silentwoodfire says, I have the help of my full prereading team, whom I forever grateful for. I've also got Grammarly, which can pick up on and fix a lot of issues. it's not perfect, but it does nail most of the grammar and spelling mistakes.

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Indeed I do. And believe me, it is appreciated that you guys pitch in an d help out!

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Thanks! Updates will follow as we work our way through.

Wow, what an honor.

Well said, partner.

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