The next chapter - 20/01/2017 · 6:22am Jan 20th, 2017
Coming to you through the internet with words in a box!
Chapter 4.5 "Before the Line" (working title, may change when made live) is...kind of almost done. I wanted it to be a relatively short chapter so I could upload in with chapter 5. At the moment, I've written it out in three parts and I've been reading over it and it feels like it could use some more words and... just generally more. (Boo..)
I guess I feel I'm airing on the side of caution - between out right saying things and showing things. If I say an happy apple is an happy apple then the mystery has been solved then and there, suspense gone. But If I say the apple is standing around by itself as the sun crests the horizon and brighten its face. There'a a little interruption dance to be done. That's a more interesting read I think.
...or something...
That's where my mine is at. Not apples specifically - that was just an example. Long story, short, I'm breaking for the day, get some other things done. I would like come back to this before tomorrow but I promised myself to only write at least three (3) hours a day to a maximum of eight (8). That's my goal for writing in mind for this. I don't wont to let the writing process consume my time and get me all bummed out like it has previously. So I'm organising/structuring myself a bit better this year ^_^
Till the next post. Stay frosty.
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MS
