Review #6 - No Place Like Nowhere, Rest in Chaos · 6:01pm Nov 30th, 2016
This time I have:
No Place Like Nowhere by CoffeeBean
Rest in Chaos by DannyJ
No Place Like Nowhere by CoffeeBean
(Adventure, Dark, Mystery)
Princess Cadence and Flurry Heart wake up… Somewhere
Takes place 16 years in the future.
Review
Cadence and Flurry wake up in the woods not knowing how they got there. They find a village of bat ponies and a good Nightmare Moon. They go home.
This has fairly good pacing, though there is a lot of filler. It has very very few errors in it’s text. It also feels very planned out, though a weak-seeming plot line. Furthermore, all it’s tags seem to fit.
Score: 7.5/10 Recommendation: Worth reading.
Personal Thoughts: A rather good story, but with a predictable plot.
Rest in Chaos by DannyJ
(Comedy, Dark, Random)
How would a being like Discord want to be remembered after he's gone? Well, if you're curious, he did actually write a will. To the surprise of nobody, its contents are bizarre and mildly disturbing.
Review
Discord died and wrote a letter about his funeral services, and who is going to be the next spirit of chaos for awhile.
This one has… interesting pacing. That is all I can come up with for it. The story has few errors in the text. However, it does not seem planned out so much. Though it’s tags fit except for maybe “Comedy,” it just wasn’t that funny.
Score: 6.5/ 10 Recommendation: Not recommended.
Personal Thoughts: All I can come up with is, interesting.
An extremely apt review of my story, I feel. Thanks for the review; this is the first official review of any of my works! Also, glad to see you enjoyed it.