Nov
16th
2016
Comments · 6:58pm Nov 16th, 2016
Hi guys, it's grl6p. I want to talk about comments I have getting on 'Where are You Christmas'. I understand that they are just constructive criticism, but sometimes they can take a hit on my self-esteem. I have autism and sometimes it is very hard to take criticism from other people. It really upsets me. I have been working very hard on my story and I like to get positive reinforcement to keep going. Even if you don't listen to this, thank you for understanding.
-grl6p
Okay, may I say something?
First off, I give much praise to you for referencing the song "Where Are You Christmas?" - I included a link to it in my own Anon-A-Miss story, and it's nice to see that we were on the same page with it. As for the story itself, I can't blame Sunset for being angry - she's got every justification for being pissed off. I'll be keeping an eye on it to see how it goes.
Second, the story isn't bad by any stretch. I do think, however, that at some point, it would be a good idea for you to go back and edit it. Every story could use the odd bit of touching up in my opinion, and it certainly doesn't hurt them to get it.
Just putting that out there. Not meaning to be cruel, as I know what it's like to get discouraging commentary on a story (nearly twenty years of fanfic writing will do that for you), I'm just airing my thoughts.
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Thx for the advice
4318755 Hey, I've been around the block a few times too. Never hurts to try and help someone out.