TThe Dragon King's Rebirth
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Slice of Life
(2nd person story). You are the Dragon King, feared throughout the world until your reign of terror crosses into Equestria. A fateful battle against the Alicorn sisters leads to your death, or so it seems.
Second Person
Luna
OC
CMCs
Rumble
Sipioc · 46k words · 414 21 · 5.8k views

Dragon King Rebirth - Sneak peak? · 3:57pm Aug 2nd, 2016

Hey all,

Just like title says, I am wondering if anyone would be interested in a sneak peak of the next chapter. I am about 900 words in, and my usual chapter length puts that at about a quarter done.

I am sorry this is taking me forever, it's just that I ....make excuses for procrastinating.

Anyway here is a piece:

There was nothing. A vast expanse of space that was black as a moonless night. The sky, vacant of any stars making it all the more hollow and empty. A light mist clung to the ground, creating the only discernible separation of earth and sky.
There was nothing. Nowhere to go, yet still she ran. She had to, she had to get away.
Through the miasma of the nothingness Dinky Hooves ran as fast as her little legs would carry her. He was coming for her, she could feel it. Her horn shone the way through the endless darkness as she ran. The light served no real purpose in such a blank landscape, if nothing else it gave her a sense of courage to run through it, less she simply curl up and be engulfed by it.
With no sense of direction she may as well have, but that meant stopping and waiting to be found. No. As futile as it was, that would be worse.
“You shouldn't be here.” The voice boomed all around causing her to shriek and pick up the pace into a mad gallop. Her heart was pounding so hard she felt it would leap out of her chest, but she had to get away.
She chanced a look behind her and her blood froze. Fire. Fire consuming the nothingness, and in the middle was a pair of icy blue eyes.
She wanted to run faster, but she couldn't. What began as a slight teetering became a full blown wobble and soon the little unicorn found herself skidding off the non existent ground and crashing to her stomach. In no time the fire spread encircling around her. The heat was so intense that she shielded her face. A low rumble that shook everything around her caused her to whimper as she prepared for what came next.
“Stop.”