Slight Change to Ch 6 · 4:03pm Jun 22nd, 2015
While I was rereading chapter 6, I felt that the last paragraph wasn't adequately portraying the level of foreboding that I had been going for, so I tweaked it a bit. It wasn't a huge change, just added a few sentences and changed some wording, but I'm much happier with it now. I just figured I would let you guys know in case anyone gave a flying feather.