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Karrakaz


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  • 241 weeks
    100% deceased this time, for sure.

    Hello all of you who still read this stuff. As you might recall from last time (god that was long ago) I am sorta dead to the fandom as I haven't enjoyed the show for about five seasons now and writing has been a challenge to say the least. All that said, I have started writing again here and there, and the result is a new chapter which I hope all you fine folks will enjoy.

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  • 329 weeks
    Legally dead. (but sneakily not)

    I was going to make a zombie joke but then I remembered I did that once already. Then I remembered that I'm the highest authority, so ha!

    Stooooorriiiieeeeesssssss.....

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  • 376 weeks
    It's over 9— no, no, just 1.

    I am terrible at celebrations. My mind tends to be much more comfortable in dark and depressed places (a flaw that I'm working to address). That all being said, we, that is, you guys, have reached over a thousand in strength of numbers. Which isn't in the least bit scary, until I imagine all of you with torches and pitchforks on my front lawn. (that's an

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  • 387 weeks
    I yet live!

    Even though I wasn't quite sure of it myself, life has, in fact, not done me in.

    I know I've been silent for such a long time that some have legally declared me dead. This is false, though it came close a couple of times. I've been trying to better myself, and somehow ended up getting a lot worse instead. So, on to the news.

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  • 429 weeks
    A little bit of shilling for a friend of mine!

    To whom it may concern (I should think all of you who are fond of good writing and good stories) Green , Steel Resolve's masterpiece, now has it's first side story.

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Mar
11th
2015

New thing! · 6:36pm Mar 11th, 2015

So my latest story is Pink and White, which is a little different from Purple and White. And it's a different White to boot!

No worries though, with this story out of the way I'll be able to get back to Under Her Wings (almost halfway through the next chapter) and after that quite possibly a new Twilestia which I've been toying with for a while now.

This story has made me wonder however... what do you people like? Are you like me in that every main six ship is acceptable? Or are you more predisposed towards some?

Regardless, I will continue to write. I hope you people continue to enjoy. :twilightsmile:

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Twiluna is Greatest Ship
Twilestia is second bestia
Twianythingbutfluttershy is great too!

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What I wanna know is: Why not Fluttershy? Is she too meek? Do their characters clash in your head? No spark?

I think the issue is more the way Fluttershy is generally written in twishy fics than any fundamental issue with her character. She is often written as being extremely passive, though with moments of steel.

This can be played well, but it's extremely easy for Fluttershy to come off as a non-character or sounding board for others.

Additionally if you want to keep her in character, Fluttershy doesn't speak much generally. In the show it's more about her reactions to events, so you have that visual cue as to how she's responding to something. In a fic you would need to either have excessive descriptions or write it in a third person omniscient voice with character thoughts so you could describe how she is feeling.

Again, this can be done very well, but even in extremely well written Flutteryshy fics (Green by Steel Resolve) she is still more of a passive reflection of outside influences.

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Ah yes, Green. I sometimes see it when I look at the amount of comments Steel gets. :twilightsheepish: On a more serious note; perhaps you should take a look at my AppleShy story. If you like that, perhaps I can do something similar with Twilight as well?

I admit, that most of the mane 6 shipped with each other appeal to me, but I do really enjoy RariShy (Green got me started on that one), RariJack (opposites who aren't so opposite), and TwiDash (especially if the writer makes Dash a little vulnerable). I've recently found a few Derpy/Mac stories that have struck my fancy as well as Spitfire/Rainbow Dash. I guess for me it's not so much about who's being shipped as just how well the author brings the relationship to life.

Woooo! More of your awesomeness! Can't wait.

As for shippings, I respect the lot of them, but don't delve too deeply. I've got maybe three pairings I like.

Twilight x celestia

Celestia x twilight (secret mother)

Rainbow dash x Gilda

2867766 I read it a bit ago, very adorable, really liked it. And it really fits Applejack's commitment to family and Fluttershy's commitment to her animals. Would love to read more. But Fluttershy and Applejack have similar life goals, so to speak. The mesh well.

When I imagine pairings with Fluttershy (where there is an actual relationship and not just a mention of her being with someone) I consider what personality, goals, or viewpoints mesh and which ones dont.

Fluttershy meshes with AJ because of a shared commitment and love of animals, and somewhat in personality due to potential for stubbornness, AJ is just more outspoken about it.

Fluttershy can work with RD because of RD's loyalty and very protective nature, and Fluttershy's ability to keep RD grounded

Fluttershy works with Rarity because Rarity brings out her confidence and hides Flutters' quieter moments with her dramatics and powerful personality

Fluttershy works with Pinkie Pie because Pinkie can be extremely insightful at times, understanding that sometimes you just need quiet, but at the same time her personality can compensate for Fluttershy's shyness

But what do Fluttershy and Twilight have in common? Depending on where in the timeline you put her, Twilight is likely awkward around others due to her lack of understanding and focus on learning, but not shy, or warming up to others as she focuses on understanding friendship, or a master of friendship. I could definitely see a fic where Flutters is more of a setting than a character, like in your Appleshy fic. Twilight would be the character of focus, and the fic would be about her interacting with Flutters, but I don't think a story with her sharing "equal time", as it were, would work.

Though of course, any pairing in the hands of the skilled can work, and there are likely fics out there already that prove me wrong. That's just what I see/how I feel with what i've read/what i've watched.

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Fair enough. Some day, I hope to prove that I can make that pairing work. Until then, thanks for your insight. :twilightsmile:

Incidentically, today I thought of "impossible" ships. Raripie was one of them. Then I found this. heh. Let's see if I'm wrong.

2867985 Check out "I love to see you smile" and the sequel "You make my whole life worthwhile". Very good RariPie

2867933 Glad to share my thoughts, and I look forward to being proven wrong! :twilightsmile:

But enough of the serious talk.

Totes 4 srs, Twilestia is second bestia. Under her wings and Sizable Differences are some of my favorites.

You know...

There really isn't enough alpacalestia out there.

I enjoy Omniship and all of the ships it's comprised of.

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