The radar has been gone under

I released a new story which went under the radar. I guess it was approved at 4 in the morning by an android on Jupiter. Anyway, have a looksie. If we assume all 300 views were from my followers, than only 13% of you have seen it.

Cleaning Dash's Hooves

Someone said I forgot the dark tag, but "Kaidan" is a dark tag. Oh well, went ahead and added it anyway. Now 20% darker.

Comments

[iakovl]

i read it... i do feel it's lacking due to being more pure DOM from RD and very fast ending after the start of her braking them, it happened to fast and ended fast

don't worry about reading your things, i keep my eye on you

also... EPIC RD PIC, got to love BDSM

[Dash The Stampede]

It's so funny watching them complain about a commission being too dark. It's almost like they think they can change it

[NaughtSought]

Okay, point 1: it's got a KRD pic as its cover. Point 2: its Kaidan. Point three: the freaking picture; what does everyone expect? Sunshine, rainbows and colorful cartoon horses? Okay bad examples for sarcasm but the point still stands. It's mostly spelled out if you use your brain beforehand.

[Proper Noun]

2607115

I saw that, and felt a vague sense of amusement.

[Derp404]

That story took like two days two hours to get approved.
such a long wait when you know that the story has been submitted and are waiting for it to be posted.

[Neko Majin C]

I thought it would be better received. But then again, I am an optimistic idiot with an overly positive view of the world.

[Changeling 27]

(Sarcasm) It would figure that Kaidan would pull me back into reading clopfics again. A dark clopfic with Dash as a dominatrix no less? About the only way you could mess with me further is if Fluttershy ended up that story somehow. Flutterdash (or is it Rainbowshy?) is the best combo in my opinion. Anybody does that I will not be able to resist reading the story. Just when I thought I was done with them, you had to peak my interest back into them. Darn you Kaidan.

[Changeling 27]

I just finished reading it. Very nice although I am a tad disappointed. With all the hype I thought this was going to super dark like knife cutting or something else equally weird involved. Just your standard M-story. It almost makes me wish to write a chapter or two for your clopventure just to show what "DARK" really is. I enjoyed it but I was hoping for a bit of darkness there. ;)