Their Final Crusade Updated!/proof reader request · 11:44pm Jul 30th, 2014
Hi all!
Added extra long chapter "Uncertainties Unknown" to Their Final Crusade. In total, the story is nearing 100,000 words in length. I never saw it getting so long... or so windy. Been a joy to write ^^
In this chapter, Twilight pays a visit to the hospital to discuss, with her hospitalized friends, how they're doing... and what's going to happen now that things have changed. To those reading, enjoy and thanks for your interest!
This particular part I had a lot of trouble with. I spent a good, long time editing it and was on Xanax for a couple weeks in the middle of editing. I would have had this out sooner, but I had a minor health issue. I don't know if it was the Xanax or just the way I've been feeling lately, but there's a little experimentation with alliteration in there. All in good fun, and nothing that really stands out... just felt like trying something new ^^
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I'm in the process of editing another story along side this one not yet published -- Changing Seasons. It's about Sweetie Belle... and her first heat cycle. It's not clop, rather comedy, and I'm planning a teen rating for it... only hinting at what the other colts are smelling/desire
I was wondering if, in two to three weeks, anybody would be interested in being a proof reader for the story? It still needs some work, but I'd like a test audience for it before I post it.
I love Sweetie Belle, though two out of the three episodes she was in this past season showcased new aspects of her personality -- she was greedy, at times manipulative of her peers, playing others for favors (though Diamond Tiara's exclusive party was going too far), and she was also blinded by jealousy and infantile insecurity. They did a lot of things with her personality I didn't see coming, which I think is partially why the episodes didn't ring so well with me at first.
Peace out! 
