Their Final Crusade Updated! · 10:12pm May 31st, 2014
Hi all!
Added chapter "Metamorphosis Boutique" to the story.
Nearly cut it completely, but decided it does add something to the story so I kept it. It centers around Pinkie Pie, who's quite difficult to write for, if do I dare say so m'self
I've got the next chapter written out entirely and it should be up in the next couple weeks. It's going to need to undergo a bit of editing, but my inclusion of this chapter will make it so I don't have to describe a few events that took place during it... so hopefully I'll be able to cut some out of the coming chapter and maybe replace it with something better ^^
As always, I appreciate the critique and thought I get on these chapters as I release them. After I'm done writing a chapter, which usually takes a couple hours, I generally put a good 10 hours into editing before I publish, sometimes a bit more. I know my writing's not perfect, but I always want to be happy with what I'm releasing and keep challenging myself. I write for myself first, but critique and thoughts are something I love because its an outsider's perspective ^^
So to all the favs, comments, and watchers this story's gotten me -- thanks a bunch! You guys are kewl. Thank you for your interest in my stories!
Peace