Status: next chapter "Their Final Crusade" · 2:07am May 22nd, 2014
It's on the way. I'm about 50% done with editing and I've changed a number of things around with this particular chapter. Some elements felt draggy, some corny, but not once have I planned to open with the ending and explain the beginning in just a few sentences later on. I had an entire 2,000 additional words set to describe an event which would explain a few things I chose to cut because it seemed kind of logic-first. I may include it in a deleted scenes section at the end. I'm happier with the way this one's turning out, but I wouldn't call it my best work yet. Something still feels off, so editing might take about a week more or so.
Peace!