Their Final Crusade Updated!

Hi all!

I had a chapter of Their Final Crusade I meant to publish a while back but did not.

In this chapter, a lot has happened -- death, injury, new beginnings. As they say, the more things change, the more they stay the same. There's a secret... something happened and one of the 6 must be kept in the dark. What to do, what to do?

Once I'm done, or mostly done, with One Stormy Afternoon (which I estimate will take a few weeks), I'm going to start up on this story again. I really enjoy writing it. Re-reading it, I can see that, even from the outsider's perspective. For those that don't know what it is, it's a tragedy... the CMC start getting their cutie marks (as implied in the title), but not all... then their lives and the lives of their friends get strained. So far it has a body count of two, and they are among my favorite characters...

My issues with it are few, but there's one thing that really bothers me -- it's supposed to be about the CMC mostly, but it kind of veers off and starts being about the adult ponies for a while, which I kind of don't like... I found it necessary to describe a lot of going-ons, however, including the adult ponies feelings and problems, since they do impact the fillies pretty directly. It'll swing back to being about the fillies again ^^