Some changes in EFH · 10:50pm Jan 10th, 2014
Hello, everybody! Just letting you all know that I have made some changes in chapters ten, eleven, and twelve.
In chapter ten, I realized that I made all of Ponyville a bunch of heartless assholes when they start laughing at Connor after saving Celestia from an attempt by Hellfire to kill her. So, I made drastic changes to that. I won't give you the details, because it will all be there when you read it. On the same chapter, I also did some less than drastic changes to Connor's tirade directed at the Mane Six just so it could flow with the changes I made with the Ignored and enraged Savior moment.
In chapter eleven, I deleted unnecessary moments and quotes like Rainbow Dash blindly pointing out the Connor is not a dragon after Spike mentioned that he and Connor were alike. It was really out of character, even for Rainbow Dash.
In chapter twelve, I've added some little extra dialogue to the conversation between Hellfire and Twilight. I don't want Twilight to immediately question Celestia's reputation after Hellfire just said one thing about her.
Anyhoo, I just want to let you all know about these changes in case you all run into any confusion. :)
Thank you all for your time to read this.
And thank you for your support and intel.
Ceehoff out.
P.S. I hope you enjoy my new fic as well. Chapter 2 coming soon! Also, my crossover fic is coming to fruition as well. Stay tuned!
Did you already made the changes? and also did the second chapter its soon to come?