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LightStriker


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  • 543 weeks
    4 and 50th

    I just came out of a viewing, in a movie theater, of the 50th Anniversary of Doctor Who. Which makes for quite the weekend with the premier of Season 4.

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  • 544 weeks
    Correction of previous stories...

    Nobody will probably noticed it, but the first chapter of Never Judge A Book By Its Cover passed from 1400 words to over 2000. On top, it should now be relatively error free.

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  • 549 weeks
    Purity's sequel

    I don't think there's any good way to tell people who favorite a story that a sequel have been released.
    Would be nice to have a way to link stories, chain them if you will. I almost missed sequel to story I favorited, and I'm sure I probably missed some too!

    Anyway, here's the story following Purity; Fighting Destiny.

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  • 550 weeks
    Fighting Destiny's cover

    I have to admit, it's the first time I work with two pre-readers and the first time they give input right as I write. I really like the dynamic it creates.
    I was wondering why people used Google Doc so much. It's the multi-players version of Word!
    My guess is, it will be rather hard to find grammar error in that next story!

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  • 550 weeks
    Hasbrony, Mother of all Drama!

    I looked around, and found out there is no pony to personify "Hasbro".

    So, I spent a good 5 mins in the pony maker, so I can introduce you to "Hasbrony, Mother of all Drama".

    She's pink because... Well, you know why.
    She's an alicorn because... Well, I think you also know why.

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Nov
16th
2013

Correction of previous stories... · 12:59pm Nov 16th, 2013

Nobody will probably noticed it, but the first chapter of Never Judge A Book By Its Cover passed from 1400 words to over 2000. On top, it should now be relatively error free.

Huge thanks to Web of Hope, Shutaro and Dusk Watch for doing a blitz of correction in that old story.

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Comments ( 3 )

Were there any significant changes other than fixing grammar and the like? I just reread the first chapter and I didn't notice anything that wasn't there before.

1512176 Well... about 600 words of details and precision that my correctors told me was lacking.

Fixing other chapters too... Still wondering if I change my biggest mistake; making Azure cast spells.

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For the most part this was just grammar and a lot of polish. I don't think we did any major structural work.

Also, as LightStriker mentioned, the other chapters (along with all of Purity) will be getting a similar treatment, but we are getting to them as we can. Right now the focus is on Fighting Destiny so we can have that all fixed up from the start.

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