Just a regular guy who loves writing wholesome stuff. =)
Heyo, everyone. I hope you're not too anxious or ticked off that the next chapter's taking a while. One thing leads to another, and sometimes I just suffer a bit of writer's block or burnout, so I hope you understand.
What I'd like to know, since I always appreciate feedback: what do you like about the tale thus far, and what are you interested in seeing for future installments? =)
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I think your story is coming a long really good. It doesn't matter how long you take to make a chapter just......don't make us wait a year or two for an update.
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No need to worry about that. I wouldn't take a whole year for just one chapter.
What i like is Dave's interactions with the crusaders.
hmn...potato warfare...random acts of pinkie-ness...and...maybe a villain?
So far I've loved it, crazy to think how far this story's grown through time
The story is great. I've learned patience for a story after hearing about KnightMysterio's problem with getting out chapters on his TF2+MLP crossover fic...
I like the humor, and the crusaders are just adorable. I really like you version of Dinkie. You write the Mane 6 in almost perfect character. The only thing that I find hard to read is Ironmane's interaction with Dave. Everything seems forced. I know he is supposed to not be a likable character, but the first few meetings seem like really forced, like it wasn't Dave. Maybe I just don't know him well enough as a character, but I would certainly not have acted that way towards him. I personally would of probably told him to go fuck himself and come back when he has found his chivalry, but that's just because I don't take crap from anyone. Of course that would of probably backfired horribly, especially after reading how Dave's actions actually helped him. I don't know. Just something about Ironmane's first intreations just seem... off. I can't put my finger on it though.
Other than that, I love this story. I really hope to see more Moonlight (I think that's her name, just incase it's not, I am talking about Dave's shy neighbor.)
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Yeah, I can see where you're coming from. I hadn't exactly established Ironmane's character yet, so I may have to go back and fix that.