Part 3 Update. · 8:25am May 26th, 2013
For those that really want to keep reading, and like rightnow (especially the follower who pasted the Thor gif, which was amazing)...
Part 3 is pretty much complete in draft form. Once it's been edited by the kind soul who volunteered to help me, it should go up shortly after. I'm trying to avoid the post now, pay for it later that happened with parts 1 and 2.
In the meantime, I'll try to clean up (with, again, some help) parts 1 and 2. Just the grammar and tense/proofreading issues. As for the wacky jokes, references to other things, breaking of the fourth wall, and lack of subtly, what you read is what you get.
I will say that I promise to play fair with the puzzles and mysteries. There are clues already hidden as to what is going on. (Not the solution, mind you, but clues.)
Thank you all for getting me to keep working on this nonstop, the response is really quite amazing. Happy there are so many Cheerilee fans out there!
I've been in a funk on most of my non-pony writing projects for awhile, and this has snapped me right out of it.
In other news, it's 4am my time and I've been working on this since midnight and basically...
Yeah.
Thank you for everyone who favorited-upvoted, etc. And also, thank you to the one guy who downvoted but liked how I dealt with mares vs. stallions. It was a very thoughtful way to express criticism and I respect that.
Goodnight. And happy Arrested Development S4 day.