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Amy Clockwork

Joined January 2013
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Writer and Project Lead for Then the Shadows Whisper, FiM Fiction Enthusiast and Reviewer, Lover of Ponies

May
8th
2013

It’s a bit strange. Things have been quiet in this fine land I live in. Of course, there is no paranoia to be found in the lack of collapsing Texaco gasoline stations, but that leaves this review void of cruel metaphorical humor. Well, we could always joke about the poor lady who nearly lost her thumb to her cat. However, there could be some discomfort in the fact that the ‘poor lady’ is my mother. So, for the sake of not being thrown into a mental institution, we will get on with the review. Bad Horse’s The Detective and the Magician is nothing short of amazing. It’s a crossover than will not disappoint with good dialogue, a deep mystery, and outstanding characters. It wouldn't take Holmes too long to figure out why The Detective and the Magician is definitely one of my personal favorites.

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The Detective and the Magician by Bad Horse

Complete (Completed on July 29, 2012)

To Holmes, she is always the mare.  In his eyes she eclipses the whole of her sex, and fills him with admiration and loathing.  Whether she in fact stole the Starry Night was ultimately beside the point.  What mattered to Holmes was that he had been matched at his own game, by a mare; that it had not been altogether unpleasant; and that she had caused him, however briefly, to turn his keen and unflinching gaze upon himself. Read it here.

Tags: Romantic, Sad, Crossover, Adventure

Rating: Everyone

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As a reader, the last thing I want to see in crossover, especially in those of the usually darker topic, is canon characters. Without pointing fingers, I find that some people include canon characters in a crossover is too often trying to cater towards the love of such character. However, The Detective and the Magician doesn't suffer from such this. In fact, it’s biggest strength is the use of Trixie as Irene Adler. Their characters combine beautifully and Trixie never feels out of character; with the exception of one instance that Trixie breaks Adler’s character. The characters of Fetlock Holmes and John Watson do well on their own as well. Their characters are captured well and their dialogue is clever and engaging.

The story is sweet and simple. Bad Horse keep things short but, even at 14,000 words, keeps the plot interesting and easy to follow. Concepts regarding magic theory are explained well and the romance, or whatever romance is in Holmes’ case, is just as entertaining. The whole concept of love is comedic to Holmes and it is captured excellently in the writing.  Just between you and me, Trixie was sexy enough to drive even my non-clopper mind to wishing for a hot night. So much for keeping these reviews PG.

If there is one thing thing that sells this story it’s the dialogue. As mentioned, it is excellently crafted; being clever yet easy to follow. Bad Horse keeps the whole Holmes feel of it, forcing me to use the dictionary on more than one occasion. It’s one of the first stories to have the dialogue feels organic and flow nicely. Two words: absolutely phenomenal.

Unfortunately, I do have one minor complaint. The writing style isn’t exactly top notch. Bad Horse is a very visual writer and it shows. Photographs and drawings are used throughout the story and I mean actual photos and drawings. Don’t get me wrong, the use of illustrations isn’t a bad thing but like I said, it shows in the writing style. The Detective and the Magician is written with long descriptors and while it’s not a bad thing, it could use some polish.

I checked again. Still all quiet. It’s starting to creep me out, living in the most boring corner of the United States. The Detective and the Magician is a story that will satisfy all your Pony Holmes needs. The incredible cast, entertaining dialogue, and engaging mystery makeup for the writing style by a country mile, making it well deserving of its score of nine out of ten. This has been Admujica. Have a great week and don’t forget about Mother’s Day on Sunday.

The Detective and the Magician gets a score of: 9 out of 10

Fantastic character backed by great dialogue make this a crossover that won’t fail to engage its readers

Read it here.


Side Note: An Open Letter of Thanks

I wanted to take the time to thank not only Bad Horse, who tossed up this on his blog, but all of the people who read and follow my reviews. The Second of May marked two months since I published my first review. It has already been a wonderful journey and I cannot wait to see what the future brings. My friends, you are the reason I carry on. Thank you for the patience, kindness, generosity, honesty, and loyalty you’ve all shown. I hope you continue to join me on this journey.

Sincerely,

Adrian Mujica-Martinez

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Comments ( 8 )

#1 · 71w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Thanks for writing! The work you put into these reviews shows and it's nice to have a filter when trying out something new.

#2 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

> (Completed on July 29, 2013)

Clearly there are some super-secret bonus chapters coming up.  Only two months to wait!  :raritywink:

All joking aside, good on you for the reviews.  Do you have a particular selection process for which fics you spotlight?

#3 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1061411 Bonus chapters? Please and thank you! I think it's quite obvious that I most certainly am 110% enthusiastic about new chapters.

I do take requests but unfortunately, they are closed at the moment. There are like twenty or so stories in the request pool so it's quite packed at the moment. More details on requests are on the blog post found here. Sometimes, I review random story for fun, time permitting.

#4 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1061449

Sorry to disappoint.  The "bonus chapters" thing was a gentle joke at the story completion date being erroneously listed as 2 months in the future.  :trollestia:

But maybe we can talk Bad Horse into it anyway!  BH, you listening?  You got fans!

#5 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1061449>>1061597

I keep poking BH over seeing more of Holmes but so far has proved to be quite resilient. Help me annoy him further? :pinkiehappy:

#6 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1061633

Well, if we really get desperate I could threaten to write more My Harshwhinnial until he acquieses …

#7 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1061597 :twilightoops: I need to start paying attention to the year... Thanks for the heads up!

#8 · 71w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1061750 >>1061633 Yep. We should use the troll pics, spam comments, and public teasing. You know, the works. :trollestia:

In all seriousness, patience is key. Nevertheless, there WILL be more Holmes. There HAS to be more Holmes.

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