So I have utterly butchered the Enlighsh language again

If anyone reading this are interested in my newest attempt at completely butchering the English language and every grammar rule possible, there's a prologue of the first chapter up in the GDocs I created just for it. And if you do read it and find something that can be corrected (aka everything) you can berate me here.

Any berating on your part is appreciated and hopefully you can talk me out of continuing this horrible disrespect for the English language.