New chapter! · 11:58pm Mar 11th, 2013
I LIVE!
Sorry for taking so long with the new chapter, but I was kind of a lazy bum busy with real life. I shall do my best to get the next chapter up as soon as possible.
Also, a big shout out to kalash93 who helped me with the cleaning up of this chapter and gave me a few good suggestions. Give that guy some love.
I hope that you enjoy the new chapter, and please feel free to point out any errors or stuff that I missed. Also, my first five chapters were only pre-read by me. And though I've been given some good advice by helpful commenters, I'm just terrible at finding the difference between off/of and placing commas. So if anyone feels up to the challenge I would greatly appreciate it if they would give that a good reading and point out where the exact errors are.
Anyway, my next update will probably be a riff or maybe a new short story that has been floating around in my head. I hope to update soon again.
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Thanks for the shoutout, comrade!