New chapter.

So, about this chapter.

I really don't know how I feel about this one. I had to at least re-write this thing two times, which partially explains why it took so long to upload this one.

I did a lot of things that I liked, but it was, again, longer than I had wanted to make it. This made the pacing really problematic for me. I hope that now that I’ve finally done what I wanted to do, I can start to give the story a less rushed flow.

Also, no changeling this chapter. As kalash93 was kind enough to point out, the changeling parts were mostly filler. So it felt wrong to add another section of her in this chapter just for the sake of involving her, even if she doesn’t really have a role yet in the story. The next chapter is finally going to give her a more important role and is going to build her character more. I am really looking forward to writing that chapter.

Also, I have a question. Should I go back and change the perspective to the third person? Some of you have said that it is difficult to spot the difference between the Yuri sections and the changeling sections. I think that I can evade this problem in my writing, but I’d like to hear your opinion about it.

Edit:
Holy ravioli, Batman!

I just got in the safe for work feature box! They'll just let anyone in that thing these days.
But seriously, I did not see that one coming, thanks guys!