The Siren: Notes for Chapters 3, 4 & 6 · 2:17am Jul 4th, 2023
Chapter 3
Two new character tags: and .
Rozetri
This will be on the test.
Chapter 4
has now been added to the character tags.
Chapter 5
(No notes for this chapter.)
Chapter 6
Oh, don't read after this point if you haven't read the chapter, or you'll be spoiled.
I don’t generally add character tags for villains, as they tend to be little more than narrative devices. But if I did, this is where I’d add the tag.
“Moondancer”
Night Lancer forgetting to put the space in her name was a deliberate choice on my part, although I think it was too subtle for any reader to see it as a clue that he was a fake.