New Chapter. · 6:42pm Dec 15th, 2012
Phew!
The new chapter took a lot longer and turned out a lot bigger than I originally had planned, but it should be up soon.
I am glad that people seemed to enjoy the first chapter. I enjoyed writing it a lot! This new chapter took a bit longer to write and was a bit more of a struggle, but I still think that it turned out alright and it was still a ton of fun to make.
Also, I hope that people don't mind it that the story is moving a bit slow. I really want to build up the worlds and characters before I bring them together and there is just so much to the world of Metro 2033 and MLP:FiM.
As always, feel free to criticize the story if you want to. I can use all the help I can get.
Do build up the world and the characters by all means. So far I've enjoyed the pace very much.