A wounded pony collapses in front of Fluttershy's cottage, but what truly ails him?
When Valiant Daybreak collapses in front of Fluttershy's cottage, the kind-hearted pony immediately takes him in and takes care of him. Little does she know that he is actually the Prince of Corralland, a distant country located across the ocean west of Equestria. Why is he in Equestria, and how will he react to her kindness?
The rain came down in sheets as the thunder crashed above, drowning out all other sounds as the lightning flashed. Through the storm a solitary figure trudged, his hooves making soft splashes as they clopped through the murky puddles.
Wearily, he lifted his head, dimly making out a light in the distance. A new surge of determination flashed across his face, slightly hidden in the shadow of the hood he wore over his head.
If I could just make it there, he thought, perhaps someone would have enough compassion on me to let me rest for the night.
He had been traveling for days through the torrent, constantly moving lest the chilling rain rob him of his last fleeting ounces of strength. Shakily, he lifted his legs one after another, pressing ever onward towards the solitary light. As he reached the door he paused, a brief thought stilling his desire to knock.
What if whoever lives here rejects me like the others? His exhaustion quickly dismissed the question. I have to try.
As he raised his hoof again, his strength finally left him, and he crumpled to the ground out of sheer exhaustion, letting out a small cry of pain. I guess this is the end.
As his vision began to darken, the door swung open; how the inhabitant of the house heard his cry he did not know. Light flooded his vision, giving him a brief glimpse of two pairs of butterscotch colored legs before the world faded to blackness...
As daylight streamed in through the windows, Prince Valiant Daybreak opened his eyes, taking in his surroundings with a quick turn of his head. He was in what appeared to be a spare bedroom carved out of the trunk of a large tree. Pictures of both rare and common animals littered the walls; it was clear that whoever had put them up had no real sense of direction, instead putting up pictures wherever he or she had managed to find wall space.
Where am I? He wondered.
As he searched around the room for his belongings, the memories came flooding back. I collapsed in front of that house... Did... somepony... take me in..?!
He found his cloak on a chair next to the bed, recently washed and neatly folded. The horn on his head faintly glowed as he willed it on with a bit of magic.
As he put on his cloak, he realized with a start that something was missing. He gave his room a quick, thorough search before coming to the conclusion he feared: his sword and shield were gone. He pondered this for a moment. While it was true that whoever took him in had taken his sword and shield, they had actually taken him in... That fact alone was enough to warrant whoever it was a bit of trust. Still, to trust a stranger too much had the potential to be a mistake, so he cautiously opened the door, looked around, and crept down the hallway until he heard voices. Ever so carefully, he sneaked around the corner, until he could match figures with the conversation.
Two mares sat in what appeared to be a kitchen. The first, back turned to him, was the butterscotch pony he had seen before he collapsed; he could see now that she was a pegasus. The second mare was light lavender, and had a pointed horn that signified she was a unicorn.
"Well..." the butterscotch pony quietly said, "he just sort of walked up to my front door and it was obvious he was hurt and, well... umm... I took him inside."
"Wait, hold on Fluttershy," said the unicorn, "A mysterious pony comes walking out of the Everfree and you just let it into your house?"
"Oh, well... he just sort of... collapsed... and... I didn't want to leave him out in the rain..."
The unicorn sighed and shook her head. Sometimes Fluttershy could be too compassionate for her own good. "So where is he now?"
Fluttershy ducked her head and quietly replied, "Oh, umm... he's asleep in the guest bedroom. Oh, and Twilight? He had these with him..." Gingerly, she placed the missing weapons on the table at which the two ponies were seated. So... they weren't outright stolen, Valiant thought.
Twilight picked them up, examining them with slight interest. After a quick examination, she replaced them on the table. "Well, this is extremely interesting, Fluttershy, but it hardly qualifies as an emergency... Spike and I were in the middle of..."
"Oh... umm... Twilight? Sorry to interrupt, but... There's more."
The purple filly leaned forward in anticipation. "Well?"
Clearing her throat with obvious nervousness, the yellow filly said, "Well... he... he is... That is... he has.."
"I have both a horn and wings." Valiant said, as he stepped into the room.
Fluttershy, startled, yelped and whirled around, backing quickly away from him into a corner of the room.
A bit startled himself, Valiant eyed the retreating pegasus with surprise. "I'm sorry," he said finally, "I did not mean to frighten you. Please, I mean you no harm."
Slightly reassured by his words, the butterscotch colored pony regained a bit of her courage, shyly walking forward and retaking her seat.
"Oh... umm... don't worry about it... I'm easily frightened..."
Clearing her throat, the unicorn, whom the pegasus had called Twilight, said, "Yes, well, now that that's all been cleared up, who are you?" Eyeing him suspiciously, she added, "Mysterious ponies don't usually just show up out of the blue!"
Valiant winced slightly, before nodding and replying, "I suppose I concede you that point. I do not usually tell others my identity, but I suppose since you both know about my... true appearance you will inevitably guess something... my name is..." at that moment, his stomach gave out an enormous growl, reminding him of how hungry he was. It was so loud that it woke up a small bunny, who had previously been sleeping in a chair in a corner of the room.
Fluttershy gave a quiet gasp before saying, "Oh! Where are my manners? If you were that exhausted you must be hungry too!" Quickly, she flew into the kitchen, gathering enough things together to make a simple salad. Setting it in front of him, she said shyly, "I hope it's alright... It... it's all I have at the moment... I was going to go to the market today..."
Valiant stared at the food for a full ten seconds. "You do not even know me," he finally said, "and you are giving me food?"
Ducking her head, Fluttershy said, "Oh... umm... yes... if that's alright..."
Valiant's eyes grew a bit misty. I have been traveling so long... Searching for a place to stay... Perhaps my search is finally over. Now if I could only be sure... Blinking back the tears and clearing his throat, he said, "Thank you very much. Your kindness shall be repaid."
"Well... that is..." the pegasus began, "you don't have to worry about that... I couldn't sit by and let another pony go hungry..."
The emotions hit Valiant again, causing him to pause. She doesn't want anything from me... She's helping me simply because she wants to... Just like... Valiant squashed down the emotions threatening to overwhelm him. Regain composure! "In that case, thank you again, you are truly very kind." He quickly began to eat, utilizing as much etiquette as he could bear with his growling stomach.
When he had finished, Twilight cleared her throat again, asking, "Yes, well, now that we've got that cleared up: you were saying?"
"Forgive me," Valiant replied, pushing the bowl to the center of the table. "My name is Prince Valiant Daybreak, heir to the throne of Corralland, a country far to the east. I... am the last true surviving citizen of my country, or one of the last anyway."
"Oh my..." Fluttershy said, "What happened?"
Silent for a second, Valiant replied, "It is a sad tale, not something I would like to discuss at the moment. Someone as fair as yourself could not possibly benefit from hearing it, and it brings up... painful memories as well."
Overcome with sadness for the other pony, Fluttershy's eyes welled with tears, before she said, "I'm... I'm sorry I mentioned it..."
Valiant, who at this time had regained his composure, said, “It is alright. Perhaps I will be able to face these memories one day.” Clearing his throat, he continued, “Regardless, since my country was... destroyed, I have traveled east, searching for a place to call home. I disguised my princely nature, as I wanted to live somewhere where everypony was treated equally... I'm... tired of special treatment. I disguised myself as a homeless pony, passing through every town I came to unless somepony willingly extended hospitality to me. Needless to say from my current condition, I have not stopped for a fair amount of time. You are the first pony in a week that has opened her door to me, and the first pony I have encountered in my entire search to have no ulterior motives for doing so."
Fluttershy ducked her head, quietly replying, "Well... you were hurt... and... umm... I couldn't just leave you there..."
Valiant smiled, "For that, I thank you."
After a brief moment of silence, Twilight finally spoke. "So, what will you do now?"
He thought for a second. Should I give this place a chance? Glancing over at Fluttershy, he thought, If they are all half as kind as she, I think I need go no further. "If it is alright with whoever is in charge of your town, I would love to stay here for the time being."
Twilight still slightly suspicious, said, "That's fine, but we don't need to go through anyone to ask for permission. Ponyville is always open to strangers. The only real question is where you will stay until we can find you a house of your own..."
"Oh... umm Twilight?" Fluttershy began.
"Yes, Fluttershy?" Oh no, Twilight thought.
"Umm, well... He could... he could stay here if he wanted to..." quickly turning around to face Valiant, she said, "If you'd like to, of course! But if you don't want to... I understand."
There it was. The offer was on the table. Twilight braced herself for Valiant's response.
After a moment of thinking, he replied, "I appreciate your hospitality, but... I wouldn't want to put you through so much trouble..."
"Oh!” She exclaimed, her eyes growing a bit wider, “It would be no trouble at all... I mean... unless you don't find my house nice enough... you are a prince after all."
“Not at all!” he exclaimed quickly, “You have a beautiful home... but... I am a strange pony, whom you have never met before. You have no idea of my intentions. Are you sure you trust me enough to let me stay with you?”
After thinking for a moment, she quietly said, “Y... yes... I think so.”
"In that case, I have one thing to offer you in return. It is true that I am a Prince, but, in my country, I was also a knight. As such, I give my word that, while I remain here, no harm shall come to you. Neither myself, nor anything else, will harm you as long as I remain under your roof." He walked over to the table, and picked up the weapons which were still lying there. "These are the tools of the warrior. Some ponies use them as weapons of destruction and war, tools only to take what others have earned themselves. I choose to use them as tools of defense, existing to protect myself and others."
He knelt on the ground, bowing his head, "I, Prince Valiant Daybreak, do hereby lend my sword to your aid, and pledge that nothing above my power shall harm a hair of your mane for the duration of my stay with you."
What the...! Twilight's mouth was now nearly touching the floor. Fluttershy, the butterscotch fur on her face now completely red, managed to stutter, "Th... th... tha..." before turning, running up the stairs to her room and swiftly closing the door behind her.
Valiant stood slowly, staring after her in shock. "What did I say?" he asked.
Sighing, Twilight walked over to him. "Fluttershy's name is extremely descriptive: she is the most timid pony I've ever met in my life. She takes everything extremely seriously, and what you said to her probably had the emotional equivalent of a marriage proposal in her mind."
It was Valiant's turn to turn crimson, "That.... that's not what I meant at all! Where I come from, it's only natural for..."
"I know," Twilight interrupted, holding up a hoof, "and she knows, but the feeling is the same. She's probably just extremely confused. Nopony has ever said something like that to her. She'll come down in a minute, but it's best you don't talk about it. It'd only embarrass her."
The room was silent for a precious moment, before Twilight quickly wheeled at him and said, "I don't know what you're up to, but don't think I haven't got my eye on you!"
Startled, Valiant stuttered, "I..."
She continued, "If you intend to do ANYTHING that might hurt Fluttershy, if you take advantage of her good will, you WILL be severely punished. Oh, and that promise you made? You better keep it, or else..."
Valiant stared into Twilight's eyes, which were burning bright with protectiveness for her friend. "Twilight," he said softly after the initial shock had passed.
Eying him suspiciously, she said, "what?"
"Everything I said about my journey was the truth. She is the first pony who has actually cared about my well-being in a long time... I will protect her, if only for that fact."
The door at the top of the stairs swung open and Fluttershy peeped out. Exiting the room, she walking down the stairs with her head hung low. "I... I'm sorry about that... it was incredibly rude of me..."
"Sorry about what?" Valiant asked.
Surprised, Fluttershy said, "Oh... about me running up the stairs and..."
"It makes sense that you would have things to prepare," he said. "You needed to go to the market right?"
Slowly, Fluttershy nodded. "...yes..."
"Well, would you mind if I came along?" he asked, "I would carry your bags for you, and it would give me a good opportunity to see the town!"
"Oh... well..." she began, "I suppose, that would be nice." For the first time since he arrived, she looked up into his eyes and smiled. As she stared, she felt something she couldn't quite get a good hold of... A warm feeling, resonating from her heart outward.
Smiling back, he replied, "Shall we go then?" He opened the door for her with a bit of magic, and she gracefully stepped out of it, before turning around and saying, "Oh! I forgot my saddlebags..."
"You mean these?" he turned, showing her the twin saddlebags resting on his back.
"Oh... yes... those are the ones." Blushing slightly again, she continued down the path, Valiant walking alongside her. Rolling her eyes and shaking her head, Twilight closed the door and followed.
The walk to the village was shorter than Valiant expected. “I did not realize it was this close,” he said, “I suppose I merely could not see it through the rain last night.”
“That makes sense,” Twilight said, falling into step beside him. “It was pretty bad... Fall rainstorms sometimes are.” She thought for a minute, before asking, “How long have you been wandering again? I mean, I know you said you left after your country was,” she paused, searching for the word he had used, “...destroyed, but how long ago was that exactly?”
“I'm not entirely sure,” Valiant said, briefly glancing away. At her question, the memories had begun to flood back. Taking a deep breath, he squashed down the memories, continuing, “It seems like an eternity, but I would guess about three months. I left before the first leaves fell from the trees and, judging by the fact that all of yours have already fallen, winter is nearly upon us.”
“You don't make the leaves fall yourselves? “Fluttershy asked, a puzzled look on her face, “We make the leaves fall about halfway through autumn, but that was about a month ago, so your timing is probably close...” She glanced back at her guest, the words he had spoken back at the house dancing through her head like a troupe of ballet dancers. Nothing above my power shall harm a hair of your mane... No one had ever told her that before...
Lost in her thoughts, her attention was averted from the path in front of her. She tripped over a rock, crashing into a cart and tipping it, causing it to fall on its side with a great crash, spilling its load of various bits and bobbles to spill all over the road. The stallion it belonged to quickly disentangled himself from the harness, whirling around to face her.
“Why don't you watch where you're going!” he yelled.
“Oh... umm... I'm really sorry sir, I just didn't see where I was...”
“Sorry!? SORRY!?” the pony exploded at her. “How in the world am I going to clean all this up? I’ve got places to be missy, and no SORRY is goi...” he stopped mid-sentence, gulping as the razor sharp point of Valiant's sword gently touched his throat.
“The lady offered you an apology sir,” he said, a glint of warning in his eye, “and I strongly suggest you accept it and offer up one of your own in return.” He sheathed his sword, the soft yellow glow personifying his magic fading from it as it fit snugly in its scabbard.
The merchant pony sighed shakily, bowing his head in shame. Gulping, he said, “Look... I'm sorry I yelled at you ma'am. I've been traveling for a long time and... I just wanted to get some rest. I kind of snapped when I realized that... huh!?”
At that moment, all the spilled objects on the road became surrounded in a lavender haze, floating gently upwards and filling the cart, which righted itself again. Behind Valiant, Twilight sighed, as she released her magic hold over the trinkets.
Barely able to control his embarrassment, the merchant pony stared a moment, before stuttering, “I can't believe it! That was the most impressive feat of magic I've ever seen! Thank you so much!”
Shaking her head, Twilight replied, “Sometimes all you have to do is ask. These are friendly ponies here; they'll help you if you need it.” Under her breath, she muttered, "In fact, sometimes they're too helpful..." Returning her attention to the merchant, she smiled and said, “Have a lovely day.”
Waving to the merchant, the trio began walking towards the center of town again. “Th... thank you.” Fluttershy said quietly.
“For what?” Valiant asked, slowing down to match her slow pace.
“You stood up for me... It meant a lot.”
“I always do everything in my power to keep my word,” he replied softly. “I said nothing above my power would harm you, and I meant it.” His eyes briefly grew misty before he turned away, concentrating on the road in front of him. “I refuse to fail this time...”
Fluttershy, missing his brief sadness, turned her head the opposite direction, attempting to conceal the reddening of her cheeks. “Still, I appreciate it...”
After a bit more walking, they reached the center of the town. Turning to the other two, Twilight said, “I'm sorry to have to go, but I really need to research something.” Something about him is extremely strange.I don't trust him, she thought. He's up to something, and I'm going to find out what! Shaking herself out of her stupor, she said, “I'll come by and check on you guys again later.”
After she had left, Valiant turned to Fluttershy. “Well,” he asked, “time to head to the market?”
“Oh... Well,” she began, averting her gaze, “if it's alright with you... I would like to go visit my friend Rarity first... I kind of promised her she could show me something today... but if you don't want to...”
“By all means, lead the way!” Valiant said with a smile, “Unless, of course, I am not invited...”
“Oh, no!” Fluttershy said quickly, “I would love to have you come along...”
He smiled again, even broader this time. “Lead the way then!” he said, “I would love to see as much of the town as you would care to show me.”
Returning the smile, she nodded, continuing down the street. After a few minutes of walking they reached the edge of town. Fluttershy walked up to a strange, blue and purple colored building. Fluttershy softly knocked on the door, barely making a sound as her hooves touched the wood. “Cooooooooming!” a voice called from inside. The door was swiftly opened, revealing a white unicorn with a purple mane.
“Who's there?” she called out the door, “Ah, Fluttershy thank goodness you've arrived I've just been dying waiting for you to get here! Please come in I just can't wait to sho...” She stopped mid-sentence as she noticed the handsome stallion standing behind her friend. “Why, Fluttershy!” she exclaimed, “Whoever is this?!”
“Oh, well...” she began, “This is Pri...”
“My name is Valiant Daybreak!” he interrupted, throwing Fluttershy a quick look of apology. “I just moved here and Fluttershy has graciously agreed to show me around the town.”
“Oh I see!” The white unicorn said, “Well then come in! My name is Rarity, the self-proclaimed queen of all things fashion in this town and a freelance designer. Oh, that reminds me! Fluttershy, I have just been dying to show you! I've created a brand new line of stallion formal wear and I can't for the life of me find a stallion to model them for me! Can you think of anypony...” She stopped suddenly, returning her gaze to Valiant who, suddenly nervous, asked, “What?”
Looking him up and down a few times, she said, “Yes! I do believe you would be perfect!” Grabbing him by the hoof, she forcefully drug him up the stairs into her studio, where she quickly got to work measuring the size of his chest, legs and head. After the measurements were taken she retrieved an outfit from a mannequin and began making small adjustments.
As she worked, Valiant leaned in to Fluttershy and whispered, “Should I flee?”
Giggling softly, Fluttershy replied, “Oh no, Rarity always gets like this when she's... 'inspired'. I'm sure she'll calm down in a minute or two.”
Fluttershy's prediction proved to be correct. After a few seconds, the unicorn exclaimed, “Done!” Whirling around, she moved closer to Valiant, “Now! You just put this on and... Oh! We need to get rid of that old cloak first!” At his protests, she exclaimed, “Well don't be shy now! This outfit will look ever so much better on you than that drab thing...”
“Wait!” he exclaimed, but it was too late. She had already grabbed it and pulled it off, releasing his wings in the process. They unfurled themselves like they had a mind of their own, yearning to fly but bound to the earth by sheer force of will.
A look of shock quickly spread across Rarity's face. “You... you're an alicorn!” she said in awe, her eyes shining brightly. “Why this changes everything!” she said, as Valiant winced, bracing himself for the worst. Turning back to her workbench, she started snipping away, completely focused on the fabric. “I'll have to make wing holes to fit the design now! Yes...” Furiously working, she finally exclaimed, “done!” Turning back to Valiant, she handed him the outfit, quickly saying, “Well don't just stand there, try it on! I'm just dying to see how it looks on you!”
Valiant stared at the outfit, then back at the white unicorn in front of him, who at this point was practically dancing around the room with excitement. “Uhh...” he started to say, but a sharp glance from Rarity interrupted him.
“Look,” she said with a smile, “It's not so hard! Just slip it over your head like this...” As she said this, she grabbed the outfit and forced it down over his head, causing him to take an involuntary step back as she worked it down over his body.
“There now, doesn't that feel splendid? Please, turn around!” Rarity demanded, eyes sparkling as she looked at her design.
Grudgingly, Valiant obliged, slowly turning in a circle as she watched him.
Rarity sighed with happiness, exclaiming, “It looks perfect on you! Oh you must take it, I insist!”
Startled, Valiant stopped spinning, awash with confusion. “What?” he asked, thinking momentarily, “I am not quite sure what you mean. Should I not pay for this?”
Waving off his question, the white unicorn replied, “I don't want payment darling, I simply think you look splendid in it! I looks much better on you than that old cloak did! That reminds me, why were you wearing that hideous thing in the first place?”
Valiant sighed, replying, “I wear it because I don't want people to know my identity... being royalty usually begets certain favors, and I currently wish to avoid that... I am nopony special..."
“Oh I see,” Rarity said, her face thoughtful, “You think I'm giving you this just because you're royalty! No no, my dear, true beauty cares not what a pony is, but who a pony is! Anypony can be beautiful; I simply enjoy helping them along.” Smiling, she said, “and to prove it to you, I'll improve your old cloak.”
Within a few minutes, she had hemmed it in and added a few flairs of her own. It was still simple; the brown, rough fabric was still there, but the rips and tears of Valiant's journey were fixed as perfectly as if they had never existed at all. Rarity had also added extra padding to the hood and had cross stitched a small sun at the chest area, for “extra flair,” as she called it.
“I do not know what to say!” Valiant exclaimed as the cloak was returned to him. “Surely I must owe you something this time?”
Rarity smiled. “I already told you, it's nothing at all! Seeing other ponies happy with their fashions is all the reward I need! Now my dear, you must tell me the rest of your story some other time. I'm afraid I have a deadline to meet; surely you know how it is! Have fun seeing the town!” She escorted them to the door and, with a final wave, sent them on their way back to town.
Valiant, sporting his newly redesigned cloak, turned to Fluttershy and said, “That was unlike anything I have ever experienced... That was one of the most generous ponies I have met in my lifetime.”
Smiling, Fluttershy nodded. “Almost everypony who meets her thinks so. She can be conceited at times, but she has a generous heart.”
Valiant pondered this for a few moments, before abruptly changing topics. “Oh! I am sorry... that little detour appears to have used up a bit of time. How far is it to the market?”
Looking at the sky, Fluttershy gasped. Judging by the sun, there was barely four hours of daylight left. “Not far now,” she said. “We should have plenty of time to get there and back before dark.”
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Author's Comments
Hope you all enjoyed it! Really tried to cut down on the "head-hopping" as Tealove put it. I'm so used to roleplaying with many characters that I didn't realize it might be viewed as amateurish. (Although, considering this is my first fan-fiction, I pretty much am an amateur.)
Let me know what you thought! I actually have most of it written already, so suggestions for story arcs will more than likely not be implemented. However, little comments like Tealove's about better proofreading and general style are greatly appreciated. Thanks a lot for reading! See you all next Monday!
“So this is the market,” Valiant said as he looked around at the various shops and stalls. “It seems a bit small... still, it is very charming!”
Fluttershy nodded as she finished paying for a few carrots. Placing them in Valiant's saddlebags, she said, “It might look small at first, but it has everything we need.” She walked over to the next stall and began to inspect the various heads of lettuce. Picking three, she paid for them before bringing them over to where Valiant stood, observing her brief interaction with the stand owner.
As she placed them in the saddlebags, he asked, “If you do not mind my asking, why are we buying so much food?”
Turning to face him, Fluttershy replied, “Well, the market is only open every other day, and the animals get hungry if I don't feed them...”
“Animals?” Valiant asked. “Just how many are in your care?”
“Hmm... Let's see...” Fluttershy said, wrinkling her brow in thought. “I don't really know for sure... I've never counted them.” Smiling, she continued, “It would probably be over thirty though. I just love taking care of animals! It's my special talent you know.”
Valiant nodded. So that's what her cutie mark meant. He had wondered about the butterflies since the moment he saw them. It made perfect sense. Lost in his thoughts, he missed the next thing she said. “I am sorry, would you mind repeating that?” he asked.
“Oh...” she repeated, “I was just asking what your talent was... I mean... does it have something to do with your... weapons?” She shuddered softly.
Valiant cocked his eyebrow. “I must admit, I am slightly surprised at the question. Surely you noticed, but I do not actually have my cutie mark yet.”
Fluttershy gasped. “But... I thought... I mean... Aren't you a little old to...”
Valiant nodded. “I had the same thought when I was a foal, but my father once told me that although normal ponies receive their marks at a fairly young age, the life-span of an alicorn is so long it can take well into adult life for them to find their special talents. Also, since the special talents of alicorns are usually extremely powerful, the events that cause the marks to appear are often... catastrophic and extremely hard to trigger.” Noticing her troubled expression, Valiant said, “Do not worry! I shall receive my mark when the time is right.”
Fluttershy cocked her head in thought, replying, “I... think I understand... I hope you get it soon! I'm excited to find out what it is!" Inwardly, she suddered again, hoping it wouldn't be something violent. Outwardly, she smiled and said, "Anyway, this is the last stall, and then we can go home!”
Behind the counter sat an orange colored earth pony, wearing a large brown hat matched in size only by the smile on her face. “Ya'll come on back now!” she shouted towards her previous customer, tipping her hat in a friendly gesture. Turning towards Valiant and Fluttershy, she said, “Howdy, welcome to...” recognizing Fluttershy, she said, “Well howdy there Sugarcube! Ya here to visit or shop?”
“Shop please!” Fluttershy said, smiling.
“Well alright then!” the orange pony said, gesturing toward the apples arranged at the front of her stall. “The finest apples in town! Just fer' you, I'll give ya a fifty percent discount, how's that sound?”
Valiant stood in silence as he watched the two ponies converse. After a few moments, Fluttershy seemed to remember he was there. “Oh!” She exclaimed, cheeks reddening in embarrassment, “I almost forgot! Applejack, this is my frie...”
At that moment the orange pony charged forward, grabbing Valiant by the hoof and shaking it up and down enthusiastically. “Well hi there!” She shouted, continuing to grin from ear to ear, “I don't exactly know who ya are but any friend of Fluttershy's is a friend a' mine! I'm mighty pleased to make yer acquaintance mister...”
Valiant paused for a second, his whole field of vision spinning from the violent hoof shaking. “My name is Valiant Daybreak,” he said finally. “I just moved to town and Fluttershy has graciously agreed to show me around. She is letting me stay at her house until I can acquire a place of my own.”
“Ah yer new in town!” The earth pony said, releasing his hoof at last. “Well ya couldn't'a picked much better a guide than Fluttershy! Very nice to make yer acquaintance!” Suddenly all business, she turned back to Fluttershy, asking, “Now, how many did ya want?”
Fluttershy browsed a while, before finally selecting ten apples. She paid for them, and gingerly placed them in the saddlebags. “Thanks Applejack!” she said, before turning and walking away from the stand towards the edge of town.
Valiant bowed slightly, saying, “It was very nice to meet you!”
“Likewise!” the earth pony said, waving goodbye.
As they walked down the path, Valiant couldn't help but reflect on the strange events of the last few days. Just two days ago he had been homeless, and now someone had not only opened their home to him, but was trying to make him feel at home. Most surprising of all, she cared for him, not because of his royal lineage, but because he was another living being. It made him feel... good. At the same time, her presence and personality were saddening. She reminded him of… At that moment, the thoughts swimming through his head were interrupted by a voice. Turning, they saw Applejack running up to them.
Panting, she said, “Whew! Gosh ya'll walk fast! Here!” She reached into her saddlebags and pulled out a single bit, dropping it into Fluttershy's outstretched hoof. “Ya'll paid me a bit too much,” she said. “It just wouldn' be right fer' me ta keep it, so ah brought it back to ya.” Turning in the opposite direction, she began to walk away, calling back, “Have a nice day!”
Valiant stared at the bit in Fluttershy's hoof. Why would she go through all that trouble to return something so... so... insignificant? Out-loud he said, “That was one of the most honest things I have ever seen in my life.”
Smiling, Fluttershy nodded. “Applejack is a very honest pony. She couldn't lie about anything even if she wanted to, it goes against her nature. She always keeps her word, even when it seems hard... I admire that about her...” Fluttershy placed the bit into her coin purse before continuing down the path towards her house. Valiant stood in place for a minute, thinking, before following her down the path.
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Late in the night, Twilight Sparkle quickly closed the book she had been previously reading. She called to her assistant, “Spiiiike! Spike! Come here, quick!”
The dragon, having been woken up from a deep and diamond infused dream, yawned and slowly padded his way down the stairs. “Come on Twilight! It's the middle of the night, can't a guy get a little bit of sleep around here!?”
“I'm sorry Spike but I need you to take a message to the princess immediately! It’s urgent!”
The dragon's eyes widened as she told him the message he was to send. As he signed it and sent it, he asked, “Twilight, what's going on?”
“I'm not completely sure yet Spike,” the unicorn said as she began paging through another book, “But I'm going to find out.”
Author's Comments
There you are! A few more plot points revealed! Hope you all enjoyed the latest chapter. Sorry for the short length... Probably means I'll release the next chapter early. Thank you all for the support! Glad to know so many of you like it! The response to this has been much better than I thought it would be, so thanks to all of you for being awesome!
Valiant flew over the trees, his sword outstretched. The voice of Swirlbeard, the court magician, echoed in his head, “Come quickly! They're overrunning the town!” Straining his wings to gain an extra bust of speed, Valiant redoubled his efforts to reach the castle. “I'm almost there!” he mentally shouted back, receiving only silence in reply. As he flew closer to the castle, the distance seemed to become longer and longer, causing him to grow more and more tired. At last he could fly no longer and he plummeted from the sky, landing with a crash on the stone pavement below.
Immediately, the shadowy figures filling the streets below were onto him, clawing at him and wailing in his ears. “No!” he shouted, trying to fight them off with the last reserves of his strength, but there were too many. They piled on top of him, and began to laugh in his face, screaming at him, “We killed your family, your friends, everyone you loved, and now we will kill you too!” The entire pile of squirming creatures convulsed into spasms of maniacal laughter, as Valiant gasped for air under their crushing weight...
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Valiant awoke with a start, sweat dripping from his mane. Panting, he slowly got out of bed, crossing the room to look out the window at the sky. It's nearly dawn, he thought, I might as well get up... He strapped on his sword and shield before putting on his cloak. Quietly, so as to not wake up the other inhabitants of the house, he crept outside and walked silently into the forest.
After a few moments of walking, he reached a small clearing. “Perfect.” Valiant threw off his cloak, unsheathing his sword and holding it point out in front of him, standing perfectly still. Within a few minutes, dawn broke over the horizon, awakening the hundreds of animals that called the forest home. They began to move throughout the clearing, noticing the strange, unmoving thing in the middle of the clearing. A few birds, either braver or more curious than the rest, flew over to where he stood with his sword outstretched and gently perched on it, looking at him expectantly.
Ever so slowly, Valiant began to move the sword without disturbing the birds sitting on it. Slowly, carefully, he moved his sword down and across, carefully stepping in rhythm with its movement. The birds, at first a bit frightened, were now thoroughly enjoying the gentle breeze created by the slow movement of the sword as he ran through the complicated series of forms.
Valiant had always loved this part of his morning training. As he ran through the forms, the memories of watching his father perform them flowed gently through his mind, as he copied his movements perfectly from memory. His emotions, so disturbed before, did not run wild this time. Joy spread through him, as he remembered the happy times he had spent training with his father.
After an hour of forms, he gently lowered the sword, allowing the birds to dismount onto the ground. Bowing to them, he said, “Thank you for the dance,” before sheathing his sword and continuing, “This next part is a bit more dangerous, please step back.” The birds twittered in reply, before flying into the trees to watch.
Valiant stood still for a moment, before suddenly unfurling his wings. He drew his sword, gracefully leaping into a backflip. He began a series of acrobatic movements, twisting and turning, all the while slashing his sword at an imaginary foe. Sweat streamed from his forehead, creating small puddles on the ground as he flew. Finally finished, he landed gracefully back on the ground, sheathing his sword and panting with exhaustion.
A twig snapped behind him and he whirled around into a crouch, ready to defend himself, causing the occupant of the bush to yelp with surprise.
“It... It's just me... I'm sorry...” Fluttershy said as she emerged from the bushes. “I heard you wake up, but when I went to check on you, you weren't there, so I followed you into the forest... I didn't think you'd mind me watching...”
Valiant relaxed, sighing with relief. “It is quite alright,” he said, bowing at her. Remembering her earlier admission about being easily startled, he hurriedly said, “I hope I did not scare you at any point.”
“Well... It was a bit... Umm... Well... It was...” Fluttershy said, struggling for the words.
“It was awesome is what it was!” said a new voice.
Valiant spun around towards the voice, searching the trees for signs of attack.
“I'm right here Mr. Easily Startled!” came the voice again, “Above you!”
Valiant looked up to see another pegasus hovering above him, wings flapping to keep her airborne. She was a light blue, with a rainbow colored mane and tail. As he looked at her, she said, “Yeah, that's right! Me! That was some pretty wicked flying!”
The pegasus floated to the ground, folding her wings against her sides and looking at him quizzically. “Who are you anyway? I mean, you're obviously not from around here, because that was some awesome flying, and I make it a point to know who all the awesome fliers are around here.”
Good... so she's only noticed my wings so far... Valiant thought, before saying, “My name is Valiant Daybreak, I...”
The pegasus interrupted, saying, “Yeah yeah yeah, you're an alicorn... big deal, but you'll need more than that and a few sick moves to top my awesome! The name's Dash, Rainbow Dash! I'm the fastest flier in all of Ponyville! Aww... who am I kidding, I'm the fastest flier in all of Equestria!”
Well... so much for keeping my lineage a secret. Valiant thought with annoyance. I'd better find a more secret spot next time I train...
“Hey are you even listening to me Mr. Rude?” Rainbow Dash asked.
“Uh...” Valiant said.
“I didn't think so! Anyway, you told me who you were, but what are you doing here? I mean, I've sure never heard of any alicorns living in Ponyville, and there's no way you're living out here! You look way too weak to survive the night in the Everfree forest... I don't even think I could do that!”
Fluttershy came to Valiant's rescue, walking up alongside him and saying, “He's staying with me. He just got here two days ago.”
Noticing the other pegasus for the first time, Rainbow Dash said, “Oh hi Fluttershy! So, you'll vouch for this guy? He's not some sort of spy?”
“No. No he's not.”
“Well in that case,” Rainbow said thoughtfully, “it looks like we have a new pegasus in town... Well... half pegasus anyway.” Turning back to Valiant, she narrowed her eyes and pulled her lips up in a mischievous smile. “I challenge you to a race!”
“A... race?” Valiant replied.
“Yeah, a race! You know... we fly on a course and whoever reaches the finish line first wins?”
Valiant briefly considered her request. If I am seen flying around, my secret would be out in the open... Thus considered, he replied, “I must respectfully decline.”
“What!?” Rainbow yelled. “Why!?”
“Well... I do not particularly wish for the whole town to know what I am for... personal reasons. My wings are much easier to conceal than my horn, and if I am seen flying around...”
The blue pegasus thought for a second before she smiled again. “Well in that case,” she said slowly, “let's make this a little more interesting. If you win, I'll conveniently forget all about your wings. Lose, and I tell the whole town about your secret!”
Valiant stuttered. “I...”
“Oh, you don't accept? Because if you refuse to race me, that means you forfeit! You'd automatically lose!”
She has a point... With a short sigh, Valiant nodded. “You've made your terms quite clear. But I have a condition, we must race somewhere nopony will see us.”
“Pshh...” Rainbow Dash waved her hoof dismissively, “I've got that covered! There's a place called Ghastly Gorge that almost nopony ever flies through. I use it for training every now and then.”
“Alright,” Valiant said. “Lead the way.”
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After about 30 minutes of walking, Valiant, Rainbow and Fluttershy reached the gorge. Valiant ran his eyes over the course. She certainly has the advantage here, he thought. Surely she knows this course like the back of her hoof...
“The rules are simple,” Rainbow Dash said. “First one to the other end of the canyon wins. I've got to warn you, I'm pretty fast, so no crying when you lose, okay?”
Valiant looked over at Fluttershy, who gave him a nervous grin. “You... You'll do fine!” she said. “She's not... that... fast?”
“Thank you for trying to help,” he said, returning her weak smile with an even weaker one. His dream flooded back to him, and once again he saw himself unable to reach his goal in time. Grimacing, he squashed down his fears. I can do this... I must merely stay focused...
“I'll be waiting for you on the other side.” Fluttershy took off for the other end of the canyon, leaving Rainbow Dash and Valiant to warm up.
After 5 minutes of warm-ups, Rainbow Dash looked over at Valiant. “Are ya ready to lose?”
“Yes... Or... Wait...”
“Pfffhahahaha! You are a riot! To the starting line!”
The two ponies lined up on the edge of the canyon, ready to plunge in. Rainbow Dash began the countdown.
“Three. Two. One. Go!”
They were off like a pair of rockets, evenly matched at this stage of the race. Valiant pushed himself, but not quite as hard as he thought he could. He had learned a long time ago not to expend all your energy at the beginning of the race.
The racers flew through a small cave, gusts of wind from the other side briefly slowing them down. Rocketing out the other side, they began to weave their way through a tangle of thorns. One snagged on the edge of Valiant's wing, throwing him off and allowing Rainbow Dash to soar ahead. No! he thought, I can't lose this race! He pushed harder, increasing speed and slowly catching up.
“Heeey, you're not half bad,” she called back to him, “but why don't you try this on for size!” She redoubled her speed, beginning to pull away again.
Argh! As Valiant strained to increase his speed, his horn glowed, until it pulsed brightly against his mane. He gained on her, inching closer and closer. He was an inch away, then half an inch, then a quarter of an inch, and then... Whoosh! They crossed over the finish line.
Both ponies skidded to a stop on the dirt. I did it! Valiant thought, panting heavily. I must have won!
“Oh yeah! Beat you by a nose!” Rainbow Dash strutted around the finish area. “In your face Mr. Fancy Flying! I told you you'd never be able to compete with my awesome!”
Valiant looked at Fluttershy in alarm, who simply nodded and averted her eyes.
Valiant shook his head in frustration. It wasn't the fact he had lost that bothered him; he had no real interest in winning. I guess I shall have to move on from here, he thought. Once everpony knows my secret, I will have absolutely no chance of being accepted as an equal. I merely wanted to start over...
“Hey, why the long face?” Rainbow Dash asked, floating above his head with a smirk on her face. “I mean, sure you lost, but that doesn't mean you gotta be a sore loser!”
“The fact that I lost is insignificant,” Valiant replied. “Your promise to me at the beginning of the race is the reason for my current attitude. I suppose now you will tell the remaining citizens of this town about my secret?”
“Pfff,” Rainbow Dash waved off the question, “Oh that? That was just something I used to bait you to race me, and boy did it work!”
“I do not...” Valiant started.
“Oh come on! You didn't think I would just blab your big secret just like that did you? That would be like... totally lame of me! Besides, the fact that you're a friend of Fluttershy's makes you one of my friends, and I would never betray a friend! Well, thanks for the race and all, but I've gotta fly! Got winter to prepare for you know! See ya!”
With those parting words, Rainbow Dash flew off towards the town, leaving only a shimmering rainbow in her wake.
Valiant stared after her for a second, still slightly confused. “What... just happened?” he asked.
Fluttershy giggled. “Your secret is still safe. I had a feeling Rainbow wouldn't tell anyone. She may be a bit rough around the edges, but when you dig through her tough exterior, she's a true friend.”
The ponies here never cease to amaze me, Valiant thought, smiling and shaking his head. “I am truly thankful for that,” he said. “Remind me never to race her again, though. I nearly killed myself trying to keep up with her! I suppose I can consider my training over for the day. Would you like me to accompany you with anything?”
Fluttershy thought for a second, blushing slightly now that the attention was back on her. “Well... once a week I have a spa day with my friend Rarity... You remember her right?”
Valiant nodded. I do not believe I could forget her if I tried... Not knowing what a spa was, he asked, "May I come with you?"
“Well... it's always just been the two of us... I mean... you can come if you want, but...”
Taking the hint, Valiant smiled. “I understand completely! In that case, I believe I shall look around the town again. It seems like a good place to live, and I cannot wait to see more of it.” He bowed, continuing, “It would, however, give me the greatest pleasure to escort you to the... what was it called? Spa? It sounds somewhat dangerous...”
Giggling again, Fluttershy said, “Oh no, it's not dangerous at all! In fact, it's quite relaxing... and, no, you don't need to escort me there... I'm sure you'd much rather go see the town...”
Valiant smiled. He was getting used to these kinds of responses. “Please, my lady,” he began, “allow me to accompany you. It would give me the greatest pleasure imaginable to know you made it there safely.”
Blushing, Fluttershy said, “O... Okay. If you really want to...”
Together, they walked towards the town, both their hearts warming slightly at the other's company.
Author's Comments
Really intended to post this earlier in the week. Sorry guys, school kinda ran away from me. (Plus... I just plain forgot...). It's technically early, though, as promised! In case any of you are worried, no, this will not interfere with the regular posting schedule. Expect chapter 5 Monday night. What's that? You want a sneak preview? Oh, fine... if you insist...
Suddenly, Valiant began to have a strange feeling in the pit of his stomach. He looked around, certain he was being watched. At first he sensed nothing out of the ordinary, but after looking around a second time, he noticed an earth pony watching him from a seat at a small cafe. Refrain from making eye contact, Valiant thought to himself. More than likely she is merely interested in the store, not you.
There you go! Hope you all enjoyed it! Special kudos to my cousin who helped me proofread this whole thing. She's primarily responsible for my character's voice (she lit up my inbox every time she found a contraction), along with a character who will be introduced later in the story. By the way, if you find a grammatical or spelling error, it's her fault, not mine. (Just kidding of course. The fault is mine.)
“You really don't mind waiting to pick me up?” Fluttershy asked for the fourth time.
“As I said, it would be my pleasure to escort you home. I could not even dream of letting you walk home by yourself, not after everything you have already done for me. When would you like me to return?”
“Well... we're scheduled to be here for about two hours... but...”
“Great!” Valiant interrupted, “Take all the time you need! I shall return in two hours! Have a wonderful time!”
“Okay then...” Fluttershy said hesitantly, “see you soon...” She walked through the door to the spa, closing it gently behind her.
As the door closed, Valiant turned and began to think about which path to take. Let me think... I saw the market yesterday, so perhaps today I shall examine a few of the restaurants... Suddenly remembering he was had absolutely no money, Valiant decided to simply wander the town and see what interesting things he could find. Looking at the sun to gather the approximate time, Valiant mentally marked it and turned down a path that led deeper into downtown Ponyville.
The atmosphere of the town was completely foreign to him, and he stared in awe at the various things for sale in the shop windows. One shop in particular caught his eye, and he stopped for a moment to examine it through the glass. It was filled with toys of every kind, more wonderful than he could have ever imagined. He stared for a few minutes at a bright red ball, wondering how the crafters of such an item had made it so perfectly round.
Suddenly, Valiant began to have a strange feeling in the pit of his stomach. He looked around, certain he was being watched. At first he sensed nothing out of the ordinary, but after looking around a second time, he noticed an earth pony watching him from a seat at a small cafe. Refrain from making eye contact, Valiant thought to himself. More than likely she is merely interested in the store, not you.
He began walking forward again, keeping his eyes on the path ahead of him. Looking over his shoulder at the cafe, he breathed a sigh of relief as he saw the pony had evidently paid for her meal and left. Turning his head back to the path in front of him, he yelped and jumped back, as the pony in question stood directly in front of him.
“Hi! I'm Pinkie Pie! What's your name?!” the earth pony asked him, her eyes shining with excitement.
“Uh...” Valiant began.
“Uh!? Well that's a funny name! I mean, I've had friends named Umber, Olga, and Henrietta, but never one with a name like Uh! So Uh, where are you from?”
“Well,” Valiant replied, “I have traveled here from a fair distance... And my name is not Uh... It is Valiant.”
“Oh that makes way more sense! Like I said, I've never met someone named Uh before... and I guess I still haven't!” Pinkie Pie giggled to herself, before continuing, “Anyway, it's pretty obvious that you came from someplace far away! No one here dresses like that! You look all mysterious, like some sort of pony spy!” She gasped, before asking, “You're not some sort of pony spy are you?”
Valiant shook his head. This was getting extremely confusing. “No... I am not a... pony spy...”
The pink earth pony began bouncing around him in a fit of glee. “Well in that case, you must just be new and shy because you don't have any friends yet!” Pinkie Pie gasped again. “Hey I have a great idea! I can be your first friend! It'll be great! We can go dancing and have parties and bob for apples and play pin the tail on the pony and eat cupcakes and...”
“Wait a moment, please!” Valiant asked desperately. I do not understand a single thing this pony is saying... I suppose I will have to start asking questions somewhere... “What is a... cupcake?
The strange filly giggled, “Wow, you're silly, asking what a cupcake is! Everypony knows what a cupcake is!”
“No... I truly do not know... What is a cupcake? Is it a... drink made of cake?”
Pinkie Pie stopped her bouncing, turning to face him and staring him directly in the eyes. “You've never had a cupcake before?” she said, eyes bugging out at the word “never.”
Valiant shook his head. “I have never eaten a cupcake, and I am becoming extremely curious as to what exactly it is.” Perhaps if I can keep her on one topic long enough, I can find some excuse to...
“Well in that case...” Pinkie Pie grabbed him by the hoof and began dragging him towards a nearby shop. “Come with me right now!” She said. “Not knowing what a cupcake is is like... like... not knowing what happiness is!”
“Hey! Let go of...” Valiant began to protest.
“Nopey dopies!” Pinkie Pie said in a singsong voice, “We've gotta get you over to Sugar Cube Corner, and stat!” The pink earth pony quickly dragged him over to a small restaurant. It was as pink as she was, covered in fake frosting like a life sized gingerbread house.
Her grip is like a vice! Valiant thought, as she dragged him inside. I do not wish to cause a disturbance, but...
“Hi Mrs. Cake!” Pinkie Pie said to a blue earth pony behind a counter.
“Well hello dearie!” she said. “Who's your new friend?”
“This is Uh... no wait, that's wrong... His name is Valiant! He's new in town and guess what? He says he has no idea what a cupcake is! Isn't that weird!”
Valiant smiled sheepishly, shrugging at the baker pony. “I do apologize for this... I am not entirely sure what is going on at the moment...”
“Not to worry dear!” Mrs. Cake began, “Pinkie Pie can be a bit... headstrong sometimes... Is it really true that you've never eaten a cupcake before? I don't know of anypony who can make that claim...”
Valiant sighed. “Yes, it is true. Would you be so kind as to tell me?”
Mr. Cake smiled. “Oh, I can do much better than that! You see, we sell them here!”
Valiant frowned. Patting the pockets of his cloak, he said, “I apologize, but I do not have any money...”
Pinkie Pie, previously silent for an uncharacteristic amount of time, giggled. “Oh, don't worry about that silly! We're happy to give you one, right Mrs. Cake?”
“Well certainly dear! I've got one right here!” She reached under the counter and pulled out a cupcake. Walking across the room, she set it on the table in front of Valiant, who began to examine it.
It was unlike anything he had ever seen. The base seemed to be made of something spongy, like cake, but much smaller than any cake he had seen before. Atop it sat some sort of semi-solid pink... something. Gingerly, he lifted the treat and took a bite, whipping his head back in surprise. It is... unbelievably sweet! This makes even the sweetest peach seem... sour. Prepared this time, he took another, slightly bigger bite, getting a dab of frosting on the end of his nose.
“Well, what do you think?!” Pinkie Pie asked, bouncing again in anticipation.
“It... It is... quite possibly the most detectable thing I have ever eaten!” Valiant said, taking another bite.
“Oh, you're just saying that,” Mrs. Cake said, slightly embarrassed.
“No, it truly is!” Valiant finished the treat and began to carefully fold up the wrapper. “You have my greatest thanks! These must be reserved for especially rare occasions!”
Pinkie Pie giggled again. “Wow you're silly! We sell them all the time here! Although, people buy them most often for parties...” A wild look came suddenly in her eyes, and she suddenly smiled. “Hey! I have a great idea! Why don't I throw you a welcome party! I must be crazy! Why didn't I think of it before, I always throw new people welcome parties... Well, there was that one time I didn't... but that's because he wanted to be left alone... Oh yeah! A party would be awesome! And we could hold it here, and I could invite all my bestest friends, and it would help you make some friends and...”
“Hold on one moment, please!” Valiant said desperately. “I am not anypony special... I do not need a party, so please do not go through the trouble of...”
“It's not trouble silly! I just love throwing parties! I'll get to work on it right away! Let's see, we'll need balloons, and streamers, and... Oooh! Party invitations!” Noticing Valiant's slightly apprehensive look, she giggled again and said, “Don't worry you silly willy! It's no trouble at all! Now, you just go home and... Oh my gosh! I almost forgot! Where are you staying? I mean, if you're new in town, surely you must be staying somewhere...”
Should I really tell this strange pony where I live? “Well,” Valiant said thoughtfully. Making up his mind, he replied, “I'm staying with a pony named Fluttershy...”
“Fluttershy!? Why she's one of the ponies I was going to invite to this party! She's one of my bestest best friends here in Ponyvile! Anyways, I've got to get busy planning the party... It's gonna take all day! I'll make sure to drop by Fluttershy's house with the invitation and time later! See ya real soon!”
Pinkie Pie began pushing him towards the door, despite his continuing protests that he really did not want a party. “Bye!” She said, waving goodbye. “Remember, all my bestest friends are going to be there! Don't worry, you'll have lot's of friends soon!”
After the door had been closed, Valiant began to think to himself. Now what am I going to do? The last thing I need is a bunch of ponies who know who I am... So much for not putting attention on myself... Even as the thoughts went through his head, he couldn't help but smile. Somepony just invited me to a party...
Valiant glanced at the sun. It was almost time to pick up Fluttershy. Turning, he began walking back in the direction of the spa, the smile still lingering on his face.
Author's Comments
Thus concludes the slice of life portion of this fan-fiction. The story will start ramping up in the next chapter. I'm excited for you guys to read it! Thanks as always for the wonderful comments, and I'll see you next Monday!
What you have written to me is extremely interesting, but I am afraid I simply have too much to do at the moment to follow up on such a far-fetched hunch. While your theory concerning this individual is certainly plausible, it is not very likely, and I am afraid I cannot take the time right now to come and figure this out for myself. We are still in the process of rebuilding Canterlot after the recent chageling invasion, and that has to be top priority at the moment. My dear student, you must learn to trust other ponies. I know it's hard after what happened at your brother's wedding, but not every suspicious alicorn is a changeling! Give him a chance for now, and I'll look into it when I have time.
Your loving teacher, Princess Celestia
Twilight paced the floor as Spike read the letter, huffing slightly as he finished. “How can she just dismiss it like that!?” She asked no one in particular.
“Well,” said Spike, “she did say she would look into it when she had time... It's better than nothing...”
Ceasing her pacing, Twilight turned to face him. “That's true, I suppose, but if my hunch is right...”
“And what if it's not! Twilight, it's like the princess said... you can't just go accusing every suspicious pony you meet of being like Phadence.”
Twilight cocked an eyebrow. “I'm sorry... like who now?”
The dragon wrung his hands. “You know... Phadence. Phony Cadence?”
The unicorn sighed, shaking her head. Alluding to the previous conversation, she said, “I don't know Spike... There's just something... odd about that pony... I can't quite put my hoof on it, but something about him just feels like...”
“Twilight, stop.” Spike said, staring her right in the eye. “It's like the princess said, you're going to have to trust him!”
Twilight sighed again, before replying, “Okay Spike, I guess you're right. Maybe I should just...”
A knock at the door interrupted her sentence. Walking over to it, she opened it to find an extremely excited Pinkie Pie.
“Hi Twilight! Boy I'm glad you're home, cause if you weren't home, I'd have to come back later, and I've got a ton of things to do to get ready... Oh yeah! That reminds me! Here ya go!” She gave Twilight an envelope. “It's your invitation to the party this afternoon! I'm throwing it for this new pony I met today! He goes around dressed in this weird cloak like some sort of pony spy, but I know he isn't a pony spy because he said so, he's just new in town and he doesn't have very many friends so I thought I'd invite my bestest friends over so hopefully he can find some new friends!”
Pinkie Pie took a deep breath, replenishing her lost oxygen.
“Anyway, see you at the party! Be there, or be square!”
As Twilight shut the door, Spike asked, “So what was that about?”
“Oh,” Twilight began, “She's throwing some new pony a party... I tried to tell her I couldn't go but... Wait... dresses in a cloak...” She thought for a minute, before putting two and two together. “Pinkie Pie's new friend is Valiant!”
At the puzzled look on Spike's face, she explained, “Valiant is the name of that pony I was telling you about... The suspicious one?”
Spike smiled, “Well in that case, you should probably go!”
“What? Why?”
“Come on, Twilight! Pinkie Pie's party is the perfect place to get to know him! I'm sure once you've talked to him a bit more you'll stop all this Phaliant nonsense.”
Twilight stared blankly at Spike. “Phaliant?”
“Well... If his name is Valiant...”
“Yeah, Phoney Valiant, I got it.” Twilight sighed a third time before saying, “I suppose you're right, I'll go. Maybe I do just need to get to know him better...” Or maybe, she thought, I'll be able to find out what's really going on while I'm there...
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“The fact you know the pony that invited me to this party reassures me to no end.” Valiant said as he and Fluttershy walked into town. “She was definitely... different.”
Giggling softly, Fluttershy said, “Well, Pinkie Pie is slightly different... but it's a good different! She's always trying to make everypony else laugh... and she throws the best parties!”
Valiant nodded thoughtfully, still turning yesterday's events over in his head. “She certainly was a nice pony... in her own... interesting way.”
As they walked in silence, his thoughts turned to memories of home, and the grand parties his family used to throw. He could nearly taste the food, could almost hear the after dinner speech his father always gave, could feel the joy and the rush of dancing until the moon was high in the sky! Since his country's fall, he had given up all hope of ever experiencing such things again. Now, he was being invited to a party, not because it was his duty as prince to attend, but because ponies wanted him there! It was a good feeling, one that began to warm his heart the moment it was thought.
Breaking the silence, he wistfully said, “It is a beautiful night.”
Smiling, Fluttershy replied, “It certainly is.”
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The pair arrived to find the party in full swing, with the rest of the guests already in attendance. As they approached the door, Pinkie Pie, wearing a party hat, poked her head out and shouted, “Oh good you're here! Come in quick!”
Pulling Valiant inside, she shouted, “Everypony come here quick! This is the pony I was telling you about! He's new in town, so let's try to make him all welcome!”
After his eyes adjusted to the sudden indoor brightness, Valiant glanced around at the faces staring back at him. He breathed a sigh of relief as he realized he had already met everypony present. The blue pegasus who had raced him was standing a corner of the room, arguing with the orange salespony from the market, who was calmly sipping a glass of punch. Fluttershy's friend Rarity stood across the room, engaged in some sort of conversation with the extremely nice baker pony. Hmm... Valiant thought, I wonder if the other unicorn I met is... Ah. There. He quickly spotted the purple mare across the room, attempting to nonchalantly eat a cupcake, but very obviously watching him thoughtfully. Something about her makes me... nervous...
Putting on his most cordial smile, he said, “Nice to see you all again! When I heard the word 'party,' I was afraid half the town would be in attendance!”
Applejack put down her punch and replied, “Yup! I was a bit surprised myself! Why didn't you invite anypony else Pinkie Pie?”
Shrugging, she replied, “I guess I just didn't have the energy... Hey! Who wants to play pin the tail on the pony!?” She sprinted over to the wall, looking like anything but a pony who had run out of energy.
Valiant hung back as the ponies gathered at the other end of the room. Noticing his nervousness, Fluttershy approached and asked, “Don't you want to play?”
Shaking his head slowly, Valiant replied, “I... do not know how...”
Pinkie Pie, who had somehow appeared behind him, said, “It's not hard! We put a blindfold on you, then we spin you around until you're all dizzy, then you try to pin the tail on the pony!”
“I suppose I could try... but...”
“Great!” Pinkie Pie interrupted, fastening a blindfold over his eyes. “Ready?!” Without waiting for a reply, she said, “Here we go!” She spun him around 10 times, before stopping him and saying, “Alright! Go!”
The other ponies in the room began shouting directions at him, some truthful and some misleading. As Valiant struggled to make sense of it all, he heard Fluttershy's small voice calling at him to move in a certain direction. Concentrating on her voice only, he followed her directions, until he bumped gently into the wall. Reaching down carefully, he pinned the tail, stepping back and removing the blindfold to admire the fact that he had pinned it perfectly on the pony's..... nose.
Dumbfounded, he turned around until he was looking directly at Fluttershy. Giggling, she said, “I thought it looked like you knew what you were doing... so...”
Slowly, a grin spread over Valiant's face, which quickly turned into laughter. Soon, the entire room was erupting in a storm of giggles, chortling at the awkward placement of the pony's tail.
When the laughter had subsided, Valiant said, “I have not laughed quite that hard in a long time. Thank you all!”
With that, the party got into full swing. It had been a long time since Valiant had enjoyed himself so much. He almost wished the night would never end, but after three hours of partying, he began to realize how tired he was. Walking to the middle of the room, he said, “Ladies, I thank you for a truly wonderful evening! I have enjoyed myself tremendously, but it is a long walk home, and I am afraid I must...”
Pinkie Pie interrupted, “Why do you have to walk? Can't you just fly home? I mean, you haven't used your wing muscles at all tonight!”
Dead silence filled the room. Oh no... “I beg your pardon?” Valiant asked.
“Duh! You're an alicorn aren't you? You've got wings, why don't you use 'em?”
“APPLEJACK!” Rarity sputtered, as the earth pony sprayed her with a mouthful of punch.
Ignoring her, Applejack shouted, “He's a what now?”
“An alicorn! You know, has both a horn and wings? Most likely royalty of some kind? Isn't it obvious?! I mean, DUH! You can tell just by looking at him!”
Applejack looked at Valiant in awe, before asking, “Is... Is it true?”
Sighing, Valiant removed his cloak, allowing his wings some freedom. “Yes, it is true.”
“Well I'll be...” Applejack said, shaking her head in wonder. “And all this time I thought you were just an ordinary pony! I'm sorry if mah country demeaner offended you yer' high...”
“Stop!” Valiant shouted, before looking at the floor. “Please... I am an ordinary pony... I... I do not want special treatment from anypony, so please do not...”
“Tell anyone?” Twilight asked from the back of the room. Stalking forward, she asked, “And why not, may I ask? You said that before... you 'don't want any special treatment,' but why is that exactly?! Something about your story just doesn't add up! What are you hiding? Well?”
By this point, she had crossed the room and was standing in front of him, staring him directly in the eyes.
“I...” he began.
“It's just a little too convenient that you just 'happened' to be the 'last surviving member of your race,' isn't it? If everyone else died, why did you survive? Is that why you were so anxious for nopony to recognize you? I bet you're not even a prince at all! I bet you were responsible for all their deaths, weren't you!? In fact, why don't you just leave, before you do the same thing to us!”
“Twilight!” Fluttershy exclaimed.
Memories flooded back to Valiant: his friends, lying on the ground; his father, bleeding and dying... and his brother, standing over it all with a look of glee on his face. Emotions began to well up in him again, but this time they weren't emotions of sadness... but of anger.
“You want to know what happened?!” he yelled, startling Twilight so that she stepped back a few paces. “Fine! I will tell you! I w\ent to find help! After I had flown for a few hours, I knew something was wrong, so I turned back. By the time I got back, it was too late. They were all gone, and there was NOTHING I could do to save them!”
By this point, Valiant was practically screaming. “My brother; my cowardly, thieving, scheming brother had betrayed us all! I arrived at the castle in time to see my father draw his last breath, as his own son plunged a sword through his chest! I... I couldn't save them, so I fled! I wandered for months, looking for a place to settle down, someplace where I could forget the past! I disguised myself because I am a failure; not worthy of special favors! In fact, I am not worthy of anything! Thank you, my lady, for reminding me of that! Fare-thee-well!”
Valiant burst through the doors of the bakery, soaring up into the air and rocketing south, faster than he had ever flown before. Tears streamed from his eyes as he fled, running down his cheeks and falling to the ground below.
Inside the bakery, an extremely guilty feeling unicorn suddenly felt her eyes doing the exact same thing.
Author's Comments
There you go guys. Sorry if my horrible writing style distracted from the emotion I tried to interject into this thing. What do you guys think of this new development? Think Valiant's still hiding anything? More plot advancements in the next chapter.
Good news for me: I get fall break this week! This translates to good news for you, as I will probably post the next chapter (which is kinda short anyway) a bit early... Hmm... Let's say Thursday. Alright! It's a date! See you Thursday!
The sun rose over the horizon, as it did nearly every morning, shedding light on a solitary figure taking shelter in one of the less cracked buildings in the ruins. The cloak he wore, once newly repaired and beautiful, was torn and dirty from his crash landing the previous night.
Around noon, Valiant Daybreak slowly awoke. Where... he thought, before Twilight's words flashed angrily back at him. Why don't you just leave?! It all came back to him then. He had flown from the shop, tears streaming from his face like miniature waterfalls. Flying until he could fly no farther, he had crashed to the ground. Sobbing, that wasn't right... knights do not cry, he had drug himself into the shelter of a ruined house, emptying his tear ducts until the sweet embrace of sleep carried all the pain away.
Returning his mind to the present, Valiant drug himself into the sun, closing his eyes in pleasure as it warmed his body. He had always liked the sun. He didn't know why, but it always filled him with a sense of peace and security. He was at his top form during the day, and could do things he never could at night time.
Even though the sun warmed and rejuvenated him on the outside, it could not fix the cold and lonely feeling he had inside. Tears began to stream down his face, quickly turning again to sobs. No! Knigts do not cry! he thought, but the tears came anyway. As all his sadness and anger built up again, he could think of no other way to vent the pressure building up within him than to yell.
“Why!?” he screamed at the sky. “Why did you have to die and leave us all alone!? If you had not gotten sick NONE of this would have happened!” As his sadness increased, he choked out, “Why did you not get better...” He collapsed on the ground again, broken, sobbing uncontrollably.
After he had lain there for a few minutes a voice, as soothing as the sun itself, gently said, “What is the matter, my little pony? What heartbreak forces you to be so sad?”
Valiant whirled around, his eyes widening as he took in the rainbow colored mane, the white fur and the deep, rose-colored eyes. “M... Mother?” he asked, shock spreading over his face.
Princess Celestia shook her head. “No, my little pony, not your mother, but her sister.”
“Her... Sister...? You mean...” Valiant searched through his limited memory, eyes lighting up as he stumbled upon the alicorn's true identity. “Aunt Celestia!?” At the elder pony's nod, Valiant sprang forward, kneeling on the ground in a cordial bow. “I... I'm sorry my lady,” he stuttered, eyes continuing to water. “Your sister... she...”
Celestia knelt beside him, wrapping her wings around him in a comforting embrace. “Shh... It's alright. You've been through quite an ordeal, haven't you?”
As he looked into her gentle, knowing eyes his tears dried up, replaced with all the guilt he had carried with him since the fall of his kingdom. Unable to face her, he lowered his eyes in shame. “I... I couldn't save them. Not my mother when she got sick... nor my father... and finally, the whole kingdom fell..." He stood up, turning around walking a short distance away. “I am a failure. I cannot protect anypony I care about. My country's demise is my fault...”
Looking sternly into Valiant's eyes, Celestia shook him forcefully. “Stop it!” she said. “What happened was not your fault! You can't blame yourself for the mistakes your brother made!”
Valiant's shocked eyes widened. I never mentioned... “How did you...?”
“Twilight Sparkle is my personal student. Last night she wrote to me and told me what happened. You left behind six worried ponies when you fled. Two in particular come to mind: Twilight is so eaten up with guilt about what she did that she refuses leave her house... and I've been forced to post an armed guard at Fluttershy's cottage; she keeps venturing into the Everfree forest to try and find you. She truly cares for you Valiant...” Almost as an afterthought, she added, “...they all do.”
The truth in that statement swirled throughout Valiant's soul, clashing with the feelings of guilt he held inside. “Even ... even though they know the truth... they would still care about a failure of a prince like me?”
Celestia frowned. “You are not a failure, my little pony. Stop saying you are.” Changing her demeanor, she said, “Those six ponies will love you no matter what you do. You are their friend, Valiant, and they do not turn their backs on their friends.”
Valiant was silent for a long moment. Turning his head downwards, he quietly asked, “Can I truly go back after all I have said, and all I have done?”
“My little pony, the question is not whether you can or can't go, but whether you will. That is a choice I will leave up to you.” Celestia stood up and stepped back a few steps. “If you ever need to see me, my palace is in Canterlot, at the top of the mountain to the north. Just remember Valiant, you are truly lucky to have friends... no... family, that care about you like these six ponies do.”
Valiant watched her fly away, until she was merely a speck in the distance. What should I do? He shrugged off his cloak, picking it up with his hooves and examining it. A fierce look of determination spread across his face as he realized he did not need it anymore. Casting it on the ground, he disappeared into the surrounding forest, letting his steps direct him back towards Ponyville... towards... home.
Author's Comments
There you have it guys! Short, but hopefully sweet. Lest you think Valiant's story is almost over, fear not! This marks the half-way point! I hope you guys enjoyed it, and I look forward to hearing from you next Monday! Thanks as always for your comments!
Twilight looked bad. She had had bad mane days before, but nothing like this. Her mane was a mess, sticking out in all directions like spines on a purple cactus. Complementing this unsightly mess were her eyes, bloodshot and swollen from a night of non-stop guilt-induced tears. She sat in the back room of the library, clutching her quill pen in a magical vise-grip. A soft knock outside her door startled her out of her stupor.
“Twilight dear?” Came Rarity's muffled voice form the other side of the door, “You must come out! You can't blame yourself forever!”
“Go away!” she shouted, wishing to be left alone with her sorrow. “I can too blame myself forever! All these years learning and studying the power of friendship have obviously taught me nothing!”
A distinctly country voice resonated through the door. “Rarity's right Twi! Ya can't just stay locked up in there fer the rest of yer life! Yer always so quick to forgive us when we mess up, but ya gotta learn to forgive yer'self!”
“Just leave me alone!” Came the reply. Outside the door, Rarity glanced at Applejack, who shrugged and said in a low tone, “Just give 'er time. She'll come around sooner or later.”
After Valiant had disappeared, Twilight had locked herself in the back room of the library, refusing any food, water or company that was offered to her. That was about 30 hours ago. Now it was nearly 3:00 AM of the following day, and her friends were becoming concerned.
Rarity and Applejack returned to the main room of the library, sitting down on the floor next to a concerned Spike.
“How is she?” the dragon asked.
“Not very good I'm afraid,” said Rarity, obvious concern showing on her face as well. “She still blames herself for Valiant's disappearance.”
Frowning, the dragon responded, “Well... from the sound of things, it kinda was her fault... I mean, if she hadn't yelled at him...”
“Spike!” Applejack yelled, causing the dragon to reflexively duck his head. “Twilight was just concerned for our safety! You know how hard it is fer' her to trust alicorns after what she went through! Why, I've even heard her accuse Princess Luna of bein' a changeling since then!”
Shamefully, the dragon said, “I know... Do... do you think she's going to be alright?”
Rarity gave a reassuring nod. “Of course she will. If I know Twilight, she'll come around within a day or two at most. The important thing is to be as supportive of her as we can when she does open up again. We need to show her that we still love...” A piercing scream filled the night, interrupting Rarity's well-meant sentence.
“What in tarnation?” Applejack asked, poking her head out the window. At that moment, a deafening roar was heard throughout the town, causing the hair on the back of Rarity's neck to stand on end.
“Applejack... please tell me that's not a...”
Applejack nodded. “It's an Ursa...”
The door to the back-room flew open, admitting an exhausted looking Twilight. “An Ursa Minor.” She said, finishing Applejack's sentence. Fierce determination replaced the sadness on her face, as she sprinted out the door to confront the invading beast. As she galloped down the street, she noticed two young male unicorns running for their lives towards her.
“SNIPS, SNAILS!” she yelled, as they charged towards her.
“It wasn't our fault this time! Honest!” Snips yelled, as he ran past her. “Just help us! It's right on our tails!”
“Yeah...” giggled Snails as he ran, “I think it remembers us...”
“Less talk pea-brain!” Snips yelled, as the disappeared behind a nearby house. “Run faster!”
Twilight gazed into the night, waiting for the bear-like creature to show itself around the corner. She didn't have to wait long, as the Ursa rounded the corner at full speed, running straight into a magical barrier which Twilight had conjured up.
Growling, it clawed the air as Twilight magically lifted it off its feet. She conjured up the wind, attempting to create the same musical tune she used during the last ursa invasion, but the dry autumn reeds merely snapped and began to fly throughout the town.
The Ursa growled again, raking it's claws at the barrier, slowly beginning to break through. If she didn't do something soon it would break completely, and then... Twilight didn't even want to think about what would happen then. As a last resort, she mentally braced herself and launched the creature out of the town, right up to the edge of the forest. To Twilight's relief, the Ursa Minor turned and, whimpering, scampered back into the forest.
Sighing, Twilight collapsed on the ground, utterly spent from propelling that much mass such an incredible distance. Her fear redoubled, however, when a second roar, twice as deafening as that of the Ursa Minor, echoed throughout the town. Twilight's heart sank as slowly, out of the forest, emerged the giant, purple shape of an Ursa Major. She knew she had never fought something that huge before... Gulping, Twilight swallowed her fear. While she was deathly afraid, she knew that if she didn't stop it, the rampaging creature would destroy the whole town.
The Mother Ursa's eyes roamed the town, searching for the being who dared harm its cub. Locking onto Twilight, it began its slow, thundering walk towards the center of town. Stepping onto a house, it crushed it, sending the ponies inside screaming away in fear as they barely managed to get out in time.
Running forward, Twilight levitated some of the bigger pieces of rubble left over from the house, sending them crashing into the Ursa, who merely shrugged them off, no more irritating to it than flies to an elephant. Panting with exertion and almost completely drained, she tried the last spell she could think to use; one which she had only recently mastered: fireball. With the last of her strength, she created an enormous ball of flame, which grew in size with each passing second. When she could hold it no longer, she let it go, sending it towards the Ursa at high speed. The creature roared in pain as its fur was singed by the giant projectile.
Twilight's strength finally gave out, as she forcefully sat on the ground, wheezing. " I did it..." she panted, "Surely it will give... up..." Staring in disbelief, Twilight could only watch as the smoke dissipated, revealing the Ursa Major completely unharmed and quickly bearing down on her. As it reached her, it reared back it's right arm, preparing to crush the offending filly with its claws. Twilight screwed her eyes shut, waiting for the blow to land.
A screeching sound was heard as metal slid against claw. Realizing she wasn't dead, Twilight opened her eyes, gasping in astonishment at her savior; the last pony she ever expected to see coming to her rescue. Her mind still numb from shock, she could merely sit and stare at him. Wow... she thought numbly, Without his cloak, Valiant is much more handsome than I ever imagined... Of course, when you work out as much as he probably does, beauty IS a typical side effect. I wonder what I would look like if I put down the books every once in a while and...
Valiant coughed, straining at the weight of the Ursa's arm. “Pardon me, m'lady, but... Would you mind moving? This is... somewhat heavy.”
Blushing with embarrassment, Twilight speechlessly nodded. She slowly crawled out from under the massive paw and limped back towards the library, assisted by Applejack and Rarity, who had happily come out after they realized their friend was okay.
Once Twilight was inside, Valiant rolled to the side, allowing the claw to fall to the ground. The Ursa growled in frustration as it watched its prey escape inside. Bringing out his shield, Valiant yelled at it, challenging it to fight him instead of attacking the library. The Ursa was momentarily confused, but after a few seconds turned and swung it's massive paw at Valiant, who took the blow in his shield, saving him from the initial injury but unfortunately not preventing him from flying backwards through the wall of a nearby house.
Valiant disentangled himself from the rubble and, coughing, shook the dust from his body, unfurling his wings and taking to the sky with a battle cry. The Ursa swept its paw forward again, but Valiant was ready for it this time. With a quick midair flip, he dodged the claws, whirling back around to bring his razor-sharp blade down on them, severing them from the Ursa's hand.
The Ursa bellowed in pain as it's claws were severed. Now defenseless with one hand, it changed tactics. Swiping with its uninjured paw, it waited until Valiant dodged out of the way and slammed the injured one down on him before he could react again. The alicorn slammed into the ground, the force of impact creating a small crater where he crashed.
The ponies in the library could only watch as the Ursa Major raised it's massive paw and slammed it into the crater, creating small earthquakes throughout the town. No... Twilight thought. No no no no no! He's alright! He's got to be alright! Contrary to her hopes, no signs of movement came from the crater; Valiant was either dead, or close to it. Chuffing with victory, the Ursa suddenly remembered its previous prey. Turning its back on the crater, it began to shuffle slowly over to the library, intent on finishing what it started. Shakily, Twilight stood to her feet, standing protectively in front of her two friends.
“I... I'm sorry girls...” she stuttered. “The Ursa Major is angry at me. If I go outside, it may take me and leave the rest of you alone.”
Despite their protests, Twilight opened the door and stepped outside. As she walked towards the Ursa, Celestia, somehow oblivious to the events of the town, began to raise the sun, driving away the shadows of the night. Princess... I'm sorry... Twilight thought, as she stepped forward to meet her doom...
As the sun's light touched the crater, a bright beam shone from within, stopping Twilight in her tracks. What is... A shining white figure slowly rose from the crater, carrying with it a giant, flaming sword. Surprised, the Ursa turned towards the mysterious creature, bellowing in fright as it saw the sword. It had already been burned once today, and it was not eager to try it again.
A loud voice resonated from the shining figure. “BE GONE FOUL CREATURE OF THE NIGHT! THOU HAST TERRORIZED THE GOOD PONIES OF THIS TOWN LONG ENOUGH! GO BACK TO THE FOREST FROM WHENCE YOU CAME!”
The figure flew towards the Ursa, who began to slowly back up, frightened of the flaming sword. It gave a final bellow, as if it wanted to have the final word, before it turned and fled at full speed back into the Everfree forest.
Cheers erupted from across the entire town, which at this point had begun to gather at the site of the battle. The mysterious figure slowly began to float down into the middle of the cheering crowd, the glow slowly fading from his body. By the time he reached the ground, all doubts as to the pony's identity were shattered, his blonde fur and wavy brown mane now clearly visible. As his feet touched the ground, Valiant Daybreak, Prince of Coralland, grinned sheepishly at the crowd before allowing exhaustion to finally take hold. As he collapsed on the ground, the world began to fade to blackness, but before it could do so completely, he noticed a familiar pair of butterscotch colored legs uncharacteristically push their way through the crowd and stop by his side.
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3000 miles away, a pair of bright, yellow eyes slowly opened. Their owner moved from his desk, alerting the guard outside his room.
“Prince!” he said, as he entered the room, “Is something the matter?”
The Black Prince curled his lips up into a smile, showing his yellow pointed teeth. “No, lieutenant. In fact, alert the cooks to open the celebratory wine! I shall be reunited with family soon!”
A puzzled look washed over the guard's face. “... Prince, sir?”
“Never-mind lieutenant,” The Prince said with a gesture of dismissal. “Return to your post.”
“Yessir!”
As the guard moved back into the hallway, The Prince smiled again. That immense power surge could only have come from one pony... My brother is alive.
Author's Comments
There you go! I sincerely hope you enjoyed it! What did you think of the chapter? And what do you think of this new development? Eager to learn more about The Black Prince? Continue to follow the story! I shall post the next chapter next Monday! Thanks again for the comments and suggestions! Have a great week!
“Not to worry, he is merely exhausted. He should wake up in a matter of hours.”
“Oh... Are you sure doctor? Is he really alright?”
“For the fourth time, yes. He merely needs his rest...”
Valiant slowly opened his eyes. The last thing he remembered was dodging that strange bear thing's paw..... The Library! He sprang from the bed, knocking into the heart monitor next to his bed and causing it to topple over with a loud crash. At the sound two ponies quickly entered. The first was dressed in a white coat.... he didn't seem hostile, but...
Valiant's assessment of the strange pony was never finished as Fluttershy, the second pony, tackled him at high speed, sending him reeling backwards onto the bed.
“Valiant! Oh I'm so happy you're okay! I mean, you ran away, and... and then... the Ursa Major and....” Tears welled up in her eyes.... “I thought you were dead.....”
Valiant wrapped his wings around her in a warm embrace, warmth spreading through his body at the contact. “I know M'Lady.” he said soothingly, “I am truly sorry for the worry I have put you through... When Twilight accused me of destroying my own country, she came so near to my perception of the truth that I began to doubt my worth. I fled because I wanted to spare all of you from experiencing an inevitable future failure. I did not realize the depth of your friends' care for me... Nor did I realize the depth of your care...”
The doctor cleared his throat. “Excuse me, I hate to break up such a touching moment, but you need your rest... That battle must have taken a lot out of...”
Valiant shook his head. He appears to be a cleric or healer of some sort... Letting go of Fluttershy, he stood up, replying, “Thank you for your concern, kind sir, but I am perfectly fine. Alicorns such as I have extremely fast recovery rates... We require about half the rest of other ponies.”
The doctor blinked, processing this new information. “Hmm...” he said, scratching his chin with his hoof, “I've never read that, but I've never actually treated a pony like you before, so..... I suppose I'll allow you to leave, on one condition: No more fighting Ursa Majors until you are fully recovered! You gave everypony in town quite the scare!”
Chuckling, Valiant said, “Gladly done. I do not wish to repeat that fight anytime in the foreseeable future.” Shaking the doctors hoof, Valiant thanked him and walked through the door.
As he exited the hospital, cheers erupted from the crowd of ponies waiting outside. Valiant ducked his head, slightly embarrassed, as he was surrounded by ponies asking him various questions.
“Who are you?”
“Where do you come from?”
“Are you taken?”
“Would you like a muffin?”
Overwhelmed by all the questions, Valiant opened his mouth to attempt an answer before a familiar voice broke in above the din.
“Yeah yeah yeah, alright everypony, back it up, give the hero some space here!” Rainbow Dash landed on the ground in front of Valiant, shooing ponies out of the way with her hooves. “There'll be plenty of time for Q and A later, right now I've been given orders to escort him to the train station...”
“What for!?” Came a shout from the crowd.
Rainbow Dash quickly scanned the crowd to locate the interruptor. “For your information Stormy Weather, Princess Celestia herself has invited him to her castle.” Glancing at the crowd, she said challengingly, “Now, unless there are any further interruptions...”
Grumbling, the crowd gradually dispersed, going back to their business.
“Whew! Glad that's over... I mean, I'm all for ponies worshiping over other ponies, but that was ridiculous! Anyway, we'd better get going!” Taking to the air, Rainbow Dash yelled, “this way!” before rocketing in the direction of the train station.
Valiant glanced at Fluttershy. “I do not wish to keep the princess waiting... but I am still slightly tired. I would rather walk if that is alright... What do you say?”
“So... this is what you call a... Locomotive?” Valiant asked, glancing in curiosity out the window of the train as it sped away from the Ponyville station. After arriving at the train, Valiant and Fluttershy had been quickly ushered into a private car of the train, already occupied by an extremely impatient Rainbow Dash. As they took their seats, the rest of their friends began to arrive and the train was quickly on it's way.
Glancing at Applejack, who was seated next to him, Valiant continued, “It is extremely fast! Coralland had no forms of transportation this luxuriant.”
“It's pulled by some of the fastest ponies in Equestria!” Applejack said. “They have to work at it for years before they learn to work as a team the way they do.”
“Pffff...” Rainbow Dash said, waving her hoof dissmisively. “I could easily outrun 'em.”
Applejack chuckled. “Yeah, like you outran all those other ponies at the runnin' of the leaves?”
The pegasus glared at her friend, turning slightly red. “Hey, that's not fair! If you hadn't cheated...”
“Ha! Me cheated? You were cheatin' right along with me!”
“Girls, please!” Rarity yelled, seated next to Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie clear on the other side of the car. “All your yelling inside this confined space is bad for my skin... And I simply must look perfect for our audience with the Princess...”
“Are you kiddin'?” Applejack fired back. “Yer' skin's not gonna change enough ta matter durin' this short train ride!”
Rarity gave a slight, “Humph!” before returning her attention to her magazine.
I suddenly understand the proverb, 'too many hens make a loud coup...' Valiant thought. Chuckling at the thought, he was suddenly aware of somepony watching him. Looking across the room, he spotted Twilight staring at him above the top of the book she was reading. As he looked at her, she quickly looked down, pretending to be lost in her book.
More than likely she is still angry about my harsh words at the party, he thought. Well... no time like the present to make amends.
“Would you excuse me please ladies?”
“Yeah yeah, sure. Now, what did you just say Applejack!?” Rainbow Dash challenged as Valiant left. Rising from his seat, he crossed over to the empty one next to Twilight, who continued to read her book, pretending to be oblivious to his presence.
Clearing his throat, Valiant softly said, “I lost my temper when we last spoke. For that, I am truly sorry." Checking himself, he continued, "Well, that and for abandoning you all afterward. A true knight does not let his his problems arouse his anger... neither does he run from them. May I ask your forgiveness?”
Twilight was momentarily stunned, incredulous that he should be the one apologizing. “I don't understand.” She said quietly.
Confused, Valiant asked, “You do not understand... what?”
Putting down the book, Twilight replied, “I don't understand why you're the one apologizing... I mean, I'm the one who was in the wrong! I offended you, I yelled at you, I even accused you of destroying your own country... and you're sorry?”
Without hesitation, Valiant replied, “With all of my heart.”
Tears welled up in the unicorn's eyes. “I'm so sorry!” she said suddenly. “If I had known what kind of pony you were... All the terrible things you had gone through... I never would have said any of those things... And even after that, you saved my life!” She looked away, softly adding, “I don't deserve you as a friend...”
It was Valiant's turn to be surprised. “Twilight... My father taught me something before he died. He told me that friends protect each other, no matter what happens. By telling me to leave, you were merely trying to protect your friends. As for my coming to your rescue,” Valiant chuckled again. “M'lady, that's what a knight does: He comes to the aid of those who need it.”
Blinking away her tears, Twilight asked, “Is there any chance we can just... start over? Like none of this ever happened?”
Smiling, Valiant replied, “I would like that very much.”
“Thank you,” she said, giving him a quick hug.
After returning the friendly gesture, Valiant got up and returned to his seat.
“Nuh uh! I would totally kick your butt in a Karate competition!” Rainbow Dash was saying.
Applejack laughed. “Oh yeah right. What would ya do, create a breeze and try to knock me over?”
“No!” Rainbow Dash said, “I've got some serious moves, right Valiant?”
Somewhat startled at being pulled into the conversation, Valiant replied, “Wait a moment, please! I... I wish for no part in this!”
“Just tell us which one a' us would win in a fight? Come on, ya' know both of us!”
“Uh... Err... Umm....” Valiant said, searching the cabin for an escape. “I do not... Fluttershy! Please, help!”
The entire cabin erupted into giggles at Valiant's flustered plea. Finally realizing the humor, Valiant laughed as well, before relaxing back into his seat. Utterly relaxed, he sighed with contentment. So... This is what home feels like... I had almost forgotten...
Author's Comments
Sorry again for the late post guys... My church has been having an outreach for Halloween from 5-10 every day this week since Sunday... I've been so tired at the end of each day that I've just been coming home and crashing. Thanks for your patience! It means a lot!
On the bright side... nothing this Monday! This means you only have to wait 4 days until the next chapter! Yay! Thanks again for reading and commenting. Hope you guys enjoyed it!
“I must say... I have attended many royal courts before, but that was by far the most... interesting...” After arriving in Canterlot, the group had quickly been escorted to the royal palace, where their presence was announced in the royal court with much fanfare and aplomb. After their brief “official” audience with Princess Celestia, the group had been taken to her private dining hall, where they were now relaxing.
“Yeah,” Rainbow Dash replied. “I thought I was gonna die laughing at the look on that trumpet player's face when Pinkie Pie asked him if he could play the Pony Pokie!” Laughter burst from the group again, filling the room with its sound.
“Well, it certainly sounds like everypony is having a good time,” said Princess Celestia as she entered the room.
“We certainly are, Princess,” Twilight said, walking over to her teacher. “Thank you for inviting us!”
Smiling, Celestia replied, “You are very welcome Twilight.” As she looked around the room, she said, “So, I heard there was some sort of disturbance in Ponyville last night.”
Pinkie Pie jumped up. “Oh yeah! It was AMAZING! First the Ursa Minor came, and it was like, 'GRR!' and then Twilight was like, 'Zap!' and then the Ursa Major came, and it was like 'RAWR!' and Twilight was like, 'blam!' but the Ursa Major was like, 'Haha! You're puny attacks can never beat me!' then Twilight was like, 'flop,' and Valiant was like 'Swoosh, slash, wham!' and the Ursa Major was like, 'A ha I've won!' and then Valiant was all, 'BEGONE FOUL CREATURE!' and the Ursa Major was like, 'NOOOOO!' and then Valiant was all, 'flop'.” Pinkie Pie took a long breath. “Yeah, it was awesome.”
Somehow managing to follow along with this extremely rapid string of words, the Princess simply nodded, and said, “I see.” Turning to Valiant, she asked, “And what do you think now, my little pony, do you still think yourself worthless?”
The group of ponies whispered among themselves. “You thought what?” Fluttershy asked.
Briefly glancing at Fluttershy, Valiant returned his attention to Celestia. Without hesitation, he replied, “No, my princess. I see now that my worth is based on more than my successes or failures. A pony's true worth is measured on his willingness to help his friends. Twilight helped me see that.”
Celestia frowned slightly. “Speaking of my student, have you made amends with her for the harsh things she said to you?”
Smiling, Valiant turned his head briefly to look at the unicorn, who smiled back. Returning his attention to the princess, he said, “We have.”
“Very good.” Smiling again, Celestia said, “In that case, I wish to ask you one more question.”
Bowing low, Valiant replied, “Merely ask, My Lady, and I shall answer.”
“Do you, Valiant Daybreak, promise to keep the peace wherever you shall go?”
Valiant's eyes grew wide as he realized the implications of her question. “I do,” he said after a brief pause, his voice shaking slightly.
Rainbow Dash nudged Twilight, whispering, “What kind of question was that?”
“I don't know,” she responded.
With a brief, silencing glance in their direction, Celestia continued. “Do you promise to defend the innocent, and give protection to all who may need it, regardless of your personal feelings for them?”
“I do.” Valiant stood up a little straighter. His heart fluttered as memories flooded back, for he had taken this oath once before.
“Finally, do you vow to keep your actions and words pure and clean, as they represent not only your own thoughts and opinions, but the thoughts of those over you?”
With a deep breath, Valiant replied, “I do.”
Celestia looked around at the ponies assembled in the room. “Let it be known that, in the presence of these witnesses, you have accepted these vows and the consequences of neglecting to follow them. I, Celestia, Princess of the Sun and Ruler of Equestria, hereby name you Sir Valiant Daybreak, Official Knight of Equestria.”
After a brief stunned silence, the room erupted in cheers.
“Well, I'll be...”
“Congratulations Valiant!”
“Well I certainly never saw that one coming...”
Celestia regally walked over to where Valiant knelt. “Will you give me your shield?”
Still kneeling, Valiant magically unstrapped his shield and floated it the few feet over to where Celestia stood.
Concentrating briefly, Celestia slightly altered the coat of arms on the shield, adding a rising sun across the bottom. Returning it to him, she said, “This symbol will let all who see it know that you serve under my throne. Bear it well.”
Rising, Valiant said, “Thank you Princess... I... Am truly honored.”
Easily picking up the slight sadness in his voice, Celestia asked, “What troubles you Sir Valiant?”
Valiant hesitated momentarily. Deciding to voice the source of his anxiety, he replied, “This is indeed a true honor, my Princess, but I do not know if I can bring myself to leave Ponyville... It... It has become my home.”
The Princess smiled. Chuckling, she said, “Why Sir Valiant, who said you would be leaving Ponyville?”
“But... If I am a royal knight...”
“You should be in the castle? No. I have plenty of guards, but Ponyville has none. Twilight is the closest thing to a town guardian they have, and she is still just an apprentice. Ponyville needs a protector. Do you accept this assignment?”
Nearly loosing his composure, Valiant quickly replied, “Yes, my Princess!” Breaking protocol, he smiled, and added, “Thank you.”
Returning his smile, Celestia replied, “You're welcome. Now, if you will excuse me, I have an official ceremony to plan. It's not everyday we elect a knight. I believe you have some very excited ponies waiting to congratulate you as well.”
Smiling, Valiant said, “Thank you again, my Princess.” Turning to his friends, he was immediately tackled and buried at the bottom of a huge pile. As the room erupted into cheers and laughter again, Valiant closed his eyes on the bottom of the pile. This day could not possibly get any better...
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The Black Prince stared off the prow of the Shining Arrow, the fastest sailing ship of the former Corralland Navy. A soft squeak of the floorboards announced the presence of his Lieutenant, who cautiously stepped onto the deck next to him.
“Sir... Sorry to bother you sir, but... Well, some of the crew are questioning your orders sir. Not me, sir, I would follow you to the ends of the earth, but...”
The Prince turned his head, causing the Lieutenant to wince in anticipation of some form of punishment. Smiling his second-in-command's involuntary movement, he said, “They are wondering why we are again invading Equestria when the last attempt failed so miserably?”
“Well... yes sir...”
The Black Prince chuckled. He expected as much. “Our queen was... slightly overconfident last time. She rushed in too quickly, without gaining enough information. Our ability to disguise ourselves is an asset only if we use it correctly. This is not an invasion mission, Lieutenant, this is a reconnaissance mission.”
“Yes, sir... I... think I understand sir...”
“And yet... you still question?”
“Well sir... It's just... how will we infiltrate Equestria without anypony becoming suspicious?”
The Black Prince grinned openly, showing his pointy, pearly-white teeth. “My dear Lieutenant, we're changelings! It's what we do.”
Author's Comments
A bit more plot advancement for you guys! What do you think? Thanks again for everyone following and commenting on my story. You guys are the reason I continue to post. See you next Monday!
The sun rose over morning Ponyville, finding Valiant already hard into his morning training. It had been a week since Celestia had dubbed him a knight, and life had reached a sort of normality. This was fine for Valiant, in fact, he enjoyed the calm feeling of the town and the repetitive, daily routine that accompanied it. Finished with his training, he returned to Fluttershy’s cottage, where he had chosen to remain for the time being despite offers from some of the carpenter ponies to build him a house of his own. Because of its position on the outskirts of town, Fluttershy’s home was the perfect location to keep watch over the Everfree forest; it seemed nearly everything dangerous came from that place.
This decision had, of course, caused whispers and small rumors to float throughout the town, nearly convincing him to change his mind and accept the offer for a new house. As a Knight, after all, he was honor-bound to consider the integrity of others as well as his own. The rumors had died down as quickly as they started up, however, and, with Fluttershy’s urging, he had agreed to stay. For no reason whatsoever, he found it nearly impossible to disagree with her for long. Even when his judgment told him the better option lay elsewhere, one look into her deep green eyes and all reason fled from him like a scared rabbit.
After a brief breakfast, Valiant left for work. While as a knight and protector of the city he was supposed to be paid a small salary, his pride forced him to search for work elsewhere. “Warriors,” he reminded everypony who pressed him about the issue, “do not protect for a fee.” After much persuasion, Applejack had graciously agreed to give him a job at Sweet Apple Acres. Winter was rapidly approaching, and the Apple family needed all the help they could get storing the final harvest of food.
“Hey, Valiant!” Applejack called as Valiant entered the farm.
“Hello!” he replied. “What do you wish me to do today?”
“Well, we're almost done dryin' out all the apples to make 'em easier ta store. That'll probably only take us 'till about lunchtime. After that we've gotta start loadin' 'em in the storage bins and distributin' em around town. That'll probably take about another week or so. After we're done, winter can finally begin!”
Nodding, Valiant replied, “Shall we get started then?”
Applejack chuckled, “Boy somepony's rearin' to get goin' today! Hold-on just one minute while I get everythin' ready.”
So began the day. The morning passed quickly, and after a brief lunch they began distributing the apples. As Valiant was still fairly new to the town, Applejack decided they would both go together. Valiant getting lost wouldn't accomplish anything, and she could unload the wagon twice as fast with a helper.
With each delivery, Valiant became more and more impressed with Applejack's courteousness. One pony had the audacity to accuse her of cheating him on a shipment. Without missing a beat, she told Valiant to swap the offending crate of apples for another one that satisfied the customer. Tipping her hat at the end of the exchange, she wished him a good day and continued on.
Their last delivery of the day was for Rainbow Dash. Since her home was located in the clouds, Applejack had Valiant fly the crate up to her house and make the delivery himself. His heart pounded as he knocked on the door, and he screwed a smile on his face, attempting to emulate Applejack's salespony attitude.
The door swung open. “Oh, hey Valiant! Uh... something wrong?”
“No!” he said, through his teeth. “I am here to bring you your crate of apples! Do they meet your satisfaction?”
“Uh... sure... I'm sure they're... fine...” Unable to control herself any longer, she burst out laughing. Fighting hard, she regained control of herself and said, “Oh man... you're reeeealy bad at this aren't you! That face was just hilarious!”
Valiant frowned, but quickly realized how ridiculous he must have looked. Chuckling, he said, “I suppose my list of strengths does not include 'traveling salespony.'”
“Yeah, you've got that right. Hey! I meant to ask you, have you seen that mural yet?”
Cocking his head, Valiant asked, “No... What mural?”
“After the thing with the Ursa Major last week, the mayor commissioned a mural of all the disasters Ponyville has narrowly avoided in the last couple years. Guess what the highlight of the mural is? You! Ponyville's never seen that kind of heroics! I couldn't say this if anypony else was around, but that was preeety impressive.”
Slightly embarrassed, Valiant said, “It was nothing... truly...”
“Are you kidding? Even TWILIGHT couldn't take on that thing! But you were all like, wham! What now!?” Sighing, she said, “Yeah... that was pretty awesome. So anyway, the mural is going to be put up in the park. Supposedly there's this hot-shot up-and-coming artist from Manehatten who's been hired to do it, so it's gonna be pretty good. She's already got the first half done! You should go check it out when you've got time!”
“Valiant! What's goin' on up there!” Applejack called.
Valiant chuckled. “I suppose I must be leaving. Thank you for the suggestion! I will go see it sometime after work! Farewell!”
“See ya!”
When Valiant had flown back to the ground, Applejack said, “Whew whee! Thought you'd gotten lost for a minute there! What'd y'all talk about?”
“She mentioned a mural of some kind in the park...”
“Oh yeah! The one about all the disasters and stuff. Well, we're done fer the day, so you can go ahead and head over there if ya like!”
“Thank you!” Valiant said. “I shall go see if Fluttershy wants to go. Would you like us to wait for you?”
“Nah, you guys go ahead and have fun. I've got a couple more things to do 'fore I get some free time tonight.”
“You are sure you do not want help with anything?”
Applejack smiled. “Go on, get outta here! Ya deserve to see that mural after all you've done fer the town in the short while you've been here!”
Taking to the air, Valiant replied, “Thank you again! I shall be here first thing in the morning to help!”
“Tomorrow's Saturday! We don't work tomorrow mornin'!”
“Right... See you the next day!”
“We don't work then either!”
By this time Valiant had flown too far for continued conversation, so he continued flying towards Fluttershy's cottage. As he reached it, he found Fluttershy deep in conversation with a pair of hummingbirds.
“Now Hummingway, it isn't nice to call others those sorts of names..." Listening for a second, she replied, "I don't care if she said it first! You two need to tell each other you're sorry! Go on!”
The two hummingbirds looked at each other, and grudgingly nodded.
“Good! Now, play nice now!”
They flew off, passing Valiant as he landed on the ground next to Fluttershy, who jumped and yelped softly as he landed.
“Oh... I didn't see you...”
Despite himself, Valiant couldn't help but smile. Her skittishness was one of the most endearing things about her. “I am truly sorry for startling you. How was your day?”
She smiled. “It was pretty good... How about yours?”
Valiant shrugged. “My day went fairly well, thank you! I was talking to Rainbow Dash today, and she told me there was some sort of mural being painted in the park.”
“Really? I haven't heard anything about it...”
“Neither had I! Do you want to go see it?”
Fluttershy smiled again. “Sure! I don't think there are any animals that need my help right now, so it should be fine!”
“Shall we go then?”
“Yes, let's.”
The pair began walking down the path back into town. The park was only a short distance away, so there was really no need for them to fly. As they entered the park, both of them stopped and stared at the sight that awaited them.
“Wow!” Valiant said.
“That's amazing!” Fluttershy said in kind.
The mural was unlike anything either of them had seen. Instead of being made with traditional paints, it had been painted with spray paint, something Valiant had never even heard of. It was massive, depicting every disaster from Nightmare Moon all the way to the Ursa Major's attack. Putting the finishing touches at the end of the mural was a fuchsia earth pony, wearing a blue painter’s cap over one of her ears. As they watched, she put down her spray can, looked at the mural and said, “Done!”
“Pardon me,” Valiant asked, “but are you the artist responsible for this?”
The earth pony turned to face him, tilting her head slightly as she took in his appearance. “Sure am!” She said. “Hey… you must be that hero everyone’s talking about! Hmm…” Abruptly turning back to face her mural, she started slightly fiddling with the design. “Let me see… his color is more like… no… ah! Got it now! There!” Turning back to Valiant with a smile, she said, “Much better!”
She stared at him quizzically again. After a few awkward moments, she said, “You look kinda familiar… Have we met somewhere before?”
Valiant chuckled. “I highly doubt that… You see, I do not exactly…”
As he was speaking, a freak gust of wind blew off the mare’s hat, causing her to shriek involuntarily.
“Oh!” Valiant said, before chasing after the hat. Quickly catching the offending article of clothing, he returned to where Fluttershy and the artist were standing. “I have retrieved it for…” Valiant cut off midstream as he noticed the ear her hat had previously been covering. It hung limply down on her face, almost as if there were no muscles inside it to hold it up.
“What?” the mare snapped. “Is there something wrong with my ear?!”
Valiant shook his head quickly, embarrassed that he had been caught staring at her ear. “No! It… It merely reminds me of somepony I used to know… But that was in a different country, so it couldn’t be…”
“Wait a second…” the artist interrupted, “My parents were nomads... I lived in another country until I was about eight… What was it called…Cordaland? No… that’s not it…”
Valiant gasped, “Corralland?”
“Yeah, that was it! Why, you from there are somethin’?”
“Yes… I was… If you used to live there, you might have known my friend! Her name was Splatter Shell…”
The artist pony balked, staring at him with a look of confusion on her face. After a few moments, she grabbed his face, tugging it as if to make sure it was real. Convinced he was not a figment of her imagination, she backed away. “Va… Valiant?” She asked.
It was Valiant’s turn to be surprised. “Yes...”
“No way!” Splatter Shell said. “I thought you weren’t real! How in Equestria did you remember me?”
“You were my only friend,” Valiant said, “How could I forget you?” Thinking for a second, he beamed, before excitedly asking, “What are you doing here!? My father said your family moved! I take it you moved to Ponyville?”
Splatter Shell, still a recovering from her surprise, replied, “Not exactly… After my parents moved us to Equestria, I discovered my talent for painting murals. Since Manehattan had a great art scene, I moved myself there when I was 14. My parents were a little worried, but I can handle myself. The real question is: what are you doing here? Aren’t you, like, the crown prince of Corralland or something?”
Valiant’s face fell. Thinking for a moment, he said, “I suppose you deserve to know. Corralland was attacked and destroyed about three months time ago.”
Splatter Shell’s mouth opened in shock, “What!? How… who… huh!?”
Valiant shook his head sadly. I suppose... she deserves to know... I have avoided this subject for long enough. Turning to Fluttershy, he said, “I believe it is time for you all to know the whole story. If you would guide my friend back to the house, I will gather the others. They deserve to know too.”
Nodding to Splatter Shell, he took off in the direction of Twilight’s library. It is time for them to know the truth.
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“My Prince, we are nearly ready.” The lieutenant bowed before the Black Prince, shuddering internally at his presence.
The Prince smiled, showing his pointy teeth. “Good. You know where he is then?”
“Yes, my Prince… Our scouts report he is in a town called Ponyville.”
“Hmm….” The Prince said thoughtfully. “Very well. It is time to begin our assault! I shall inform our Queen that we are ready. We will take this country for her majesty! Notify the battalion: we fly in one hour.”
Author's Comments
Things are heating up! We are rapidly approaching the finale! A few questions are still unanswered, however. Next episode: Valiant's full story is finally revealed! Join us here next week! Same pony time, same pony channel... err... Well, webpage, I guess...
Valiant landed at the base of the cottage, looking in through the windows at the ponies assembled inside. Everypony was there. As he put his hoof on the door he paused, taking a deep shaky breath. Steeling himself, he continued forward into the house.
As he pushed open the door, the ponies inside immediately hushed, fixing their eyes on him in anticipation of his tale. Walking further into the room, he looked each pony into the eyes, looking into Fluttershy's last. Her gentle eyes gave him a surge of courage and, taking another deep breath, Valiant began.
“When I was a foal, my country was one of the most beautiful places you could ever imagine. My parents governed the land with friendliness and humility, rather than tyranny and jealousy like some rulers. My father was the champion of his people, ready to solve any dispute with more wisdom than I could ever hope to have. If any threat arose against the kingdom, he would fly out, leading the charge against it until it was vanquished.”
“If my father was my kingdom’s courage, my mother was its love. Within her power, no pony ever went hungry or felt alone. She organized galas, parties and banquets and invited all of Corralland to attend, especially those who were looked down upon by others. My parent’s love for their country was matched only by their love for each other, and their love for my brother and me. It was a time of peace, prosperity and harmony in our kingdom.”
Valiant’s face fell. “Alas, it could not last. When I was fourteen… my mother grew ill. My father sent for the best doctors and healers our country had to offer, but there was nothing they could do. My father, who would have given his life in battle against any foe that would have arisen against her, could only watch as the love of his life was slowly destroyed by an enemy he could not defend her against. When she died, part of him died too. The love he had for his country began to diminish, until it seemed it would vanish entirely.”
“One night, during a winter blizzard, a beautiful mare appeared at our castle, seeking shelter from the cold. Although my father was still mourning the loss of my mother, he could not leave an innocent pony out in the cold. She stayed the night, and that night turned into a day, which turned into a week, which turned into months. All seemed to be well again! My father was in love, and began to act more like his old self. It was not long before he married the mysterious mare.”
“As soon as they were married, however, she began to show her true colors. No longer the beautiful, pure maiden she appeared to be, she was constantly cruel to everypony she could. My brother noticed this and, seeking to win her favor, became her personal slave. This put him in a position of power over most of the castle, who was forced to do her bidding and thus his.”
“It was not long before I noticed this. My father, however, would not listen to my pleas. His love for this terrible mare was so overpowering that his resentment grew for me with each new piece of evidence I brought forward.”
He looked at Twilight. “In my outburst at the party, I told you I left to find help. That was only a half-truth. My father, no longer tolerating my ‘false accusations’ about his queen, decided that a year-long banishment would be good for my attitude. By this time, the country was in disarray from the queen’s evil policies. Before I left, Swirlbeard, the court magician, confided in me that he felt something terrible was about to happen. With that knowledge in my heart, I began to fly east. I knew my Aunt’s kingdom lay somewhere in that general direction, and I was determined to find her and ask for her help.”
“I barely got ten kilometers away, however, before Swirlbeard contacted me telepathically. He managed to tell me that the castle was under attack before the contact was abruptly cut off… Assuming he had been overtaken by something, I flew back to the castle as fast as I could. I was too late. My step-mother and brother used my banishment as the perfect opportunity to stage a coup. They snuck into my father’s bedchambers and assassinated him in his sleep. My only consolation is that he died quickly.”
Valiant paused a moment, giving his father the moment of silence he deserved. After the brief pause, he continued. “Now in complete control, my stepmother revealed herself as the changeling queen, Chrysalis. Using dark magic, she ripped whatever love was left out of my brother, turning him into a changeling as well. Together, they moved swiftly through the castle, ripping the love out of everypony they came across, forcing them to join their rebellion.”
“When I arrived, I immediately located my brother and demanded to know what was happening. In response, he drew his sword and rushed at me with more ferocity than I have ever seen... I was quickly beaten. He knew I could not be turned, so he cut a deep gash in my left wing and flung me from the tower in which we had fought, leaving me to plummet to my death.”
“Before I hit the ground, however, I was saved. Swirlbeard was alive! Using the last of his strength, he healed my wing and told me what had happened. I was so full of anger that I began to take to the air to confront my brother again, but Swirlbeard stopped me. ‘No my Prince!’ he said, ‘Flee now, and live to fight another day! The time will come when you shall avenge your country, but you cannot help anypony in the state you are now! My magic has healed your wing, but you are in no shape for battle. Flee, and return someday to rebuild Corralland!’”
“’I won’t leave you!’ I told him, but he sadly shook his head. ‘I am old, and my strength is gone. If you took me with you, I would only endanger you. Now go!’ Seeing my hesitation, he telepathically pushed me out the window, propelling me far from the castle. Heeding his words, I fled.”
Valiant looked up at the ponies assembled in the room, blinking back tears as he relieved the memories. “Now you know the truth. I am firmly convinced that the changelings that attacked your capitol last month and my people are one and the same. It is only a matter of time before they try again. They are ruthless; hungry for the love that was stolen from them. They will not rest until they have destroyed you… or they themselves are destroyed in the process.”
“I hope that I can still be your friends now that you know that it was my people who attacked you. If you wish me to leave, I will gladly do so.”
Rainbow Dash stepped forward. “Are you kidding? That’s the dumbest suggestion I’ve ever heard!”
“I do not…”
“Of course we’re still your friends! Jeez… now more than ever, right girls?”
Everypony in the room heartily agreed.
“But…”
“Look dear,” Rarity said, “It is not as if you were the one who gave the order to attack us! Why I even feel sorry for the poor changelings now… To think… All that was because someone was manipulating them into doing it!”
Pinkie Pie giggled, “Yeah, and besides, they’re GREAT at impressions!”
All eyes turned towards Pinkie Pie.
“Ah, Sugarcube,” Applejack said, “I’m not sure that was a’tall relevant.”
Twilight stepped forward. “You will always be our friend," she said sincerely, "no matter what you tell us.”
The entire group broke out into a chorus of cheers, patting him on the back and thanking him for finally telling them the truth. After a few more minutes of hugs and reassuring pats, the group began to leave. Soon, Splatter Shell was the only guest left.
“’Shell…” Valiant began, but was cut off.
“It’s alright Valiant,” she said. “You did your best, don’t ever let anypony tell you otherwise, ‘specially yourself!” Smiling at him, she said, “I’m gonna go… I've got a lot to think about, and a big day tomorrow; mural unveiling and all that! Goodnight!” She left the cottage, closing the door as she left.
Alone in the house with Fluttershy, Valiant sighed, sitting down on her couch. Fluttershy walked over and sat down beside him. Noticing his bleak demeanor, she asked softly, “What’s wrong?”
Valiant’s heart melted as he looked into her deep blue eyes. All the fears drudged up by old memories faded away and he could think of nothing he wanted to do more than sit there with her. “Nothing, my beautiful lady,” he said, holding her hoof in his. “Thank you for your concern, but all is well now.”
They stayed that way for a few minutes, before Fluttershy began to feel a heat creeping into her face. I... I feel safe with him… And he feels safe with me… I... I think I... Looking away momentarily, she gathered her courage and looked back, asking, “Valiant?”
Brushing part of her mane out of her face, he replied, “Yes, my lady?”
Blushing again, Fluttershy stammered, “I… I lo…”
At that moment, the entire front of the house blew inward, scattering furniture and debris across the room. Valiant lept from his seat, drawing his sword and positioning himself in front of the extremely frightened Fluttershy. A maniacal laugh echoed in the darkness around him.
“Who are you!?” he shouted. “Show yourself!”
“Why Valiant,” the voice replied, “What a horrible welcome! Aren’t you happy to see your brother?”
Valiant's eyes widened. “My… Oof!” Something hit him in the back of the head, causing his world to fade to blackness.
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Gosh… I end a lot of chapters that way, don’t I? Well, this is it! The Finale awaits! Are you excited? Cause I sure am! This is the most exciting thing ever! Well, except for the time I went *gasp* but really what could beat that!?
The town of Ponyville should have been in disarray. There should have been screaming, running and general chaos, but the streets were surprisingly still. Perhaps they knew it would have been pointless, that the battle was already won… perhaps it was overwhelming presence of the changeling guards threatening to punish any who stepped out of the ring encircling town square that kept them in line... perhaps still they knew that they’re last hopes lay with the solitary figure, lying crumpled on the ground in the very center of that circle. Eyeing the guards carefully, a small filly crept over to where he lay. Nuzzling his cheek, she whispered, “Please wake up!” in desperation, before being dragged back into the center of the circle by her frightened mother.
Valiant Daybreak groaned, slowly opening his eyes and taking in the circle of ponies around him. “What…” he mumbled, before remembering what had happened earlier. He stood to his feet, prompting the notice of the changeling guards. As Valiant watched, one of them walked to the side of the circle opposite him, where a changeling alicorn stood.
“My Lord,” the guard said, “He is awake.”
“Excellent,” said a voice that sent shivers down the backs of everypony present. Turning around, the alicorn stared at Valiant. After a moment, he asked, “Why Brother, do you not recognize me? Have you forgotten your own brother as you have forgotten the rest of your people?”
A look of shock crossed Valiant’s face. “N… Nightshade?” he asked.
The Black Prince snarled. “The name Nightshade Moonbeam is no longer mine! I left that weak name behind when the useless emotion you call love was ripped out of me. I am now known as Nefaris, The Black Prince!”
Valiant’s emotions ran wild. Part of him wanted to kill his brother for what he had done… yet… another part still loved him… He is still my brother… I must try to reason with him… The conflicting emotions brought tears to his eyes. Blinking them back, he asked, “Why… Why brother? Why did you kill our father? Why have you invaded this peaceful land?”
“Silence!” Nefaris roared, baring his pointed teeth in anger. “You always thought you were better than me brother! Admit it! You were the older, I the younger! You were to be king, while I was to be prince! You were always lording yourself over me!”
“No brother… I never thought I was…”
“Lies! You took everything, leaving nothing behind! The throne, the adoration of the public, even Father and Mother's lo…” Nefaris balked momentarily, before regained composure of himself, the evil grin returning swiftly to his face. “I am simply returning the favor. Everything you have ever cared about… I will claim for myself. Unless, of course, you think you can best me in combat?”
Valiant, desperate to avoid conflict, tried one last attempt to reason with his brother. “Please… Violence will solve nothing…”
“Spoken like a true coward!" Nefaris interrupted. "Do you refuse? What say you I give you a little incentive?” Nefaris nodded to his lieutenant, who shouted an order to his troops. Six changeling mages stepped forward, each with a sphere of pure magic, red as crimson, levitating in their magical grips.
Valiant gasped. “No…”
At the center of each sphere sat one of his friends. Twilight was trying every spell she knew to break free, while Applejack and Rainbow Dash kicked at the spheres, trying to weaken the magical energies. Pinkie Pie, not surprisingly, was poking the shield, laughing as the energy tickled her for trying to escape. Rarity and Splatter Shell sat in the center of their respective spheres, watching Valiant with intensely confident eyes. Finally, Valiant turned his eyes to the pony he could hardly bare to look at. As he locked eyes with Fluttershy, he sensed the fear that showed on the outside, but also… complete confidence. Confidence that, now that he was there, everything would be alright. With her confidence surging through him, Valiant stepped towards his brother.
“I accept your challenge, Nefaris. I will not allow you to harm my friends!”
Nefaris laughed. “Oh yes! You and your ‘precious friendship!’ I forgot how much ponies from here worshiped that idiotic ideal.” Nefaris tossed Valiant his weapons, who caught them and immediately levied them in a ready stance.
“Standard dualing rules, brother?” he asked.
Nefaris grinned, evilly baring his pointy teeth. “I think that shall do nicely.”
The two combatants launched themselves forward, their near opposite colored furs clashing brilliantly in the darkness of the night. Sparks flew from their blades as they connected, lighting up the night sky with their light.
The Black Prince struck a vicious blow at Valiant’s head, but he sidestepped and parried, bringing his sword back in a quick thrust. Laughing, the Prince jumped out of the way, bringing his blade back in a downward slice. For ten minutes the former brothers fought, until it became obvious one was slowing. Valiant tried hard to maintain his momentum, but slowly felt himself being forced back towards the edge of the circle.
The surrounding ponies could only watch in horror, as Nefaris suddenly disarmed his opponent and, with a sickening blow to the side of the head, sent him flying back across the circle. As Valiant struggled to stand, Nefaris was already on him, pushing him to the ground again and gloating over his fallen, broken body.
Valiant looked towards the sky. It was late when they ambushed us… surely it must almost be…
“What? Waiting for you ‘precious Princess Celestia’ to raise the sun?” Nefaris gloated. “I’m afraid she is a bit busy fending off the legion of changelings I sent into the city!”
“N… no…”
“Yes! I do not think she will be able to save you… Face it brother, you have been bested!”
With his only hope for victory dashed, Valiant’s strength finally gave out. He collapsed fully on the ground, and was quickly surrounded by a magical bubble.
Nefaris began to laugh, quietly at first, but louder and louder as his wicked mirth grew. “I won! I WON! Face it brother, you are merely second best!” A wicked gleam came into his eyes. “Now… who should I rip the love out of first?”
“… No…”
“Hmm…” Nefaris walked over to Rainbow Dash. “She seems feisty… She might make a good soldier…”
“Brother…”
Ignoring his plea, Nefaris walked over to Twilight. “However… she is an excellent magician… within a few years, she could be my head mage…”
“Please…”
“No…” Nefaris said, walking over to Fluttershy’s bubble, who backed away from him with fear in her eyes. “Perhaps this one?”
“Brother!" Valiant shouted, his desperation plainly evident. "Please! For all that is good and pure in the world! Do not do this! I am sorry for always seeming better than you! I am sorry for being the first-born! But if you have any mercy left…”
Nefaris smiled. “Ah… so this is the one you care about most is it? Very well then… Thank you for making my choice easy…” He turned to Fluttershy and, grinning, said, “Hmm… You will make a very beautiful changeling… Perhaps I shall make you my personal servant…”
“NO!” Valiant yelled. Energy emanated from his body, bursting the barrier as if it were made of paper. “I refuse to let you harm her! You shall not touch a hair on her head… Because… I promised… but… even more than that…” He took a deep breath, before shouting at the top of his lungs, “Because I love her!”
As he shouted those words, his horn began to glow a brilliant, blinding white. Slowly, a sliver of light began to appear on the horizon.
Nefaris looked on in shock as Valiant raised the sun to the highest point in the sky, beating the moon down from its previous position. “That… That’s impossible! Only the Princess of the Sun can…”
“You are wrong Nightshade, about everything! Love is not trivial… it is the most powerful force in the universe. Without it, I am merely Valiant Daybreak… With it I realize my full potential… I am… The Prince of the Dawn!”
Nefaris growled and lunged at Valiant, who stepped out of the way and immediately summoned his weapons back to himself. Parrying his brother’s next rage filled swing, he slipped his sword underneath his brother’s and, calmly, with almost no apparent force at all, broke it in two.
Nefaris collapsed on the ground, staring at Valiant in fear. Valiant paused in front of him and calmly sheathed his sword. With compassion in his voice, he said, “Brother… Please come back to me… No matter what you have done… I still love you.”
Tears dripped from the Black Prince’s face. “I… I cannot… not after what I have done…”
Valiant knelt on the ground, looking straight into his face. Softly, he said, “Brother… I forgive you.”
A brilliant light enveloped Valiant and his brother, quickly spreading through the town of ponyville and eventually covering the entire continent of Equestria. When it faded, the Black Prince was gone, and in his place sat a small, shivering, blue alicorn.
“Do… Do you truly mean that?” he asked.
Beginning to cry himself, Valiant answered, “With all my heart.” Tears ran down his face as he embraced his brother, overjoyed to have him back.
The town sat in stunned silence for a moment, before erupting into cheers. Releasing his brother, Valiant turned around, noticing for the first time that the remaining changelings had returned to their normal form and the spheres holding his friends had dissipated, spilling them onto the ground.
He ran to Fluttershy, grabbing her in a smothering embrace. As they looked into each other’s eyes, she whispered, “I love you…” Joy overflowed throughout his whole body, as he replied, “I love you too.”
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Forgiveness really is the best policy isn't it? Pardon my sappiness, but I am a big fan of cheese. There's just one chapter and the epilogue remaining to post... Time to wrap up some loose ends!
Time seemed to pass quickly after the events of the second changeling invasion. When the residents of Ponyville realized that the changeling invaders were not the savage monsters they had assumed they were, they eagerly took them into their houses, providing food and shelter until they could return home. Valiant was overjoyed when he managed to locate Swirlbeard, whom Twilight quickly asked to stay with her at the library. While nearly everything seemed wonderful, an important question loomed over everypony’s head like a giant black thundercloud: what to do with Nightshade.
While he had been under a spell himself, he did not deny that he had been put under it willingly. He had, in fact, betrayed his country. On the other hoof, Valiant had never seen his brother so gentle and caring towards his subjects. Before he had become the Black Prince, Nightshade had despised and hated the “common ponies” of Corralland. Now, he moved among them as an equal, sorrowfully apologizing for what he had done.
The people of Corralland, too, seemed to notice this difference. While they remembered the terrible things he had done to them, they treated him with all the respect he didn’t deserve, and then some. Though the spell had been broken, they still recognized him as their leader.
Valiant pondered all these things as he waited for the inevitable summons from Princess Celestia that he was sure would decide his brother’s fate. Finally, two days after the incident, Twilight knocked on the door of Fluttershy’s cottage with the letter he had been waiting for.
Valiant Daybreak,
Please come to Canterlot with Nightshade. We have much to discuss regarding the recent events.
Princess Celestia
“What do you think it means?” Twilight asked.
Valiant frowned. “I am not sure, but I fear the worst... I have forgiven my brother. I only hope she has as well.”
After finding Nightshade, the brothers took off towards Equestria. As they flew, Valiant looked back at Nightshade and said, “You have changed my brother.”
Nightshade ducked his head shamefully remembering his past. “Yes… I suppose I have. Spending that long without love taught me its true worth… Before Crystalis turned me into that… that thing, I thought that fear was the only thing that mattered. I believed it was my right to treat the citizens of Corralland with disdain… that it was fitting for a prince to act that way. I was wrong.” He turned to Valiant, tears streaming from his face. “I am truly sorry for all I have done… I know I cannot take it back… but I certainly wish I could.”
They flew the rest of the short trip in silence, Valiant pondering Nightshade’s words. Landing at the castle, they were quickly ushered inside by the guards. A hush descended upon the audience chambers as they walked inside. As Nightshade swallowed nervously, Valiant put a reassuring hoof on his shoulder. “It is going to be alright brother," he said. Slightly reassured, Nightshade walked down the middle of the room, head bowed.
As he reached the other side of the room, Celestia stood. “Please, everypony,” she said, “I’m afraid I must ask you all to leave for a moment.” The crowd of Canterlot nobles and palace guards slowly dispersed, whispering about Nightshade and Valiant as they exited the room.
As Celestia stared at Nightshade, Valiant defensively stepped in front of his brother. “Princess,” He began, “I…”
Celestia held up a hoof in silence. “Please, don’t speak. Stand aside Sir Knight.”
Throwing a worried glance at Nightshade, Valiant bowed and moved to the right, exposing his brother to Celestia’s piercing gaze.
After a few uncomfortable seconds, she spoke. “Nightshade Moonbeam. You stand accused of betraying your country and attacking mine. What do you have to say?”
Lifting his gaze, Nightshade bravely looked into the eyes of his accuser. “My princess, I am guilty of everything you have mentioned, and more. I place my fate at your judgement.”
Celestia raised an eyebrow. “Do you have anything else to add to your defense?”
“No, Princess. What I have done, I have done. I must atone for it.”
Celestia glanced at Valiant, who was watching the scene unfold with extreme discomfort. “What about you, Sir Knight, do you have anything to say in his defense?”
Valiant nodded. Narrowing his eyes, he said, “Yes, Princess. While it is true he has done as you have said, he has shown an attitude of extreme repentance. His experiences have changed him, M’lady, I give you my word as a Knight.”
Celestia frowned. “That may be so, but that doesn’t change the events that have unfolded.” She yelled, “Guards!” summoning them back into the room. As they entered, she said, “Lock him in the dungeon, and round up the rest of the ponies who assisted his attempted takeover.”
Valiant’s eyes widened in shock. "But…"
“No! Please!” Nightshade pleaded. “My crimes are my own, the ponies of my country are innocent! Lock me away forever, banish me from the face of the earth, do whatever you want to me, but… Just… Please…” Tears began streaming down his face again. “Please… do not punish my people… They… the fault is not theirs…”
Celestia held up a hoof, stopping the guards in their tracks. “You claim full responsibility?”
“Yes…”
“Even if I tell you your punishment will be excruciatingly severe?”
“All the more… I could not bear to have my subjects punished for something I did…”
Celestia smiled. “My little pony… I do believe you have learned something after all.”
Nightshade looked up in surprise. “You… You mean to say that…”
“I shall not punish you. You may leave Equestria in peace.”
Nightshade was stunned into silence. “Tha… Thank you Princess! I shall not forget this!”
Celestia, still smiling, said, “I should hope not, my little pony. Go, your subjects have all already been escorted to Ponyville, where you may take them home. I shall provide transportation for you back to your ships, where you may return home.”
Nightshade bowed, “Thank you Princess! I am forever in your debt.”
Valiant galloped to his brother. “I am truly happy for you Nightshade. I was afraid that… Well… pay it no mind. I shall meet you back in Ponyville. I have something to discuss with the Princess.”
Nodding to his brother and bowing to Celestia again, Nightshade left the room, accompanied by the two guards.
When they were alone, Celestia turned to Valiant and asked, “What is the matter Sir Valiant? Are you not happy? Your country is restored! You can return home and claim your rightful place as ruler of Corralland!”
Valiant’s face drooped. “My Princess… I am truly happy that my brother and my country have been returned to me, but…” His voice dropped off, and he stared at his hooves.
Celestia smiled her all-knowing smile. “It’s Fluttershy, isn’t it?”
Valiant blushed. “I… I just cannot leave her Princess! I know I have a duty to my country, but… I… I love her… I want to always be there to protect her… Her and all my other friends here in Equestria.”
“I understand, my little pony, but you must choose. I will support you no matter what my decide, but… If you want my advice… You should do what your heart tells you.”
Valiant pondered this for a moment, before looking up at Celestia and smiling. “Thank you Princess,” he said. “I believe I know what I must do.”
Valiant flew quickly back to Ponyville. Upon his arrival, Nightshade and the rest of the citizens of Corralland were waiting for him at the train station. Each of them seemed well rested from their stay in the town, and were cheered in their excitement to see him as he landed next to his brother.
After quieting the crowd, Valiant began to speak. “My dear citizens of Corralland, I thank you for all the love and devotion you have shown me. When I fled the country, I thought myself worthless, a useless prince who could not even protect his own people. I wandered in self-pity, covering up my identity to hide the shame I felt on the inside. When I arrived at this wonderful town, I made friends, friends who taught me that true worth comes not from the actions of the past, but the actions in the present. One pony in particular showed me love and kindness… without even knowing who I was. After a time, I grew to love her in return. That is why…” he paused, struggling for the words, “That is why I cannot return home with you and be your prince.”
The entire crowd erupted into a frenzy, yelling and asking who would replace Valiant as ruler of Corralland. Nightshade pushed through the crowd. Grabbing Valiant, he asked, “Brother… what are you…”
Valiant shrugged him off. Quieting the crowd, he said, “Do not think I abandon you my people! I was, and always will be, a Knight of Corralland! There is another here who can rule with much more love and devotion than I can! His heart is with you, and his only concern is for you! He will rule to the best of his ability, and his ability is great indeed!”
Nightshade’s eyes widened, “Brother… you’re not talking about…”
Valiant silenced him with a look. “Corralland, please honor your new king. I give you, Prince Nightshade Moonbeam!”
Stunned silence filled the crowd. For a few awkward moments, Valiant was afraid that everypony would do nothing, or worse. Suddenly, the crowd began to part, as the elderly form of Swirlbeard walked to the front. Nightshade winced as he reached him, preparing himself for the inevitable rebuke, but was stunned as the elderly pony bowed to the ground. He stood in shocked silence, as the rest of the crowd bowed to its knees before its new ruler.
Valiant nudged him, encouraging him to speak. Taking a deep breath, Nightshade said, “Please, dear ponies, rise. I thank you… I do not deserve such a forgiving and honorable people.”
Breaking in, Valiant asked, “Nightshade Moonbeam! Do you promise to keep the peace wherever you shall go?”
Stiffining, Nightshade replied, “I do!”
“Do you promise to defend the innocent, and protect all your subjects, regardless of rank, gender or disposition?”
“I do!”
“Finally, do you vow to keep our actions and words pure and clean, as they represent not only your own thoughts and opinions, but those of your entire country?”
With a deep breath, Nightshade responded, “I do!”
Valiant’s horn glowed. “Therefore, by my own authority as Prince, I hereby name you Prince Nightshade Moonbeam, ruler of the country of Corralland!”
As the gathered ponies cheered, Nightshade turned to Valiant, and said, “I shall take care of them, my brother… You have my word.”
Smiling, Valiant said, “I know you will.”
With that, the ponies of Corralland boarded the waiting train. Waving goodbye, Valiant watched as the train pulled away from the station, beginning their long journey towards home. When they were little more than a dot on the horizon, Valiant turned and walked slowly back towards Fluttershy’s cottage. After months of travel, he was finally going home.
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Fluttershy opened the door to her cottage, tears beginning to run down her face. When she had heard about Valiant’s departure, she had flown to the train station as fast as her wings could carry her, but was too late… The station master informed her that the train had already left. He had looked at her with concern as her eyes began to well with tears, but she ran away before he was able to say anything.
Entering the room, she walked over to the couch, collapsing on it in a fit of tears. Why… why didn’t he say goodbye…? Angel, her pet rabbit, hopped over to her, putting a comforting paw on her foreleg. Picking him up and squeezing him, she sobbed, out loud this time, “Why didn’t he say goodbye…?”
Her floorboards gave a small squeak as a shadow passed over her. Her eyes still closed, she felt somepony pick her up and embrace her tightly. “My dear, sweet, lovely lady,” Valiant said softly, “I never left.”
Dropping Angel, Fluttershy grabbed him, pulling herself closer and continuing to cry softly. He held her until she stopped crying, and then he let go, bringing her to hooves length in front of him. As he looked into her eyes, all doubts causing him to second guess his decision to stay vanished. His heart swelled and threatened to burst from his chest as he held her close again. She was his lady, his special somepony, and there was no pony on earth who could change that. As he stroked her soft hair, he whispered in her ear with a voice that could barely be heard, but carried with it the conviction of a thousand promises. “I will always be there to protect you… Always.”
Forgiveness isn’t an easy thing to do, especially when the pony you’re trying to forgive is yourself. Sometimes we get so blinded by our own mistakes that we miss the love that’s right in front of us. When we open our hearts and let forgiveness in, barriers are broken down and magical things happen! It’s important to remember that we all make mistakes; and, that a simple act of forgiveness may be the one thing that turns a hopeless situation into something bright and wonderful!
Your Faithful Student, Twilight Sparkle
Additional report enclosed:
Princess Celestia,
I apologize for the amount of time it has taken me to compile this report, but I thought you would like every detail I could possibly give you. The town was in quite a stir over the whole invasion, but everypony has calmed down now and is going back to their daily lives. Valiant has finally, albeit reluctantly, agreed to take a full position as town watchpony. You would be proud of your nephew; he takes his job seriously, but he is extremely kind and gentle with the ponies here, not suspicious or mean like other guards we’ve had in the past. Oh! I almost forgot! It was overlooked for while in the excitement, but Valiant finally got his cutie mark! The rising sun on his flank suits him perfectly; it reminds him daily just what he can accomplish with the help of his friends.
Speaking of Valiant, he and Fluttershy are doing excellent. I wouldn’t be surprised if he proposed to her within the next few months! We may soon have another royal wedding on our hooves! With a little luck, this one will be changeling free.
That brings me to my last point. Valiant has been corresponding with Nightshade, and he seems to have no idea of the whereabouts of Queen Chrystalis. Without her army, she is severely weakened, but the fact that she cannot be found is still troublesome to say the least. I’ll write you immediately if we hear anything.
I hope this helps you tie up any loose ends you may have. Let me know if you need me to research anything else. As always,
Your Faithful Student, Twilight Sparkle
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That's a wrap everypony! Hope you enjoyed my first attempt at fan-fiction! Want more Valiant? Let me know in the comments! I just might be persuaded to write a sequel... Nothing final yet, but I've got some ideas. Thanks again to my wonderful cousin who proofread most of these, and, of course, thank all of you guys for your support over the last 14 weeks! Without you guys, this wouldn't have been any fun at all! You're awesome!
