Free Preview Weekend · 9:47am
Not to be outdone by Star Trek and Doctor Who this weekend (but totally will be), I give you your TWP State of the Matter for the week.
Before we begin:
Blah blah, suggest MLP themed music to me, blah blah, will cite who suggested what song, blah blah, the fate of RSI, CMC, Rainbow Dash and Gilda depend on it, blah blah blah. Also, that is for the next chapter to be posted so that will be speeding up getting more new chapters out sooner, hint hint.
That out of the way, I don't have anything really new to report except that I am out of school until August. TWP will be wrapping up and SCS will be launching once they are all ready.
Other than that, I have nothing. So, here are previews of all of the chapters finished or in production.
Chapter 91 - RSI and the Mystery of Musical Expressionism
‘Are you a thestral?’ Sweetie asks.The thestral sighs. ‘Yes... I’m here on business, and no, I don’t eat flesh. That is just a myth.’
‘Sorry about her,’ Stormy apologizes, levitating Sweetie to his back. ‘This is her first time in LA, and she is a little overwhelmed by everything.’
The thestral smiles. ‘I understand. The city can be a little impressive if you are not used to it.’ She digs in her saddlebag and returns with a flower. ‘I represent some growers trying to expand our business to sellers in LA. Here is a free sample for the lovely filly.’
Chapter 92 - Cutie Mark Changeling - Finished
[Stormy Says:] ‘I’m pretty sure she has a bad case of zombie, but Redheart says it is only a flu.’
Chapter 93 - For the Ages - Finished
‘Ni~ght Li~ght! I want to do something fun~!’Night Light looks up from his work. ‘Can’t you call one of your friends and do something with them?’
Twilight Velvet glares and growls, but then she sits back with a crafty grin. ‘I think I know somepony I can call.’
‘Wonderful!’ Night Light cheers, returning to work. ‘I hope it all works out.’
‘Me too,’ Velvet agrees, trotting away. ‘I just hope he and Twilight are free...’
‘Mhm.’ Night Light keeps working. ‘Wait. What?’
Chapter 95 - Changing Perceptions - Finished
Diamond turns around to come face to face with a snarling changeling. Del advances with fangs exposed.‘Del?’
The changeling hisses. Her fangs glint in the light.
‘That is so cool!’ Diamond cheers. ‘Look at you! You look amazing!’
‘You’re not scared of me?’ Del growls.
Diamond fumbles with her tablet. ‘Can I get a picture?
‘What?’
‘Ple~~~~ase!’
Chapter 96 - Lost Love
‘That’s right! Stormy and Apple Bloom are getting married!’Scootaloo stares at her friend. She leans close and sniffs Sweetie’s muzzle.
‘What are you doing?’
‘Well, when my bastard father used to live with us, he’d get drunk all the time. I’m checking you for booze.’ She opens a wing. ‘Now, how many feathers am I holding up?’
Chapter 98 - This One Time at Camp...
‘PLEASE!’ Lyra begs, holding on to Twilight hind legs.‘No!’ the princess shouts back. ‘That is reserved for my friends!’
The unicorn lets go and pouts. ‘No fair. I am being dumped for them again.’
‘Well, last time, you were one of Chrysalis’ mind controlled slaves.’
‘I want to be a bridesmaid for a royal wedding!’ Lyra screams as she tantrums. ‘I thought we were friends.’
‘When did I ever give you the impression we were friends?’
Lyra’s jaw drops. ‘You honestly don’t remember all the time we spent together.’
‘Knowing you now, I likely blocked it out.’
‘We the closest for friends. The bestest of buds. The cherriest of colas.’
‘What?’
‘Until I met Bon Bon, you were the most intimate partner I ever had.’
Twilight turns, wings flared, horn overflowing with magic. ‘WHAT!’
‘Figure of speech. We were too young to do anything before you left for that awesome school and I became a famous lyrist.’
Twilight groans. ‘I did not have any friends before I came to Ponyville.’
‘But all our time together...’
‘Lyra, there is nothing you can say to make me believe we were ever friends.’
‘Nothing?’
Well, that is all for now. Hope you like those previews of what it to come. The other chapters I am working on (A Rocky Road, Big Trouble in Little Crystal Empire) will get started as soon as one of the unfinished ones above is checked off. The penultimate chapter is also finished (for the most part), but I have given out far too many spoilers for it already. The last chapter of TWP will only be started when all others are complete. For those who has checked out The Master Game, you know nothing is really left to spoil in these last ten chapters except the titles. I'll leave you guessing what the final chapter's title is. And no. It is not what you will think.
Peace! Hope I have something more for you soon!







>>496103
Eeyup.
>>496039
My one brony friend isn't into fan fiction. I had a non-brony friend who told one of his brony friends about my series. Don't know if that generated any views, but it is something. Most bronies I've met tend to zone out when I mention that I write...
>>496031
These sort of things make me wish my friends were bronies too.
Tashes are cool. Dr who pun intended.
>>495870
There are many reasons why I am small time:
-I don't promote the story or myself except when a new chapter is posted. I'm really shy so that really holds me back when it comes to getting word out about the story or my writing.
-Rejected from EqD (I didn't expect to get in, but I also didn't expect the pre-reader to be rude in the letter)
-Not in any groups on FiM Fiction, (see shyness above)
-Over 500k words long in the main story (aiming at over 600k by the end), 30k follow up, 2nd follow up in the works, and a half-finished side story on hold
-My characters could easily be seen overpowered and that will turn people off, not to mention the whole OC x Everypony angle.
-My erratic upload schedule doesn't draw new readers in regularly, though I should have more soon.
Those and other reasons are why I am still small time.
I really don't mind. Like I said, I am shy. I appreciate the attention and love interacting with everyone. I would feel pretty overwhelmed if a large mass of people started showing up.
Thank you so much for the kind words. A little extra fame and interaction would be good, but I am pretty happy how I am now.
>>351435
Hello!



HEEEEEEY!!!
hey,
It's me that guy who pmed you over the course of the week well if your getting this that means you want to have your story added well at the moment i have three hundred other people to deal with so if you wold be so kind as to add it your self i would be ever so greatful.
anyway any story that fits my requirements are more then welcome as well also trixie can be a villain a have a relationship with twi and still be in the group
Thankyou
Hello sir or madame,
I am Obsidian Raindrop the creator of a group known as The Great and Not Obsessive Trixie I am here to ask if you would like your story to be added to my group.
The only requirements are:
1. You have a story about Trixie and she is not completely obsessing over her lose at the hands of Twilight. (She can hate that she lost to twilight and even try and beat again but she just can't be be so obsessive like she is in most stories. )
2. She may be a supporting character or a main character it does not matter.
3. i can`t think of a third thing
It's me Osidian again asking you guys to do stuff you don't want to.
1. tell me the name of your story and the one folder you want it in
2. join the group it is really cool and we'll soon get a banner up
3. fallow because it will boost my confidence
Sorry to all those who either received this email twice or who don`t have trixie as a main or supporting character. Also just PM me if you want your story added.
Yours truly, Obsidian Raindrop
>>42637
Princess: Luna. Best princess since Mononoke. Although Rapunzel in Tangled was fun, too. (Not to mention she was voiced by Aerith <3)
Fanfic: Allegrezza <3 Progress (until Luna had a canon personality that matched Progress well), Shipping and Handling, and Harpflank and Sweets are also some of my favorites.
Muffin vs Cupcake: Brownies! Or fudge! Definitely fudge.