The new chapter is coming nicely, but gonna postpone it for a bit to go through and spice up the story so far. A bit of grammar, better detail, the likes and such. I might think about attempting the mafia story after this next chapter comes out. I need a name. And a picture. Any suggestions?
Latest Stories Spartan Red Team destroyed a Shield World out of UNSC controlled space, destroying the Forerunner fleet that was hidden inside. They leave behind a destroyed world and dieing Covenant fleet, stuck in cryo-sleep until they reach help. Unfortunately, anything but help finds them, and they are thrust into another battle, but a new pawn is thrown into the game, and Equestria is unsure which side will lead not to victory, but survival.
Follows the events of Halo Wars, some parts may seem confusing unless you've played the game. First fan-fic and experimental. Tell me what you really think, whether its a diamond of holy proportions or a piece of crap that should be shoved up a baboons ass.
Cover art by Spartan11 on DeviantArt.
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Quincy was but a mute. He couldn't stand the harassment and cruelty of other ponies, so he left to live by himself. Of course, it does get boring when your alone.
Think of this as a parody of all the Slendermane stories that have been popping up.
Edited by Alb388.
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Oh, hell. I'm 12 days late for my first FiMFiction birthday. I''m a veteran now, I demand RESPECT.
Happy late birthday to mmmmeeee~
:whydonttheyhaveafluttershyhappyemote:
Of course, a line of random emotes to celebrate.
EDIT : Almost forgot Rainbow Dash.
Dude, that dolphin with a revolver... So badass...
Your profile picture wins. I have that t-shirt.
Thanks for that mate, it really brightened my day to see someone who enjoyed 005 for the same reasons I'm writing it.
It's still being worked on... Just life getting in the way.
Keep up the good work!
>>217531 That's easy. Read others, and then be different. Grammar does go a long way, but people get bored with the same old 'Spartan comes and helps save Equestria from Covenant' shtick. Think outside of the box, imagine you yourself are a Spartan- You are on an unknown planet with a potentially hostile species. Obviously, they want to know more about you, but that's the last thing you want, some alien species that doesn't even have space travel gaining the slightest of UNSC Spartan tech. You can either A) Go ahead and help them with whatever they want or B) Make sure that doesn't happen and get out of there, no matter what the consequences because your race is facing extinction and they need you. Unfortunately, most seem to take A). Instead of making readers read the same thing they've seen multiple times, take them down an unexplored path in the forest.
I feel so weird with that last sentence. Philosophy is so weird.
well thanks but can you at least give some advice on how to write a good Spartan crossover
>>217526 Unforetunately, I have my own story to work on along with APUSH and the rest of High School. Believe me, I would love to help, but I just don't have the time.
hey once again thank you and your right not my best work. with that i ask if you can help me make a good spartan crossover story.
>>171769 Alrighty then, thanks for the help
>>171766 I've seen it happen before. I would recommend trying to contact at site admin about the problem