I've talked around with my friends about what to do about the rest of my chapters. It was suggested that I just write the rest out and edit later. I would like to ask for help though as I am just looking for someone to pre-read my chapters. You don't have to edit them as that is not what I am asking for. Any help would be greatly appreciated very much. Once I have all my chapters of this story out I can start on something less bleak, though tcb is fun to write in.