Winning in Los Pegasus · 5:32pm
Hello Followers.
A while ago I announced I would be working on new stories and you all, so far, voted in favour of Corruption of the Clouds. It’s coming.
But first I promised a group a story titled, “Winning in Los Pegasus” that would feature Time Turner going to the teen rated city of mild sin with Cloud Kicker. That story is now finished and I’m publishing it tonight to minor fanfare.
I ask you to go give it a read, but first a note:
This Time Turner story is featured In Chengar Qordath’s Winningverse as part of their anniversary month. Since I’m playing with someone else’s work I’ve had to make things fit and so the Time Turner featured is not the exact same one I’ve written about prior. This basically means no Lucky Catch, and references to my other work is kept to a bare minimum while Turner himself remains intact.
This was also a chance for me to play with a few story elements I’m considering for Corruption. Time Turner as an earth pony in a pegasus cloud city where everything is weird and white. One thing in particular is Turner’s inability to touch clouds without special shoes. Something that leads to awkward situations and opportunities to do things that pegasi can’t do.
But that’s enough of that and I’ll leave you a hint of what you’ll be seeing in Corruption.
Rainbow Dash and the Wonderbolts hanging out, Tantalus, a disguised Luna, Time Turner enters the Best Young Flier’s Competition and the return of Lefty and Righty.







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