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#151 · 1w, 4d ago · · ·

"Just a pointless idiot." Lol,  I don't think that an idiot would be able to write what you do so don't be so hard on yourself."Yes, I have a blog here. Why? Because torturing you all with my fics doesn't bring me nearly enough satisfaction." Lol, I like your sense of humor! My only suggestion on how to improve your stories is diction.diction.diction. I cannot stress enough how much better you and your stories will sound when you use superior vocabulary choice. When I'm writing,  I use a thesaurus to help me(however you should be sure to look up examples of the word that you intend to use in a sentence so you can understand it instead of blatantly inserting it.)  I love your work and I hope that you keep staying awesome!À brohoof pour vous /)

#150 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1797135

Glad we can agree on that. Don't hold back because this Fiendship series has been slightly disappointing to me.

Also hope things go easier for you in the future.


#149 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1797131

I'm going to review that issue later this week (been a bit of a hard week last week, so I'm playing catch-up), and I definitely have words about the ending.

#148 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

I don't know if you got to Fiendship #05 but... I think i ought to spare you what the ending is like.

BIG HINT: It's Utter Shit. Hit this comic issue hard because it doesn't deserve praise for its ending.

#147 · 9w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1783963

Thank you.

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