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First you start by mentioning continuity, which makes me happy.

Then you stick Big Mac in a dress and make the same jokes everyone has made since dresses were invented and designated for women only, which makes me unhappy with your laziness.

Then you end with one of the most heartfelt moments of the entire series, which makes me confused.

I want to dislike you for dipping into a style of humor that almost never works, and did not work for me here in the slightest. But I also want to like you for giving Big Mac and Apple Bloom actual development. So....I have no idea where I stand on this one.

Back to the torture, then.

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#151 · 15w, 1d ago · · ·

"Just a pointless idiot." Lol,  I don't think that an idiot would be able to write what you do so don't be so hard on yourself."Yes, I have a blog here. Why? Because torturing you all with my fics doesn't bring me nearly enough satisfaction." Lol, I like your sense of humor! My only suggestion on how to improve your stories is diction.diction.diction. I cannot stress enough how much better you and your stories will sound when you use superior vocabulary choice. When I'm writing,  I use a thesaurus to help me(however you should be sure to look up examples of the word that you intend to use in a sentence so you can understand it instead of blatantly inserting it.)  I love your work and I hope that you keep staying awesome!À brohoof pour vous /)

#150 · 21w, 6d ago · · ·


Glad we can agree on that. Don't hold back because this Fiendship series has been slightly disappointing to me.

Also hope things go easier for you in the future.

#149 · 21w, 6d ago · · ·


I'm going to review that issue later this week (been a bit of a hard week last week, so I'm playing catch-up), and I definitely have words about the ending.

#148 · 21w, 6d ago · · ·

I don't know if you got to Fiendship #05 but... I think i ought to spare you what the ending is like.

BIG HINT: It's Utter Shit. Hit this comic issue hard because it doesn't deserve praise for its ending.

#147 · 23w, 2h ago · · ·


Thank you.

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