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Ezbok58a


Jul
18th
2013

So now... · 2:30am Jul 18th, 2013

I'm finally finding some time to get back to writing, you'll like this...I already had 6 pages written of the next chapter...now I have 5 pages...

Now before anyone panics let me explain; as I haven't really written anything for this story since about February it required myself to re-read what I already put and, well...lets just say what was lost is no real loss. Although the pace is something I need to get into again. But yes, not dead...just horribly delayed.

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Jun
2nd
2013

Soon... · 3:33pm Jun 2nd, 2013

Hello gang,

I am pleased to say that with new changes in my life (mainly a shift change at where I work) I am getting some more time to write. Now it hasn't happened yet, today's the start of the new shift and the rest of this week is hectic with so many plans with friends and family that I'm not able to jump right in now, it will be a week or two. But I will be continuing the work on Max Payne, ironic, as a year ago I started this story.

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Mar
22nd
2013

I didn't want it to come to this... · 12:15am Mar 22nd, 2013

But life has a nasty way of sneaking up on you. And nasty as in for my focus on the story, not a nasty real life event...because frankly this news couldn't be any better for me. But for all the good, there has to be a bad...and I'm actually glad its just this that's getting the short end of the stick over something I really, really need.

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Feb
17th
2013

News from the front. · 2:02am Feb 17th, 2013

I had a idea that's been bugging me for a while, only way to get it out was to write it down. I don't think it'll see the light of day honestly. The little movie trailer style I wrote it in basically gives away the whole plot as it sits in my head. No point asking any deeper questions because I haven't thought that far ahead. You can find it by going to my profile page...you can't miss it.

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Nov
29th
2012

Off to proofread · 6:20am Nov 29th, 2012

Just so you all know...I hated this chapter...from start to finish I hated it. But it needed to be done, now back to the typical Max Payne we all know and love...bullet dodging and mayhem coming at some point in the future!

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Nov
10th
2012

Season three, and gameloft... · 9:18pm Nov 10th, 2012

Yes the new season is here, add me to the list of those who are kinda 'meh' on Sombra but it was still very good. And I've been sucked into this gameloft MLP game, but I've had a few good ideas on getting Payne out from this boring no action period it unfortunately has to go through (backstory and all that) and into the action we all want and need.

So now that I'm taking care of that, anyone have any idea on how to get hearts? I kinda need them in this game...

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Nov
5th
2012

Still delays, not my fault this time. · 2:03am Nov 5th, 2012

Thanks to that pesky hurricane sandy and not having power for 4 days, that made 4 days of no progress made. Well more like 6 days no progress as I had a backlog of things to catch up on. Finally got some headway done today, started page 11, we're looking at a lengthy chapter as dialogue tends to do that.

I hope to have it done before thanksgiving...although with the new season starting this Saturday...it may take even longer to finish this story. Action is coming, so don't loose hope!

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Oct
22nd
2012

Still here, with some updates and a Payne sneak peak · 1:22am Oct 22nd, 2012

In case anyone was wondering, yes I am in fact still here. And I'm still toiling away at the latest chapter of Payne, however it's taking a lot longer then I hoped. This is supposed to be the big meeting with the Griffin's and some insight into what the hell is actually going on. I'm 8 pages in and I'm still not at that point...

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Sep
15th
2012

New Chapter, and some changes · 11:06pm Sep 15th, 2012

My proof-reader came through in record time, I can't thank him enough for what he's done. Literally if you've seen chapter 5 before I sent it to him you'd be amazed its the same chapter. Magic has been worked on it and I can't be happier. All credit goes to ATung231 for making the product readable for you all.

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Sep
6th
2012

Things! Things are happening! · 12:53am Sep 6th, 2012

I'm a little eager with the enter button apparently...sorry 'bout that.

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