Things! Things are happening!

I'm a little eager with the enter button apparently...sorry 'bout that.

However it's been over a month since I last left you with a chapter of Payne, and now I've got a meaningful update for you all. I did say everything hinged on Chapter 5, boy did I shoot myself in the foot with that. Lets put it this way, there was a lot of fighting during the time chapter 4 was posted and now. The flow for something like this has to be right, and getting it right was frustrating. Even so, I've left my proof-reader a daunting task to clean up whatever issues I still left in there cause I feel there's a lot of them. Yes I said proof-reader, that means that chapter 5 is officially done and just needs a going over before it's shared with you.

Two other things, being that now I don't have to worry about spoilers in Max Payne 3 I'm going to go back and re-write some of the first half of chapter 1. So look for that coming up as well as the main synopsis will be getting a re-write as well.

What started as an idea now officially has a story arc, and now I can change things to fit that arc. This will only make the story that much better for you the readers. You've waited this long for an update, I ask to just give me a little bit more as I feel what I've got will be worth the wait.

Now, where did I save Chapter 1