At long last, an update for SCAR. I know its taken a long time, and I thank you all for being patient while I work shit out.
and others as well, SCAR will be the first to be updated though. And I've got some proofreading/editing to do either tonight or tomorrow as well.
Settling in, playing some music, readying my body for an all-nighter. I won't say anything about the new chapter but this: Those of you that hate instant forgiveness, you're in luck.
~Fak
Go read it. . . I need to go get a second gallon jug for all this liquid pride.
9,330 words. It's the largest chapter I've ever posted, in any of my stories. To top it all off, I wrote it all today. . . If it wasn't 3am, it probably would've ended up being around 15k, but that'll be the next chapter. Trying to drive home the damaged state that Geoff's mind is in, so if you can't pin down the character, good.
PS: BE SURE TO GET YOUR DAILY RECOMMENDED AMOUNT OF HNNNNNG!
The story is coming along quite nicely, I've got a lot to change yet, and I know that everyone will need to re-read it. There are some major changes present, and I'm getting rid of several things that caused complaints in the comments, as well as explained things better that weren't understood before. I'm going to be removing all the chapters on the current MW:E post, and will upload the first revised chapter later this afternoon.
It's just not there for me, guys. I had an idea for this story, had a picture of where I wanted it to go, and it's just not working.
SO: beginning tomorrow I'm going to download the full .txt and overhaul it. It'll still be there to read as is, until I'm done with the re-write, then I'll take the original down.
~Fak
once again, it didn't take me a month and a half to publish another chapter :D
Also! for future reference, the infantry gauss rifle that Alex uses is the Thunderstroke Gauss Rifle, produced by Federated Arms. Link
Couldn't remember the name for the longest time, found it on the wiki tonight.