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Astrocity


Wanted for writing and crimes against humanity. Mostly writing...

Jul
30th
2013

Is that an update? · 10:14pm Jul 30th, 2013

Yes. Yes, it is... Sort of... I haven't updated Follow the Melody in months since I've been editing it, and when you read something that's 140,000 words long over and over again, you'll want to bash your head against the keyboard or something. The story doesn't really change much, I just fixed grammar, added a scene or two to make parts more entertaining, and took out the prologue, in favor of revealing the background gradually. If you know what happens in each chapter, then you don't

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Jul
3rd
2013

This sucks... · 1:33am Jul 3rd, 2013

When it comes to car accidents, I'm like Fluttershy, a complete doormat and easily intimidated. Why couldn't it be as simple as exchanging information and letting car insurance handle it, not have some guy shift the blame on you?

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Jun
7th
2013

To Be Different Update · 11:05pm Jun 7th, 2013

Just edited chapters 1 and 2 of To Be Different and posted the latest chapter. The third chapter was sitting on my computer collecting dust, and I didn't have any time to edit it until now. It's good to finally write again.

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May
25th
2013

Progress Report · 9:44pm May 25th, 2013

For those of you wondering why I haven't updated any of my stories in a while, it's because I've been busy. Really busy with assignments, death of a relative, and fixing my stories. For Follow the Melody, I managed to edit 5 chapters. Don't worry. The main plot will be the same. I'm just making minor changes to diction, tone, and some of the minor scenes. You don't have to re-read the whole story to find out what's going on. So yeah, I finished 5 chapters, meaning I have 17 more to

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Apr
5th
2013

Your Thoughts? · 2:15am Apr 5th, 2013

So my first fanfic, Follow the Melody, was "okay" considering I've never really done any sort of creative writing. But after going back and reading some of the chapters again, I can't help but cringe at some things like grammar, spelling, and plot development. Now that I have some free time, I'm going to be busy for a long while with editing. And since I'll be working on the story, I ask myself: "What can I do to improve this story?" Being my own worst critic, I'm always trying to find

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Apr
2nd
2013

New Update · 3:30am Apr 2nd, 2013

The latest chapter to Follow the Melody is finally out! Sorry for the long wait but I had to figure out where I wanted the story to go. So after spending around two whole days working the chapter continuously, it's done. It's been a while since the last update so I had to do a bit of re-reading, and wow were there a lot of mistakes. So now I'm going back to do some minor changes to make the story consistent. For example in the chapter, "Gender Confusions," I said "transformation spell"

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Mar
24th
2013

Lack of Updates · 6:32am Mar 24th, 2013

Right, so I haven't been updating any my stories in a while. Sorry for keeping all of you waiting, but I've been busy with school work and other important things going on in my life. I'm also having a really tough time with where I'm going with the story, Follow the Melody. I have certain scenes played out in my mind, it's just getting from point A to point B I'm having a problem with. So, I wrote other stories as a break from that. But that resulted in creating more problems for me now

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Jan
14th
2013

Follow the Melody: Next Chapter Update? · 2:37am Jan 14th, 2013

For those who follow the story, you may have noticed the lack of story updates. The reason for that is because I am stuck. I may have dug my own grave with where I've been going in the story. So, I've been spending the past week or so banging my head against a wall for ideas, and so far I managed to write only a good couple thousand words. The problem? I have no idea how I'm going to write out the other half of the chapter, which will affect where this story actually goes. Believe me when I say

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Dec
18th
2012

Follow the Melody: A New Apple in the Family · 2:24am Dec 18th, 2012

Just posted the newest chapter of Follow the Melody. Also, have a look at my other story The Soldier, the Princess, and the Unicorn, which was inspired by The Nutcracker and The Steadfast Tin Soldier.

With that, I'll try keep up with my weekly updates.

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Nov
12th
2012

New Chapter and Gameloft · 5:57pm Nov 12th, 2012

Just published the newest chapter to "Follow the Melody" and I still have a crap ton of stuff to do. Sorry it took so long. Also I just started playing the new My Little Pony game, so feel free to add me: Astrocity. Also if I've been experiencing problems with Gameloft since I keep logging out in-game so if I don't add you, don't feel offended. Just having technical issues.So add me if you want and enjoy the new chapter.

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