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Hey, you've got good potential in your fic writing, and I like your approach to cute family stuff. Brush up on your grammar a little an be careful not to rush your plot development too much (Nature VS Nurture has good pacing, but I think you're trying to go a little too fast with Guardian Pegasus), and you'll do great!