Editing and Planning · 1:20am Oct 23rd, 2012
Well, after discovering yet another friend of mine is a brony, I've finally found the impetus to go over my story and edit it again. Sure, I was rejected by EqD, but that's not the end of the world. I'll make it better. I'll move away from the things I disliked that my original pre-reader thought I should keep, cut some of the scene changes out, and eliminate entire sections. My stories always get carried away with themselves. I'll bring it back towards the 2,500 word limit my first draft