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  • 601 weeks
    Editing and Planning

    Well, after discovering yet another friend of mine is a brony, I've finally found the impetus to go over my story and edit it again. Sure, I was rejected by EqD, but that's not the end of the world. I'll make it better. I'll move away from the things I disliked that my original pre-reader thought I should keep, cut some of the scene changes out, and eliminate entire sections. My stories

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  • 611 weeks
    Finally, Posted!

    So I've finally posted my short. Of course, where there's Luna, there should also be Celestia, right? I purposely changed some material around in the published version of Luna's story to make more of an opening for a second short.

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  • 614 weeks
    Work In Progess

    So I've brought my cover art for the story I'm working on to a presentable state, but the second draft still stands at three paragraphs. It seems as though trying to come up with worldbuilding answers has really only created more questions. Such is the writing process.

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  • 615 weeks
    Yo!

    Hail, fellow Bronies! I finally decided to register for an account since I certainly read enough. Um, so I should have a story ready to post soon if I can ever find myself an editor. It's called "The Dream Wolf and the Princess of the Night." I just had this urge to cross over the Dream Wolf from my original fiction with Princess Luna. I'm fairly happy with what I got out of it, with the

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Oct
23rd
2012

Editing and Planning · 1:20am Oct 23rd, 2012

Well, after discovering yet another friend of mine is a brony, I've finally found the impetus to go over my story and edit it again. Sure, I was rejected by EqD, but that's not the end of the world. I'll make it better. I'll move away from the things I disliked that my original pre-reader thought I should keep, cut some of the scene changes out, and eliminate entire sections. My stories always get carried away with themselves. I'll bring it back towards the 2,500 word limit my first draft had, as that was part of the challenge I had set for the first writing. And then we'll see. I'd had several other stories planned, including several dealing with different theories on how the elements work and the nature of Alicorns. Maybe if -- maybe if.

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I wouldn't worry too hard about EQD, it's cool for sure, but really it is not the end all be all for fanfiction.... I see a story as successful if people like it, not if it gets accepted by super nitpicky prereaders who tend to have varying standards. (Not to say it isn't awesome and likely to get your story a lot more exposure... so if you want to try for it again go for it)

However... seeing as this was really good.... as in REALLY good, like I'll definitely want to come back and read it at some point, I'm gonna download it now so I have it as is. But watch out, if you cut out to much (half of it?) I can't be held liable for what a rogue Pinkie Pie may do... :pinkiecrazy:

:rainbowlaugh: Not to worry, I'm sure it'll be great

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Ha ha, I really didn't wind up changing too much, in the end. This is why authors shouldn't edit themselves: I'm far too partial to most of the layers. But thank you for reading again!

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