...8,9,10 and I hope you choke. · 4:48am Dec 13th, 2019
Increasingly out-of-date document thingy
is the doc ever getting updated?its really behind
that chapter was in June 2018, just sayin’
Increasingly out-of-date document thingy
is the doc ever getting updated?its really behind
that chapter was in June 2018, just sayin’
Homonyms can be rough, we all know this. From the struggles of "Raise this barn", "Raze this barn" and "Racist barn" to "two" "to" and "too" they seem to be everywhere. However, there's one that seems to irk me the most, even though it's one of the easiest mistakes to make:
Peek, peak and pique. And people tend to use the second when the really mean the third. So, for clarity's sake, here we go.
Oneshot, slice of life. Changelings originated from the mirror pool. Everfree magic is controlled by desire, not willpower, hinted at in the rhyme.
Multi-chapter, Romance (Sad tag?). Screwloose --> Nurse redheart Begin with Screwloose at her mental worst (End of Read it and Weep) and show her progress. Falls for Redheart because she took care of her. Decide if Redheart reciprocates...
Oneshot, slice of life, random. Screwloose spends the day with Winona
Berry Punch is Diamond Tiara's mother, Pinchy is DT's half-sister, and Berry and Filthy Rich are divorced. When they first got married Berry's drinking was only social and Rich was happy with his business and his wife. After Diamond Tiara was born, however, Rich chose to work harder for his family to give them everything they wanted and that he wanted for them. With Rich at work more and DT being taken care of, Berry spent her free time partying with friends in a spiral to alcoholism.
You're a fan of a show. Such a big fan, in fact, that you want to write/read a story about the show. You have this great romance idea for two of the characters. They may be friends, acquaintances, enemies, or never actually interact with one another. Even though there's actually nothing romantic between them in the show, or if there is it's only romantic tension, you still have the idea to put them together. You've got the setting down, the plot just right, everything is perfect.
This is a notice for FlameingToast on the story ButterflyCakes. (FlutterPie/PinkieShy) It is a list of corrections, grammatical and otherwise, that I noticed in the story. If you haven't read it, I personally thought it was a nice piece. This list is simply too long to put as a comment. That being said, it's PEGASUS time.
Post Edit Grammar And Signs of Untoward Spelling (PEGASUS) One: FlameingToast’s ButterflyCakes
Since school started up, I've had less time to read. I've had less time for everything, really. But I've usually come here once or twice a week, read a few chapters or maybe all of one story, see what my favorites have written, see what's on the frontpage, and mark everything for "read later" that I don't have time for today.