OKAY! I think I've finally managed to get out of my rut and I am finally starting to get chapter 5 to a place I like it. Assuming this hurricane doesn't blow out my internet and I can continue to write, expect an update within a week. Now this will be a shorter chapter than usual but its a lot more abstract than my previous chapters(which is a reason why this has taken me so long) and has, at least in my opinion, a notably different characterization for Phoenix's speech norms for this reason.

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