Update on What you need "Chapter 5: A storm of deceit, an ocean of poison" · 5:36am Aug 27th, 2020
OKAY! I think I've finally managed to get out of my rut and I am finally starting to get chapter 5 to a place I like it. Assuming this hurricane doesn't blow out my internet and I can continue to write, expect an update within a week. Now this will be a shorter chapter than usual but its a lot more abstract than my previous chapters(which is a reason why this has taken me so long) and has, at least in my opinion, a notably different characterization for Phoenix's speech norms for this reason. While this shouldn't be an issue in isolation(minus the fact its a blemish on the art work as a whole for failed consistency) if your new and or just reading from chapter 4 to this then to 6(assuming I don't carry over the style) it might be a bit jarring. So I apologize in advance for this possible issue. In any event I didn't feel like I could get what I wanted for this chapter with the normal speech norms, so I've taken to using this one for, at least, Chapter 5:. Having said all that, thank you for all sticking around, thank you for reading, and have a good one Y'all.