2751496 Truthfully I am enjoying the creativity you put into it as well as keeping up with the stories continuity. The original characters are designed well and the other characters keep to their origins fairly decently, while still having a personal spin to them. The storyline has enough action and down time to keep me interested in what's going to happen as well as having an interesting view on Equis' history. There is enough darkness to make me feel for the characters, but not so much as to make me depressed. Also, enough brightness to make me laugh, but not so much as to make me cringe. I do see some problems, but nothing is ever perfect. All in all a very balanced story.
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I'm just waiting for more at this point. It's a great story.
2751496
Truthfully I am enjoying the creativity you put into it as well as keeping up with the stories continuity. The original characters are designed well and the other characters keep to their origins fairly decently, while still having a personal spin to them. The storyline has enough action and down time to keep me interested in what's going to happen as well as having an interesting view on Equis' history. There is enough darkness to make me feel for the characters, but not so much as to make me depressed. Also, enough brightness to make me laugh, but not so much as to make me cringe. I do see some problems, but nothing is ever perfect. All in all a very balanced story.