Oct
3rd
2015
analyse the words: Outlet by reptilicus (the intro/chapter1) · 12:07pm Oct 3rd, 2015
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/54721/outlet
Just because this story was published all the way back from 2012 doesn't mean that it might not be worth a read!
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It start the entire story off with a fine description of Ponyville, it has a quite good amount of descriptive language in it, which is one of the best ways to get someone reading.
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