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Still reading it (I adore it so far), but you're quite welcome. ^~^

Thank ya much for the favorite of Harmony Undone: Consequence of Choice. Always appreciative of new readers.

Cheers, friend!

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You are most welcome! I hope that you'll jump right in and enjoy the stories and the community here on the site.

1681391 Thank you very much! It's good to know that this sight has awesome people such as yourself!

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I think that it is a very good thing that you are looking for an outside opinion before releasing the story. I know that I never really started to learn until I started using the experience of others to guide me. Fortunately, FIMFiction is full of such folks! If you click on this link, it will take you to a list of all the groups who have editors and proofreaders who can help you. I wish you the best of luck with your story!