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AkiraMakiri


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Thank you for the favorite on The Elements in Harmony. I hope you enjoy!:twilightsmile:

Hey! Thanks for the fav on Dragonking's Rebirth! I hope to update it, but any words of wisdom will help move things along!

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I'm glad you enjoyed my story overall, and don't worry about your English, I'm not a native speaker myself.

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Well, I liked a lot of things, actually. MC was pretty good, although his name was, well, pretty stupid (or I didn't catch the joke/reference). And I find the idea of scientist MC very good, like this type very much.
Idea of Scipper is also good, cute girl is nearly always nice (well, until there are too much of them).
Surprisingly cruel Celestia, main 6 and Luna are strange, but I kind of liked it (depends on how it goes).
Shiny was strange, but good, liked the personality.
So, to sum things up - MORE SCIENCE! Especially because you know, what are you talking about.
Good job, hope to see updates soon.
P.S. Sorry for my english, it's not my native language.

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