People keep disliking my story. I dont know why. If you don't like my story, please leave some kind of way to improve in the future. I plan for this story to be long and maybe I can improve my writing style more and more along the way. I just hope this place isn't like deviant art where people post comments like "wow, you are such a virgin" just for Lols. I like to think I am a nice guy, so please be nice to me.

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