Writing and cupcakes...

People keep disliking my story. I dont know why. If you don't like my story, please leave some kind of way to improve in the future. I plan for this story to be long and maybe I can improve my writing style more and more along the way. I just hope this place isn't like deviant art where people post comments like "wow, you are such a virgin" just for Lols. I like to think I am a nice guy, so please be nice to me.

So to make this an accual blog post I am going to review a story! A famous story that we all know..... Cupcakes..... Yea soooooo the reason my OC s a colt is because I am a baby on the inside. This includes being scared easy. -blushes- I got to the part where she was peeling her skin off and had to take a break... I took a lot of breaks durring this thing. I slept with a nightlight that night. But the story was good over all^^ I would not read it again, but I suggest it to every pony^^ except pinkiepie... I don't think she would very much enjoy it.