New Chapter! · 12:04am Feb 17th, 2014
New chapter of Harmony Arisen is out, that is all.
New chapter of Harmony Arisen is out, that is all.
I recently made several edits to spread out chapter length in earlier chapters and increase continuity among the story. However, my laptop crashed as I was in the process of uploading the edits. For this reason, they temporarily were out of order. The problem is fixed, but there still may be errors present. The worst one was an extension I had forgotten that I downloaded called "cloud to butt". Because of that, I accidentally ended up replacing all instances of "cloud" to "butt". This has been
I have uploaded the alterations and revisions to Harmony Arisen. They are as follows:
Chapter 1: A small scene developing Trixie's character towards the end of her walk with Siegfried.
Chapter 2: Changed Time Turner's entrance and reason for being there. Scenes that transition to Chapter 3. A small scene with Twilight waiting by the train and of Rarity, Time Turner, and Pencil Pusher boarding an airship.
I know that it's been a while since my last story update. I've been working on my other story and toiling away at Morrowind, so I've lost some time. Fortunately, I have been working on it this week and should have it up at some point this weekend.
List of noteworthy changes.
Chapter 1: Altered beginning scene and the scenes with Twilight. Changed scene with Trixie. Added more scenes and dialogue to Rarity's part. Added a new scene with Trixie at the end.
Chapter 2: Added scene with Diamond Tiara. Explains more events regarding Solaria.
Chapter 4: Added scene with Diamond Tiara. Shows how Solaria is dealing with the war.
Chapter 6: Added scene with Diamond Tiara. Shows Solarian reaction to new alliance.
As of today, I'm beginning to write revisions for the first few chapters of Harmony Arisen. I feel that they could be improved and I am trying to flesh out the characters more as well as provided more insight to the world around them. I plan on uploading all the revised chapters at once when I'm ready.