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  • 536 weeks
    New Chapter!

    New chapter of Harmony Arisen is out, that is all.

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  • 536 weeks
    Edits and Upcoming Chapter Release

    I recently made several edits to spread out chapter length in earlier chapters and increase continuity among the story. However, my laptop crashed as I was in the process of uploading the edits. For this reason, they temporarily were out of order. The problem is fixed, but there still may be errors present. The worst one was an extension I had forgotten that I downloaded called "cloud to butt".

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  • 548 weeks
    Harmony Arisen Overhaul

    I have uploaded the alterations and revisions to Harmony Arisen. They are as follows:
    Chapter 1: A small scene developing Trixie's character towards the end of her walk with Siegfried.

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  • 561 weeks
    Next Harmony Arisen Update

    I know that it's been a while since my last story update. I've been working on my other story and toiling away at Morrowind, so I've lost some time. Fortunately, I have been working on it this week and should have it up at some point this weekend.

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  • 563 weeks
    Noteworthy Changes

    List of noteworthy changes.

    Chapter 1: Altered beginning scene and the scenes with Twilight. Changed scene with Trixie. Added more scenes and dialogue to Rarity's part. Added a new scene with Trixie at the end.
    Chapter 2: Added scene with Diamond Tiara. Explains more events regarding Solaria.
    Chapter 4: Added scene with Diamond Tiara. Shows how Solaria is dealing with the war.

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Nov
23rd
2013

Harmony Arisen Overhaul · 7:04am Nov 23rd, 2013

I have uploaded the alterations and revisions to Harmony Arisen. They are as follows:
Chapter 1: A small scene developing Trixie's character towards the end of her walk with Siegfried.
Chapter 2: Changed Time Turner's entrance and reason for being there. Scenes that transition to Chapter 3. A small scene with Twilight waiting by the train and of Rarity, Time Turner, and Pencil Pusher boarding an airship.
Chapter 3: By the far, the most drastic revision. Applejack's scene is entirely rewritten, but still ends with Pinkie's introduction. Twilight's is the same for the most part, aside from trimming some unnecessary portions. Rarity's scene was entirely rewritten as well and places her in the center of the battle.
Chapter 4: Rewrote the section involving Twilight and Star Dust's time at the camp, as to flesh out their personalities.
Across Chapters: Big Macintosh is much more secretive than earlier versions as to match his show counterpart. Twilight and the others know very little about him.

I've been away from writing due to school, but do intend to publish chapters with regularity again, now that I'm finished with revising that bit. A special thanks to ambion for being awesome and giving very helpful advice and constructive criticism on my writing.

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