Harmony Arisen Overhaul · 7:04am Nov 23rd, 2013
I have uploaded the alterations and revisions to Harmony Arisen. They are as follows:
Chapter 1: A small scene developing Trixie's character towards the end of her walk with Siegfried.
Chapter 2: Changed Time Turner's entrance and reason for being there. Scenes that transition to Chapter 3. A small scene with Twilight waiting by the train and of Rarity, Time Turner, and Pencil Pusher boarding an airship.
Chapter 3: By the far, the most drastic revision. Applejack's scene is entirely rewritten, but still ends with Pinkie's introduction. Twilight's is the same for the most part, aside from trimming some unnecessary portions. Rarity's scene was entirely rewritten as well and places her in the center of the battle.
Chapter 4: Rewrote the section involving Twilight and Star Dust's time at the camp, as to flesh out their personalities.
Across Chapters: Big Macintosh is much more secretive than earlier versions as to match his show counterpart. Twilight and the others know very little about him.
I've been away from writing due to school, but do intend to publish chapters with regularity again, now that I'm finished with revising that bit. A special thanks to ambion for being awesome and giving very helpful advice and constructive criticism on my writing.