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CreatersMistake


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Quiet, distant, confused, alone. These are only a fraction of the locked up personality of Brightcloud, a pegasis living in the peaceful town of Ponyville. He dosent speak much or really socialize with anypony. Just sort of keeps to himself and his routine. it was the same every day. and he liked it this way. But something about this seemingly normal day hd something not so normal behind it. Something about it was different, but he couldnt figure out what. So he just decides to move on with his day, thinking its only his imagination. His imagination..........that was all too real.

READ: This is my first fanfic and really the first real story i've ever tried to write so i will present the prologe for now to get some feed back on weither i should continue with the story or stop now and start over. The prologe is from a third person view, the chapters after that will be from a first person view. Constructive criticism is appreciated and always welcome.

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