OOOOOOK……. I hear you ….. wow…. I think that the only useful bit I got came from Javy Jared…. but I thank everyone for their honesty and opinion and will be taking another crack at this story. I am determined to make this work, but perhaps I should have gotten the backstory done first. I had planned on introducing it into the next chapter but I can see it has allowed for a lot of confusion. So, like I said, try try again.

So I kinda fell off the edge of the earth for a while… but I'm baaaaaack and I finally published the first chapter for Urimara <3 yay!

Hey guys, I'm finally settled down with school and my crazy situation with my 4 jobs and I am going to start writing. Yay!!!!! I'm going to be working on a story concerning my OC. Some nice background history involved with Celestia and Luna. Hope you guys like it. :-D